This is really very very simple I want you to "capture my heart and enslave my soul" please do not use this line...It's teh best thing I've come up with resently and I plan on working with it...
Rules:
1. "Capture my heart and enslave my soul" Yes the prompt is a rule
2. Put AP name in AN
3. Follow all site rules
4. No bashing
Please note
I'm not going to be this nice prissy little girl when I comment...I want some thing so deep I can drown in it...if your poems not it I'm going to tell you sorry...I may be brutal...depends on my mood at the time..but I'm not evil...I will be civil no matter what...but if you're one of those people who can't stand some one saying something other than your poem is perfect...this is not the contest for you I'm sorry....I don't care what your poems about, but like I said so deep I can drown in it...I do not care about style, or formatting...or [in this contest only] any of the poetry elements TyPe LiKe ThIs If YoU WaNt...I don't care...just make sure I can read it....The best thing to do is to make me relate with the poem, make me feel what it's about...I don't care how you do it, just do it...and I will allow Pre Writes the last day so bookmark and come back if you wish to enter a Prewrite...and put [It's the rythem of two hearts beating pounding out a message steady and true talk to me baby tell me what you're feeling I know what love is what's it to you] in AN to prove you read all of this...
Blessed Be
Dhrace
Rules:
1. "Capture my heart and enslave my soul" Yes the prompt is a rule
2. Put AP name in AN
3. Follow all site rules
4. No bashing
Please note
I'm not going to be this nice prissy little girl when I comment...I want some thing so deep I can drown in it...if your poems not it I'm going to tell you sorry...I may be brutal...depends on my mood at the time..but I'm not evil...I will be civil no matter what...but if you're one of those people who can't stand some one saying something other than your poem is perfect...this is not the contest for you I'm sorry....I don't care what your poems about, but like I said so deep I can drown in it...I do not care about style, or formatting...or [in this contest only] any of the poetry elements TyPe LiKe ThIs If YoU WaNt...I don't care...just make sure I can read it....The best thing to do is to make me relate with the poem, make me feel what it's about...I don't care how you do it, just do it...and I will allow Pre Writes the last day so bookmark and come back if you wish to enter a Prewrite...and put [It's the rythem of two hearts beating pounding out a message steady and true talk to me baby tell me what you're feeling I know what love is what's it to you] in AN to prove you read all of this...
Blessed Be
Dhrace
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 30, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 800, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100
- Final notes: Congrats to all
Contest Winners
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I wrote this poem a while back. Someone commented, Iclicked the link, and I was profoundly moved. This is for the broken hearted.by The Rainbows Mind 60 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 27 5:41 PM. In love, sad, sickness, dedication, tragedy, thoughts, emotional
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I have watched my loved ones
Walk away in reckless stupors,by TwoFacedPsycho 52 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 20 4:24 PM 2008. In Dark, Life, Other
Silver trophy winner
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The rubber room of blankets.
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Have I reached that point.
That point of breaking..by BitterSweetDreamer18 19 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 19 11:37 PM 2008. In Dark, Life, Personal, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. -
Standing at the railing My fate is in my handsby melody-sings 38 lines, on Jul 2 2:59 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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can i ask you a question? can i ask you for this?by watercolour horizon 40 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 3 1:08 AM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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HI
Hi sorry I would enter but I'm not very good at deep drowning out poems So I'll just say good luck,
Nessa -
This sounds like a fun contest.
I wish I could write deep poems!!
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i have to agree, that line is absolutely fantastic. i am excited to see what you come up with from it. viyanna rosemarie
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hmmmm
i'll see if i can come up with something. i can write deep poems but i'm not sure if it's the right kind of "deep". good idea for a contest though; very to the point and simple. have fun with the judging.
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