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15/10 PIF (prompt up)

hello everyone
i won gold in maralisa's contest
with this bad poem http://allpoetry.com/poem/4255746

so im here to play it forwed
the prompt is ashen teardrops

15 peaple
10 lines
gold winner play it forard
have fun!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on June 12, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    these were all so amazeing
    thankyou all for entering
    gold please pif if you have the chance but i wll not make you

Contest Winners

  1. Ashen's Teardrops...
    softly he dreams
    of a life so sweet...
    by Xx Emo Teddy xX 24 lines, 19 comments, on Jun 11 12:16 PM 2008. In Sad, Thoughts, Heartbreak
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. In The Grey
    Breaking away,as the shadows close in,
    Singing a lulling tone,my soul sleeps as
    by Angelflower 9 lines, 16 comments, on May 29 3:44 AM 2008. In Dark, Contest, Thoughts, Personal, Other
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4277965, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  4. Battlefield Of Glory
    by Emberess 5 lines, 8 comments, on May 29 10:07 AM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Attention Please!!
    You slashed my life apart,
    and broke the soul into a void.
    by SuicidalLover 18 lines, 3 comments, on May 29 4:22 PM 2008. In Sad, Society, Thoughts, Dark, Life, Love
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. two words
    So I ask you, you have but two words to say to the whole world.
    by RockSteady 11 lines, 8 comments, on May 29 10:58 AM 2008. In Life, Society, Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. Laundry
    Fire of her heart's inferno left smoldering in disillusion,
    by penman 11 lines, 3 comments, on May 29 10:11 AM 2008. In Other
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. tearful memories
    crying doesn't hurt so much
    since the tears don't show
    by carole21 9 lines, 4 comments, on May 29 9:47 AM 2008. In Pif
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. Flaming Despair
    I waited so long in the torrential rain.
    by x--nocturnia--x 25 lines, 3 comments, on May 29 6:05 AM 2008. In Contest, Dark, Sad, Angry
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  10. Burnt Out
    I'm fading faster as today ends, A nothingness you present with your spineless words,
    by Georgia La Mariposa 9 lines, 5 comments, on May 29 5:21 AM 2008. In Contest, Dark, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  11. Sarajevo 1992
    It was 1992 in war-torn Sarajevo
    Where smoke and ruins had replaced my home.
    by Xianaria 10 lines, 82 comments, on Sep 11 5:38 PM 2008. In Contest, War, Sadness, My own style
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  12. Ashen teardrops
    Ashen teardrops
    Surround my face
    by BabyGurlz 22 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 11 3:51 PM 2008. In Angst
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  13. Storm
    by fullfathomfive 10 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 11 6:02 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  14. The sound of tears
    His tears falling they pitter pater on the ground Not knowing were to go but he is sure he is not homeward bound
    by bobby3332321 23 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 11 10:40 PM 2008. In sad
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • Angelflower
    May 29, 2008
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    It better not be hard!!!! Lol.


  • Angelflower
    May 29, 2008
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    How long will this be up hun? might send this out..lol.


  • warrior-eagle
    May 29, 2008
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    STOP calling your poetry bad!


  • Angelflower
    June 12, 2008
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    Thanks for the silver hun..


  • SuicidalLover
    June 12, 2008
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    Thanks for the HM hun. Congrats to the winners.

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