Write me a poem about Paradise City.
What is your Paradise?
Make sure all poems are in the right category.
Site Rules Apply
Try and keep it under 30 lines but I'll allow more if needed.
Please make all text readable.
For good music while doing the poem listen to :
http://youtube.com/watch?v=NqTuN-35580&feature=related
Guns and Roses -
Paradise City
Prewrites are allowed but they must be with the prompt.
Good luck and have fun.
I sometimes view things before I comment but I always comment right before judging.
Prizes may or may not increase.
Background Thanks To Maatkara
I'll close this when I get a good amount of quality/mature poetry.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 10, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Thank you all for your poems. Each poem was great and I had a blast with this contest. The first one won gold because of the important message it holds within. I encourage you all to read it.
The second won Silver because of the stunning imagery.
The third won bronze because it says some of the same things that I've thought of before.
Prizes didn't increase due to lack of enteries
But I do appreciate all of the ones that did particapte. Thanks
Contest Winners
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I used to think of Paradise as standing on a beach
With coconuts as big as soccer balls in a palms just out of reachby Cyber Artist 17 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 22 8:08 PM 2005. In Nature, Love, Hope
Gold trophy winner
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by Lavender Butterfly 21 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 7 8:13 PM 2008. In Nature, Other, Thoughts
Silver trophy winner
• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
If I were god the earth I would creat
Would be of peace and love and free from hate• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [8]
1 - 8 of 8
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A cunning linguist
Your smooth tongue dangles seductive words• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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