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The Inner Circle [2] - Invite Only

 

 

 

The following people are invited. No more, no less. If anyone else enters, you'll be deleted and blocked.

 

 

- Amera  -  Fug-Azi  -  Naridill  -  Puking Faerie Dust  -  OurxBeginning  -  neblina  -  Melissa Gayle  -  luna-midnight  -  trista  -  She Has My Heart  -  NickN  -  xGentleWiccanCharx  -  GreenHrtPaleMoon  -  blackday  -  Celtic Soul  -  Friday  -  DesoletELifE  -  Lve in Vain  -  Cerulean Sunrise  -  Tangled Angle  -  Melted Dawn  -  LRMS  -   Dienush  -   Phineas Red

 

[if I've crossed you out, it means you've entered]

 

 

 

 

First up, the rules -

mwuahahahahahahahaha!

 

*ahem*

 

 

Rules:

  • You may not, under any circumstances, cause my beloved death by mentioning a god or a higher power. That'll just kill me.
  • I'd love if you could avoid a love poem. [I know, I know, I'm always saying that!] But if you seriously, and utterly, and completely have to, otherwise this 4-headed eye will come and choke your fingernails [gosh, I'm mad] then make this tasty. You could always kill the boy in the poem and I'll be happy [joke].
  • If you have to go potty for more than 3 weeks. Let me know so I don't wait too much and hold everyone back.
  • Most of you already know, I'm pretty lenient with time. But this time, I don't want it to go more than 3 weeks, because I don't like judging in planes. And I don't want to judge in my personal mental asylum, thank you very much.
  • Do not unintentionally bash anyone.
  • No length restrictions. I like long tasty poems, I like short tasty poems. Most of all, I think you guys are tasty anyway [*cough*]
  • Ahh, who am I kidding, I just want to have 7 rules because I like that number, but you guys already know what the core of the rules are and what not and so on and blah blah blah.

 

Ps: I read all entries after the contest is over.

 

 

 

 

haha, I know you guys have been waiting for this. Some of you think you're going to collab with the person you chose, some of you think you're going to give a prompt to the person you chose, and some people probably think this is a face-off against the person you chose [don't lie, tyler - I know you're thinking just that]

 

 

But I shall get to the point.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The person you chose is the one who will give you your prompt.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So here are your prompts. Scroll down and look for your name. Ahh ... no groaning! In a sort of indirect, funky way, you pretty much chose your own prompt.

 

 

Prompts:

 


Amera
chose: DesoletELifE
Darkened Bark

 


Fug-Azi
chose: LRMS
"I like ideas about the breaking away or overthrowing of established order…. It seems to me to be the road toward freedom-external revolt is a way to bring about internal freedom. Rather than starting inside, I start outside-reach the mental through the physical."
- James D. Morrison

 


Naridill [Sulfane]
chose: neblina
cold feet guy.

 

 

Puking Faerie Dust
chose: OurxBeginning
"I live in the world of reality, you comfort yourself with lies".
- AFI [From song: Let it Be Broke]

 


OurxBeginning
chose: Naridill
“Years go by will I still be waiting for somebody else to understand... sometimes I hear my voice and it's been here, silent all these years...”
- Tori Amos

 


neblina [esha]
chose: Phineas Red
"People are always blaming their circumstances for what they are. I don't believe in circumstances. The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for the circumstances they want, and, if they can't find them, make them." - Miss Vivie Warren

 


Melissa Gayle
chose: NickN
Self Destruction

 


luna-midnight
chose: Char
"And I dont want the world to see me
cause I don't think they'd understand
when everything's meant to be broken
I just want you to know who I am"

- Goo Goo Dolls [from song: Iris]

 


trista
chose: Fug-azi
"It would be incredible if we could
Retrace all the times that we lived here
All the collisions
Wasted, I've never been so wasted
I've never been this far out before"

- Lyrics, Author not disclosed on purpose.


She Has My Heart
chose: Friday
"Till human voices wake us, and we drown"
- T S Eliot

 


NickN
chose: Lve in Vain

"Misery no longer loves company, it insists on it"

- Russel Baker
 

 

xGentleWiccanCharx
chose: Melted Dawn
Picture: Victorian Maidens

 


GreenHrtPaleMoon
chose: Dienush
Picture: Shadows

 


blackday
chose: GreenHrtPaleMoon
"Heartstrings on the harp of desire"

 


Celtic Soul
chose: Cerulean Sunrise
Oral Discoveries

 


Friday
chose: Puking Faerie Dust
"Underneath her skin and jewelry,
hidden in her words and eyes
is a wall that's cold and ugly
and she's scared as hell.
Trembling at the thought of feeling.
Wide awake and keeping distance.
Nothing seems to penetrate her.
She's scared as hell.

