Raw Emotion

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on June 27, 2008
• Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100
• Final notes:
  Everyone did an amazing job with this contest! And almost everybody met the criteria! Good job!!! It was definitely difficult to pick the winners. There are so many good pieces out there!!! So I just want to say thank you to everybody! And congrats to the finalists!! You guys did an amazing job
  
  The One and Only...
  
  ~Lynn Jones

Contest Winners

1. Sugary MoonLight

   Crystal moon-light, Casting down sugar-tasting iridescent diamonds…

   by OctoberCrush 44 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 10 5:16 PM 2008. In Love, Life
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
2. Sweet Mary

   How can I thank a woman...
   that gave it all
   

   by Endeavor 16 lines, 21 comments, on Jun 11 9:29 PM 2008. In Personal, Pain, Spiritual, Love
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
3. a mothers love

   i know that you saw me
   the day you took your first step

   by earthangel33 53 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 10 10:01 AM 2008

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [26]

• Emotionally GONE

  Torn apart.. blown up heart.. Hair is falling out.. Silent screaming shouting..

  by jackreed3 13 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 10 10:49 AM 2008. In Life, Love, Sad, Pain, Personal, Abuse, Contest

  • Commented on by judge.
• Lost, Alone, and Broken

  I am lost in this place that we call life looking desperately for something to hold onto

  by IrishGypsyRose 9 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 10 11:15 AM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Life, Thoughts, Contest

  • Commented on by judge.
• Shadows

  by Cerulean Sunrise 9 lines, 13 comments, on Jun 10 12:20 PM 2008. In Contest, Sad

  • Commented on by judge.
• Writing Releases

  A veil has been tossed
  I am engulfed by the shadows.

  by PassionsPromise 54 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 10 10:20 PM 2008. In Angst, Pain, Sad, Personal

  • Commented on by judge.
• Clearance Rubbish

  Emptiness fills this cell
  draining once affections

  by luna-midnight 28 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 10 1:08 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge.
• You're Gone

  This pain is immense, it’s killing me
  I’m fading inside; your face I can’t see

  by first forgotten 11 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 10 1:41 PM 2008. In Life, Love, Personal

  • Commented on by judge.
• Nothingness

  Nothing, I say, no light so bright can tame, The darkness within me grows everyday

  by desiredpain 41 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 10 1:50 PM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Pain

  • Commented on by judge.
• Falling Deeper

  Pain, Darkness All hell coming through

  by God is my reality 47 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 10 2:28 PM 2008. In Pain, Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• I'm standing in the Middle

  by Faded Existence 23 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 10 3:53 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge.
• Trials & Tribulations

  Bless me, Father for I have sinned.
  I have tried my best to walk in the path of the righteous,

  by Da-Lyricologist 68 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 11 12:57 PM 2008. In Dark, Hope, Pain

  • Commented on by judge.
• A Nation Rocked To Sleep

  Have you ever heard the sound of a mother screaming for her son?
  The torrentialrains of a mother'sweeping will never be done

  by bloodpoetry 24 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 11 5:16 PM 2008. In Personal

  • Commented on by judge.
• Going, Going, Gone

  by Whispered Secrets 29 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 12 12:19 PM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Thoughts, Past, Life, Love

  • Commented on by judge.
• disowned and alone

  My soul so smeared
  My Mind incorrect

  by Angel of Diamonds 33 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 13 11:20 AM 2008. In pain, disowned, past

  • Commented on by judge.
• I propose….

  That which burns in me intense

  by subah 25 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 14 11:56 AM 2008

  • Commented on by judge.
• Emotion-less

  Hovering with too much uncertainty, This time is slipping right through my hands.

  by lastlapse 13 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 18 3:34 AM 2008

  • Commented on by judge.
• Emotion.

  My swirling world, Spinning around me,

  by pancake 19 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 20 5:23 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge.
• I Am Completely Fictional

  Your lungs were my coffin Making me nauseous

  by DarkFairy1 28 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 23 1:48 AM 2008. In Personal

  • Commented on by judge.
• My Agony

  Open arms are holding back,
  They hold back my feelings,

  by boris42 3 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 23 7:33 AM 2008. In Hope, Life, Love, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Contest

  • Commented on by judge.
• Baby Breath

  by Catie Sheeran 63 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 23 8:02 PM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Pain

  • Commented on by judge.
• Seventh Period Chemistry

  There she sat In the middle row of class

  by Improv Machinery 127 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 23 8:29 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge.
• Gone

  You see the beautiful rose, standing tall in the garden of Eve.

  by feelingforgotten 10 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 23 10:28 PM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Pain

  • Commented on by judge.
• Words

  It's hard to do anything besides frown upon When the hopes and dreams you were countin on

  by dh205 59 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 24 1:28 AM 2008. In Thoughts, Life

  • Commented on by judge.

Comments

• By me, right now

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• 
  Riftkin
  June 27, 2008
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  Thank you for hosting this contest.
  Congrats to the winners,
  
  Thank you for the Bronze.
  
  Riftkin
• 
  Endeavor
  June 27, 2008
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  Hello Lynn

  
  Very nice contest
  Loved your choises, the Gold was truly beautiful
  
  I thank you for the Silver
  
  Rick

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