Lately, I've been having this one feeling. I am in need of a good cry, but it just won't come out. I want help from you dear poets on here to help me with this.
Just please, don't make this like a short story type thing
No TyPiNg LiKe ThIs, its just annoying!
I might add more prizes if I get more points, or if I feel like others deserve something. I am usually generous, so... we'll see what happens.
Please write something sad, I want my tears to actually fall while reading your piece. They could be tears of Joy, even though that has never happened to me before, or it can be sad. I don't cry when I laugh too hard, so that is out of the option.
Please help me cry!
*tear* 
Please, no prewrites right now, since I would rather have fresh writes. If you remind me like 2-3 days before this closes, I MIGHT open it to prewrites, but i'm not guaranteeing anything.
I WILL comment on each of the entries, but only when I judge, that way I can judge them all at the same time and stuff...
Just please, don't make this like a short story type thing
No TyPiNg LiKe ThIs, its just annoying!
I might add more prizes if I get more points, or if I feel like others deserve something. I am usually generous, so... we'll see what happens.
Please write something sad, I want my tears to actually fall while reading your piece. They could be tears of Joy, even though that has never happened to me before, or it can be sad. I don't cry when I laugh too hard, so that is out of the option.
Please help me cry!
*tear* Please, no prewrites right now, since I would rather have fresh writes. If you remind me like 2-3 days before this closes, I MIGHT open it to prewrites, but i'm not guaranteeing anything.
I WILL comment on each of the entries, but only when I judge, that way I can judge them all at the same time and stuff...
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 1, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: I am very pleased with the entries I received. All of your poems had sadness in them, but only the ones who I gave trophies to actually made me have tears in my eyes.
Thank you all for entering, I enjoyed reading each and every one of your poems.
Contest Winners
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When I was a little girl
I had a best friend,• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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She stood beside the icy river and threw the little girl she was in,• Commented on by judge.
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Why, Cindy, did you have to end your life and deprive me of• Commented on by judge.
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She suffocates with misery, Can't take what she feel's within,by tazialauren555 32 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 30 11:38 AM 2008. In Sad, My own style, Death, Lost in thought, Sadness, Depression, Suicide, Angry• Commented on by judge.
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everyone is ugly so inadequateby zorko52 18 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 30 1:06 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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You won't allow prewrites. I don't want it in the contest, but, I know a poem that will make you cry. My cousin's baby was born and died yesterday-
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4345901
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