Use this photo as a prompt...What is going through Jesus's mind when he looks down upon our earth that makes his precious eyes well up with tears??? Dig deep I want some thought going into this and with today's world and all the attrocities occurring, there should be vast amount of catagories to write on.Here are the rules: No profanity at all, no erotica at all, no bashing Jesus at all or you will be DISQUAIFIED!!!...Oh yeah, if you know me you know I LOVE rhyme so chances of winning are much better if you have AMAZING rhymes!!! Good Luck Everyone!!!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 8, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 175, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: Thanks to everyone who entered my contest!!! All entries were heartfelt and could convey the thoughts of Jesus as he looks down upon our earth. Congrats to all the winners and all entrants every entry was just amazing!!! Hpe to see you all in my next contest now running called "AMerica Land That I loVe" See you there!!!~~Toni~~
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Who knows the mind of Christ?• Commented on by judge.
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Through our eyes he watches and today he surely cries for the babies abused and the families briken and our young where religeon is denie• Commented on by judge.
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I see the tear running down his face,by islekine 13 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 21 7:16 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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The earth is a thunderstorm of evil,
there is much murder and hate,by Poetess12 20 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 21 9:36 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
As Jesus cries
Tears fall from his mighty Face• Commented on by judge. -
Fathomless pain ambushed my body yet I was still.• Commented on by judge.
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Jesus sees the pope surrounded by a crowd
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My darling daughter,
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By power unfathomed
He stirs the deepby davidbetzer 48 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 17 5:48 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There once was a time, when innocence covered me,
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Look me in the eyes and ask:
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He looks upon his fathers work to cry tears of despair.• Commented on by judge.
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A world within his loveby tainfinite 28 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 7 11:08 AM 2008. In Spiritual• Commented on by judge.
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by alandriel1138 44 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 7 6:07 PM 2008. In Spiritual• Commented on by judge.
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He sees the blood we shed
The tears that flowby Angel Crest 18 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 7 7:50 PM 2008. In Sad• Commented on by judge. -
Our souls are all connected; separate we are not. As we lie asleep in God, our dreams create th• Commented on by judge.
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oo i hope i can come up with something for this! i've already got ideas bouncing in my head XD
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I hope you can too, when I look at this picture It makes me have tears to know I haven't done what God has created me to do to help win souls into his kingdom....look forwar to your entry....Thanks!!!
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what a wonderful idea Toni!! I can see many things in His eyes..maybe I might be able to write about it...time permitting!!
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I don't think Jesus cries when he looks on the world. After all, there are many more amazing things happening than negatice things.
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nice turn out
I am glad you did not end your contest earlier
yub have more entries and you will get more points for conrest -
this was good
you got me to write about another topic -
congrats all
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