I want something rich in words.... something that would make me shed tears...I want emotions, your thoughts, your best poem... I want to be able to feel how you feel.
This is about you loving someone who could not have your child because he or she was unfritle.........It happens.. in fact right now i'm in that type of realationship. She might be unable to have children but for the fact of the matter... I want to be able to feel the words on the page like water from a rain cloud.. your absoulte best poem about that situration....it's not easy so take your time...give it thought...
RULES...
1) NO BASHING PEOPLES POETRY...It's there thoughts not yours respect it!!
2) NOne oF tHis POeMS I wAnt To bE aBLe to ReAd your Ideas and ExpReSsiON...
3) Keep AN OPEN MIND.... As will I when I judge
4) THE POEM HAS TO BE ABOUT THE SUBJECT... other than that i don't count off on spelling or grammer or rythm as long as i know what you are expression everything is fine by me
I HOPE YOU ENJOY THIS CONTEST AS I WILL JUDGE AND COMMENT ON EVERY POEM...THERE IS ONLY 35 INTERIES ALLOWED SO MAKE SURE YOU SUBMIT BEFORE IT'S FULL...
HAVE FUN
- YOUR JUDGE
Stephen Zogal
A.k.a... Dragontuba
This is about you loving someone who could not have your child because he or she was unfritle.........It happens.. in fact right now i'm in that type of realationship. She might be unable to have children but for the fact of the matter... I want to be able to feel the words on the page like water from a rain cloud.. your absoulte best poem about that situration....it's not easy so take your time...give it thought...
RULES...
1) NO BASHING PEOPLES POETRY...It's there thoughts not yours respect it!!
2) NOne oF tHis POeMS I wAnt To bE aBLe to ReAd your Ideas and ExpReSsiON...
3) Keep AN OPEN MIND.... As will I when I judge
4) THE POEM HAS TO BE ABOUT THE SUBJECT... other than that i don't count off on spelling or grammer or rythm as long as i know what you are expression everything is fine by me
I HOPE YOU ENJOY THIS CONTEST AS I WILL JUDGE AND COMMENT ON EVERY POEM...THERE IS ONLY 35 INTERIES ALLOWED SO MAKE SURE YOU SUBMIT BEFORE IT'S FULL...
HAVE FUN
- YOUR JUDGE
Stephen Zogal
A.k.a... Dragontuba
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 5, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: I want to thank everyone for writting...each poem touched my heart and gave me emotions to remember...having children is hard for us..and even though we wanted to be doesn't mean it will happen...hope is all we have...
Your Judge and Friend
Stephen Zogal
Contest Winners
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unrocked cradles
unsung songsby Storm-Goddess 28 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 19 10:26 PM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Thoughts
Silver trophy winner
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He had a hundred heartbeats stuck inside his throat,
eyes devouring words upon the paper that she wrote.by jamiedoring 36 lines, 23 comments, on Dec 14 10:50 AM 2007. In pain, miscarriage, infertility, suicide, angst
Bronze trophy winner
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [11]
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no tears to wipe from tiny eyes• Commented on by judge.
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Longing and searching for that small bond That little thing that turns your life aroundby NickelleteXninja 18 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 18 4:50 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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"You can't have a child" He says.• Commented on by judge.
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Mesmerised by your childlike beauty
Tiny hand that touches mine• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Tender wounds on soulless spirit Constant bruising day after day• Commented on by judge.
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"you was" is grammatically incorrect. It should be "you were"
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I would enter this if only I could word my emotions well enough, I shall try today sometime as I think this is a great idea
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I can't have children...
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