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Darkness.....whatever...as dark as you can make it PW allowed

Okay so i am in the mood to read something extremely dark and depressing. I like "emoetry" as i call it and love detail. I want something dark that expresses pain well. I love blood and guts. I do not care the subject as long as it is dark.... Anything....suicide.....abuse......cutting...whatever

Rules
1. Must contain at least 2 lines (it is not many but i am picky)
2. No bashing the "emo" culture or calling them stupid.
3. If i unenter your poem it is because it sucked or wasn't what i was looking for.
4. I alone hold the power to expell people from the contest.
5. Please don't enter crappy stuff.
6. Do NOT enter a prewritten if it has won a trophy. You already know it is good so thats all.


I will comment every entry. This is a pretty simple contest so rock with it.
I know the points are weird ammounts.... that is what i wanted to do so i did it.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 2, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 303, Silver: 32, Bronze: 31, Honorable mention: 4 people
  • Final notes:
    Hey all.... sorry this has taken such a ridiculous ammount of time to judge. I would have definately done it much earlier but I got raped and ended up in a psychiatric hospital. It sucked pretty hardcore. I though all of the top poems deserved an award so i added honorable mentions to the trophy table. Just wanted to give credit where credit was due. This is my first night out of the hospital and they added a couple new meds so I have the attention span of a goldfish which sucks. I read the top poem and loved it but i have no energy to read the rest so all of the points were almost the same so bronze and honorable are all on the same plate as far as I am concerned. I am sorry about the late and faulty judging, but I couldn't help it. Well best wishes to all....
    Peace.
    Cassie

Contest Winners

  1. Suicide For The Teenage Soul
    Thoughtless words,
    Worthless self,
    by Jessi-desensytized 90 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 4 7:32 AM 2008
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4306911, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  3. pitch black
    As the soul reaches the pinnacle of suffering and the heart stares aimless, looking for where to go
    by lonestranger 20 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 6 12:05 PM 2008
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Goodbye and Bad luck.
    It wasn't like this before, Now I'm sitting,
    by EarlySunsets 40 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 8 12:30 AM 2008. In sad emo dark pain, Anger, Depression, Sadness, Suicide, Teen issues
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Behold the Beautiful Wooden Box
    Behold the beautiful wooden box
    Within it, is a faded suicide note
    by DarkLotus4Life. 35 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 13 5:27 PM 2008. In Love, Sad, Dark, Emo, Death, Suicide, Escape, Lost in thought
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4319693, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  7. her IMPULSES, not designed to HURT (but to BLEED)
    slitting her safety in half.
    Slicing through the space between insane and insecure
    by Candy Morphine 80 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 4 6:04 AM 2008. In Dark, Pain, Sad, Anger, Lost love, Depression, Sadness, Death, Emo, Abuse
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • lyrebird
    June 4, 2008
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    I have a couple of PW which haven't won any trophies.

    http://allpoetry.com/poem/3432100
    http://allpoetry.com/poem/3431896

    I'm trying to write something new, but if I can't, is it okay to enter one of the poems above?

    Jojo ♥


    • XXxXBassMeisterxXxX
      June 4, 2008
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      hey ya i would have no problem. just copy paste and enter into the contest with whatever title you please and dlete it from ur lis of poems.


  • Play-A-War
    June 4, 2008
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    Hey...

    Erm i have a fair few PW which are emo ect. So i was woundering if i can enter one maybe none have trophy's, havent been on the site that long. If not i will try and find sometime to write a new one.

    kirsty <3

    • XXxXBassMeisterxXxX
      June 4, 2008
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      hey ya i would have no problem. just copy paste and enter into the contest with whatever title you please and dlete it from ur lis of poems.