I am frightened too.

Wide awake
and keeping distance from my soul.
I am scared like you."

- Cold and Ugly by Tool

 


DesoletELifE
chose: luna-midnight
Picture: The Dead Point
  

 

 

Lve in Vain
chose: Celtic Soul
"Death.... An unwelcome friend I have become accustomed to."
- Justin
 

 

Cerulean Sunrise
chose: She Has My Heart
"Good intentions won't save you this time"

 


Tangled Angle
chose: Melissa Gayle
"december's knocking at howling trees"

 


Melted Dawn
chose: Tangled Angle
ironing

 


LRMS
chose: Amera
Picture: From One Painting to Another

 

 


Dienush
chose: blackday
Picture: Saying


 

 

Phineas Red
chose: trista
"Feelings, to me, are very fleeting and can change quickly...which is why I believe in treating "love" as more than that. As an action, something we "do" instead of "feel", it is constant, steady...and we can choose to make it never ending."
-
Julie R.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Mwuahahahahahahahahaha!

If you have any questions, litter beneath.

If you want the rules, look above!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good Luck~!

You'll need it ;)

If you dare say you don't need my luck...

I will...

 

 

*cies*

 

 

Haha, but seriously,

you guys are amazing

and are like the spiders to my web.

Icky little spiders, that is.

ps: why ARE you reading this?!

You must be as bored as me.

poor you.

No.

No poor me.

I made this contest in my free time.

So I could give you guys a heart attack.

I hope.

byebye!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 2, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 450, Bronze: 300, Honorable mention: 11 people
  • Final notes:



    1. I'm not too happy that out of 24 people, only 14 entered. Moreso, when I asked before making the contest. And so, thank you to all who did bother to enter.

    2. Gold and Silver were at a tie.

    3. Everyone gave excellent quality poems, and so all have recieved some prize.

    4. I'm not feeling too well, so my comments were short. But none of them false.

    5. Finalists are not in order.

    6. I will not be doing invite contests for a long time. I'm not upset, just disappointed. And I can't be bothered extending anymore when people don't answer, let alone tell me they cannot make it.

    7. Thanks

    - Chandni x.

Contest Winners

  1. by Exodus 54 lines, 18 comments, on Jun 20 8:14 AM 2008
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. We shall while away the hours
    in broken showers
    by Death of the Author 93 lines, 23 comments, on Jun 30 5:14 PM 2008
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. december’s breath reeks of ice:
    sideways snowfall
    by Tangled Angle 32 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 22 7:47 PM 2008. In personal
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4345807, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. You may subdue
    under covers of laded morass,
    by Fug-azi 34 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 13 1:36 PM 2008. In Society, Contest
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. by Age of Rain 30 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 7 10:38 AM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4356101, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  8. by DesolatELifE 13 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 14 1:34 PM 2008. In Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4332255, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  10. by luna-midnight 30 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 16 6:31 AM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  11. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4330223, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  12. by Cerulean Sunrise 15 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 17 1:57 PM 2008. In Contest
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • Death of the Author
    June 5, 2008
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    GOD!


  • luna-midnight gold member
    June 5, 2008
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    hmmm heart attack...normally equals hospital..and if im luck death *coughs* yep sounds great
    see ya in my grave.


  • Fug-azi
    June 5, 2008
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    For a change I actually like my quote


    • Never Fall in Love
      June 5, 2008
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      There was a time when you didn't?


      • Fug-azi
        June 5, 2008
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        Usually most of the time


        • Never Fall in Love
          June 5, 2008
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          You should let me know then!

          • Fug-azi
            June 5, 2008
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            no way, that would be unfair .. if I enter a contest and the host is giving out prompts i have a choice, enter and accept the quote given or don't enter.

            anyway it helps me inprove my scope of writing (hopefully)


  • Tangled Angle
    June 5, 2008
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    haha - you know me too well

    it would have been a heck of a challenge going up against Melissa though in a face off. :]

    I absolutely love the prompt!


