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can you feel me still



10 poets

10 lines more or less



Prompt ~ I may not be able to dry your tears anymore, but we'll always be standing beneath the same sky...


take it where you will and pen me magic and brilliance.

This prompt means a lot to me as I am moving far away in a couple of months time and my beautiful daughter will stay behind because of her work and friends and she has a wonderful life here now. I will miss her so so much.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 28, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 60, Bronze: 40, Honorable mention: 1 people
  • Final notes:
    wow oh wow, thanks for the good cry, your poems all touched me deeply and I shall cherish them. If you get a chance, read gold and silver. The depth of each just blew me to pieces and I'm crying still... x LB

Contest Winners

  1. The Last Cry on Hades (Guilty)
    by Kyo-N 11 lines, 2 comments, on May 27 11:49 PM 2008. In Loss, Lost love, Longing, Dedication, Weird, Contest
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4274155, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4274107, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  4. Where There Is Thought
    by In Too Deep1 20 lines, 5 comments, on May 27 11:12 PM 2008. In Life, Lost in thought, My life, Friendship, Sadness, Goodbyes, Family, Love
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • Leila
    May 27, 2008
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    That prompt made me want to burst into tears...
    x


  • mysticstorm gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    What a beautiful prompt...best to you both, for you shall always be in each others hearts...


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    I know that feeling.


  • divebar
    May 27, 2008
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    i really want to. but my brain is dead.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    Ohhh.. lovely! I wish I could write something beautiful
    But I'll enjoy reading the entries!


  • perfectsunset gold member
    May 28, 2008
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    A beautiful contest you held once again & congrats to all winners


  • iverbthenoun
    May 28, 2008
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    thanks for silver and congrats to all the winners.

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