War and Peace
So much talk of hurt and pain
or wars we use for personal gain
People give lives but its never mentioned
only hate has taken our attention
How can we talk of peace
but only see all this grief?
We vow to give and help each other
momments come and then we shudder
We want to look better for each other
but never look in the eyes of those who hunger
So we hold our head high and let people die
instead of holding out our hand cause it hurts our pride
We pass the blame from side to side
and watch some more of our troops die
We look for people with a solution
never to see its in our constitution
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4283009
Based off this poem I wrote please write a poem explaining a way to bring peace to the world
RULES
#1 Please limit two poems per person
#2 Please do not use this to advertise your political opinion on who should be President next
#3 Use StiCKy CapS if it gets your point across better but please dont do it just because
#4 NO cursing the contest doesnt call for it
So much talk of hurt and pain
or wars we use for personal gain
People give lives but its never mentioned
only hate has taken our attention
How can we talk of peace
but only see all this grief?
We vow to give and help each other
momments come and then we shudder
We want to look better for each other
but never look in the eyes of those who hunger
So we hold our head high and let people die
instead of holding out our hand cause it hurts our pride
We pass the blame from side to side
and watch some more of our troops die
We look for people with a solution
never to see its in our constitution
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4283009
Based off this poem I wrote please write a poem explaining a way to bring peace to the world
RULES
#1 Please limit two poems per person
#2 Please do not use this to advertise your political opinion on who should be President next
#3 Use StiCKy CapS if it gets your point across better but please dont do it just because
#4 NO cursing the contest doesnt call for it
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 16, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 75, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: Thank you all so much for entering into my first contest I had so much fun doing it.
I loved how no two poems were the same but it made it hard when I had to decide.
See you all on my next contest THANKS, Kayla
Contest Winners
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life on earth could be such fun
a world of peaceby judmc 18 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 17 3:31 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
We have to put one thing first;by islekine 26 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 9 3:06 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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