  • Puking Faerie Dust gold member
    June 5, 2008
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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 5, 2008
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    W00t!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

    hehehe


  • Amera gold member
    June 5, 2008
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    cute


  • Dienush
    June 5, 2008
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    Interesting


  • Empathy Reborn
    June 5, 2008
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    weeeee!!!


  • Exodus gold member
    June 5, 2008
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    ... bitch


    Just kidding, I love Tool and I love the prompt.


    Good luck to George, I didn't think anyone but me was going to have to write on that prompt


    • Never Fall in Love
      June 5, 2008
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      lol!

      • Exodus gold member
        June 5, 2008
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        You're meeeeean.


        I have to finish my assignment tonight.
        I don't even go to school anymore but I have assignments!


        • Never Fall in Love
          June 5, 2008
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          but but but ...
          you don't have to do this tonight O.o
          you have two weeks

          • Exodus gold member
            June 5, 2008
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            I know.
            If I don't write within a week just poke me with something blunt.

            I made the mistake of bringing my book with me to work. But I can't read it 'til lunch, even though I'm sitting here doing nothing.


            • Never Fall in Love
              June 5, 2008
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              lol - It's okay. I hve about half an hour to waste and nothing to do. Well, I lie. Nothing I feel like doing

              • Exodus gold member
                June 5, 2008
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                *is doing my assignment on work time*


                *volunteered for lifeline*

                Haha clinically depressed person on a suicide prevention hotline. This is going to be interesting.


  • Lrms
    June 5, 2008
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    are you joking? i got a picture. nowwwww i see what you were getting at earlier haha! couldnt you have rigged it at least a little bit?


  • Darkened Seraph
    June 5, 2008
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    DEVIL, this looks like it will be a great read, goodluck guys

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    June 5, 2008
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    I have seen but will really read tomorrow!


  • Ink4Blood
    June 5, 2008
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    Chandni....you know what I could do with that prompt? And damn near everything I could do with it is....*ahem* not "G' Rated.


    • Never Fall in Love
      June 6, 2008
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      Oh, there are many things that could be done with that..
      Ps: I don't like erotica/sensual


  • trista gold member
    June 5, 2008
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    I'm here.
    And another PO contest will open tomorrow sometime, I do believe. Don't forget to read all the rules in that, although I know there are more than 7.


    ~J.


  • blackday
    June 5, 2008
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    Yeah, yeah. I saw it, but I feel Tyler's prompt is sooo inspiring.

    "Ironing"

    Yessss. Haha :]


    • Tangled Angle
      June 6, 2008
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      haha - i'm sure chelsea would happily trade prompts with you then. [if 'ironing' is even a prompt]


      • Never Fall in Love
        June 6, 2008
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        lol - there's no exchanging


        • blackday
          June 6, 2008
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          Well, I'd like to know how to not write a love poem with Marty's prompt.

          • Never Fall in Love
            June 6, 2008
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            Well, darling
            you're our judge in project poetry - you're supposed to be god-like in poems and stuff. Let's see you prove it


          • Age of Rain
            June 7, 2008
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            You could TOTALLY write about music. Or body parts, or just lust in general. She didn't necessarily say sex was out of the question did she? Or did I miss that part? *laughs*


  • layla.
    June 6, 2008
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    i knew you were planning this!

  • Age of Rain
    June 6, 2008
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    Hahaha, thanks for the AMAZING pic, Dienush! And...DEITY! Just because I wanted to break your first rule and still be politically correct


  • February Moon gold member
    June 6, 2008
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    Just as a note, I don't like the little boy we all call Tyler anymore. *Grumbles*

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    June 12, 2008
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    can i do prose for this?


  • DesolatELifE
    June 13, 2008
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    Oh how bloody appropriate


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    June 14, 2008
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    *note to self...must kill chelsea for the picture*


  • Dienush
    June 14, 2008
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    My picture has been deleted from photobucket


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 20, 2008
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    Mines done.


  • Naridill gold member
    June 22, 2008
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    Done.












    x

  • Death of the Author
    June 29, 2008
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    I know you're probably pissed at me. I'm pretty pissed too.

    But...

    In English we are transforming texts from one style to another and my teacher recommended I read The Love Song Of J Alfred Prufrock. When I got to the very last line I thought...hey...that's familiar. And it is my quote.

    Sorry to disappoint you. I am as much in myself, no doubt

  • Exodus gold member
    July 3, 2008
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    *blinks* Wow.
    I really didn't expect ANYTHING for this one.
    Thank you, and I'm sorry more people didn't enter for you

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