So it is raining and storming a lot outside. I'm not quite sure if it is the rain, my own dreary circumstances, or a mixture of the two but i have acquired a cynical, lonely, sad nature to my mood tonight so i would like to hear some sad(ish) poems. You can write about anything you want really (i just ask for no lovey dovey poems at the moment, sorry but i am not in the frame of mind to hear about how happy you are to be coupled, later when i get my positive self back i will hold a love contest but this is not the place for it)
Rules:
1. No weird typing
2. avoid excessive slang
3. If you want to submit multiple poems feel free, however i do not want poems that aer Very Very simular or about the same exact things.
Have fun ! Good luck!
Rules:
1. No weird typing
2. avoid excessive slang
3. If you want to submit multiple poems feel free, however i do not want poems that aer Very Very simular or about the same exact things.
Have fun ! Good luck!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 21, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 4 people
- Final notes: Thank you for participating in the contest. Im very sorry for how long it took me to judge this contest. However all the enteries were incredible so the decision was difficult. Congratulations to the winners and best of luck next time to everyone else.
Contest Winners
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The brilliant flashes of lightening
streaking across the stormy plainsby IrishGypsyRose 14 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 22 3:35 PM 2008. In Nature, Thoughts
Bronze trophy winner
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Endless waterfalls Through cracks of a• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3510364, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [90]
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I know its an everlasting flame As I watch you walk away• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A lone tear falls off her face / While her partner screams in rage / Bruised and beaten she is all alone / He leaves her drowning in her own blood / Her blank eyes, glossy, watch him exit the room / Leaving her ther• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Soil trickles through my fingers;
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Slowly ceasing
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Angel of darkness is hiding in the corner.• Commented on by judge.
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Mom, why did you have to leave me so soon? We had so much planned for the
future. Now I'm without a mother physically. You left a mother wby K-GyaL 75 lines, 13 comments, on Jun 11 4:56 PM 2008. In Goodbyes, Life, Death, Personal., Family, Dedication, My own style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Trickling down the side panel, hitting the base• Commented on by judge.
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I always say the bset time to cry is when it's raining or when you get caught in the rain. No one can tell the pain and sadness you feel or• Commented on by judge.
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The rain dripping down my window reminds me of the tears streaming down you face• Commented on by judge.
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See the boy?
See this child?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Stars blocked out by cold gray night,
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life has those blue days, always try to see the sun.by Blooming Poet 21 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 14 9:05 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Nothing But No 22 lines, 16 comments, on Jun 14 7:21 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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All smiles and laughs trying to make someone's day• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She used to sit on the comforting chair,
in autumn, under the treeby Seshat Kitty 26 lines, 12 comments, on Mar 13 11:51 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The one I hold most dear to me
Need not be far from my heart.by BluRosePoet8488 60 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 14 11:05 PM 2008. In Love, Life, Sad, Thoughts, Pain, Depression, Lost hope, Longing• Commented on by judge. -
I innocently watch you observe me without hesitation
Your guileless words and a deceptive touch has conquered infatuationby innocence jaded.xx 22 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 8 11:43 PM 2008. In Complications, Personal, Thoughts, Hurt• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Lady Ireland 21 lines, 27 comments, on Sep 23 4:50 PM 2007
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You came with
a torrent of rageby Lady Ireland 7 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 14 10:04 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She took the apathy and opened her chest.by rude pedestrian 07 11 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 3 3:18 PM 2008. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I am so tired of always being alone,
It seems I am going to die an old maid.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I look at me and say you love me
And you say you're sorry for what you did• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Cena-of-Destiny 70 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 17 5:14 PM 2008. In Sad, Pain, Death, Sadness, Depression, Personal., Suicide• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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What have I been thinking?
Why is it I walk through puddles during the rain?by AudreyEvans 30 lines, 26 comments, on Apr 7 4:47 AM 2008. In Sexual Sensum, Contemporary, Life, Living, Thoughts, Self Finding, Beauty, Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It doesn't matter
what road we decide to travel on.by AudreyEvans 6 lines, 12 comments, on Apr 11 3:12 AM 2008. In Sexual Sensum, Contemporary, Life, Personal, Thoughts, Wisdom, Truth• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
This regret.
Hear my shame.by AudreyEvans 9 lines, 12 comments, on Mar 17 1:28 AM 2008. In Sexual Sensum, Contemporary, Love, Regret, Pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Looking up at all the stars,
I believe there to be.by AudreyEvans 33 lines, 19 comments, on Apr 7 5:14 PM 2008. In Sexual Sensum, Contemporary, Beauty, Life, Thoughts, Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I see now how hard this can get. I look out and I know,by AudreyEvans 14 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 7 10:09 AM 2008. In Sexual Sensum, Contemporary, love, Yearning, Starting Over• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Looking out the window
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She grabs the knife from under her pillow.
SLAM!• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Paralyzed, paralyzed
Mentally unstableby Trent plus pen 45 lines, 15 comments, on Feb 22 7:22 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Regurgitated and spat back out,
Dribble down your cold moist lips.by Trent plus pen 32 lines, 22 comments, on Sep 3 2:39 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
tragically a young girl with her
whole life ahead of her
could wish for nothing but a deathby babygirl2582 27 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 1 5:56 AM 2007. In Dark, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Teenage thinking
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Sitting on that pirate ship Surrounded by friends and family• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Like a small child after a parent I run to catch up• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She walks, hands at her sides, with lips tight togetherby Darker-star 31 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 3 12:18 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Plastic mask shudders
a soft sigh singingby sassykitty 11 lines, 6 comments, on May 25 6:03 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I used to feel your presence In the song of the mockingbird outsideby after-silence 51 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 2 10:37 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Every moment of every day Let me feel the pain of life.by after-silence 38 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 2 10:53 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She sits on his bed, looking around,by Silly Rabbit. 6 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 19 1:57 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Colour me grey, end it today.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Hello entrants of "rain"
As you may have noticed i have extended the judging day. Also i have added more points and honourable mentions to the contest. All the poems i have recieved so far have been wonderful and it will be hard to pick the winners. If you have submitted a poem to me and i havent commented please send me a message as i must has missed it. Thank you
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OK> As Requested
On page two, there are at least eleven poems that have not been viewed by judge. 7-15-08.
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All the entries were wonderful and it is taking me a bit to judge this contest because of the quality. Thank you all for sharing your works with me. I will be finished judging soon. Also if i have viewed your poem and have not commented on it please let me know.
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Congratulations to all the winners!
~Donna~
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