Soft skin
what is it for you
and
what does it make you think of?
NO FREE VERSE!
Yes, you are on my page and yet...
I want Triolets this time, simple or extended
Use the refrains well
Give me good rhymes
Plain background or soft border please
Enjoy
Mari
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 9, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 200, Bronze: 150, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: Thanks for the soft entries.
I enjoyed reading all of them.
Mari
Contest Winners
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Entries [4]
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your voice sounds like soft skin
when you say things about himby butterflywriter 11 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 4 5:47 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
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I will be so bad at this...it'll be like a car crash...it's be horrific but you'll just have to look to see how bad.
I like the topic, I could work with that in some odd way...hopefully in triolet form...if not I'll just tell some knock knock jokes.
Losing is so much fun...preparing myself for the obvious.
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Now you know the guideline
just grab your pen
and write verses that rhyme
now that you know the guideline
when you ready, give me a sign
if something not right, try again
now you know the guideline
just grab your pen
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That is cute! Now I know what a triolet is! Am in the middle of writing one...well, I think one with nine parts actually, lol.
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In preparation...
Knock Knock!
Who's there?
Woo.
Woo, who?
Don't get so excited, it's just a joke. -
Wow~
You come up with the most Creative contests I tell You
I will see what I can do~
Oy!
I don't believe I have tried this type of Poetry before...my brain cells today are few but may give it a whirl~
Best wishes with this Beautiful!!



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I know that your few brain cells are more than most people have

You like rhymes, I expect you here
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Mari...I love triolets and I have not written to a form in so long...i love this idea


hopefully, my muse will return soon, lol...although, my house has never been so clean...LOL. -
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Ah, hands in water, right?

I know the feeling, when verses are absent, floor and cupboards are usually clean
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For anyone who'd like to try a triolet, here is a place to start:
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Lovely contest theme!!!
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Wow, gold, thank you! I think this is just the second gold Yem has won in about 2 years.
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Thank you Mari-
for hosting a great contest taking care to give us a beautiful inspiration in triolet form, for your wonderful and thoughtful comments and the honor of the Silver Cup...h







