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Well I just won this contest:
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2407615
With this poem:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4284325

10 poets
23 words


Prompt:
Heartbroken Betrayal
(My best friend fluffyspanda9 helped me with the prompt, since it is her feelings right now)

Make it excellent, and have lots of imagery, and other poetic devices.

You all know the rules

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on June 2, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 150, Honorable mention: 1 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you all for your wonderful entries, but their were some that didn't quite follow the rules. Even though that was the case, those who did that did produce excellent poems, and I really wish I would have gotten 10 entries But the winners were the one's fluffyspanda9 and I thought were the best, and they are as followed:


    Gold~Haunted Heart(it really spoke to both of us and was outstanding..everyone really should read it!)
    Silver~Frozen(just simply wonderful)
    Bronze~Still Waiting(My friends favorite due to the emotions present)
    HM~Roses(My personal favorite, beautifully mastered)


    Thank you all for entering, and see you in my next contest!

    on!
    V

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4288713, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. Frozen
    Icy winds of deception sweep away
    by KayJay 11 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 1 12:05 AM 2008. In Sad, Love, Pain
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Still waiting
    you told me you would..
    you left me and you didn't
    by SoulfulBubbles 8 lines, 6 comments, on May 31 3:55 PM 2008. In Love, Pain, Contest
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Roses
    He gave bouquets of rosy vows,
    by penman 9 lines, 5 comments, on May 31 8:40 PM 2008. In Other
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [8]

1 - 8 of 8
  • Betrayal
    Down in the dumpe, heartbroken
    by the way you did betray
    by Billbard 3 lines, 1 comment, on May 31 3:20 PM 2008. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The dagger
    Whispers on the phone, in the next room' intimate laugh, I thought was ours only.
    by Rovingone 5 lines, 3 comments, on May 31 5:33 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge.
  • and excels ----------------
    Know the trend of Saturn. behaving odd
    by Purush 5 lines, 1 comment, on May 31 6:55 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Forever....?
    It was something that was supposed to be Forever
    by Rosser 40 lines, 1 comment, on May 31 11:07 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • Rosser
    May 31, 2008
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    This sounds cool!