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Before The Apple...

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What did Adam and Eve do BEFORE
the fateful bite? 

What did they talk about?

What did they think and feel?

Did they even like each other?


I would like:

Free Verse
Edited work
Plain background
Poetry labeled appropriately



I will not comment on any work submitted. 
I have my reasons, but be assured each poem
will be read and judged fairly.


I DO NOT like cliche, mushy, or vague poetry.
I DO LIKE creative thinking


Have a good time...

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on June 3, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 150
  • Final notes:
    I apologize for closing this contest early, but due to a mountain of work, I have to. Now, this was an interesting collection of poetry. I laughed, I pondered, I raised my eyebrows...Each poem is a jewel in its own right. I am so happy you all entered. You should be proud of your work, because I am. My congrats to the winners, and Russell, you did everything right Love, Lane

Contest Winners

  1. Motivations
    by breedluv 25 lines, 8 comments, on May 26 7:09 PM 2008. In humor, thoughts, society
    Gold trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  2. picnic
    - you know, he said,
    lying back with his head in her lap
    by pastiche 42 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 1 8:10 PM 2008. In Contest, Life, Thoughts
    Silver trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  3. Blocked in Eden
    by PerVirtuous 19 lines, 4 comments, on May 26 8:16 AM 2008. In Spiritual, Fantasy, Adult
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  4. ~ The Truth ~
    by JohnnyD 61 lines, 5 comments, on May 27 6:45 PM 2008. In My own style, Humour, Contest, Nature, Adult
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  5. [untitled]
    by Mairi bheag 43 lines, 6 comments, on May 26 11:21 AM 2008. In Spiritual, Thoughts, Free Verse
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  6. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4267909, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    May 25, 2008
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    well why not ms Lane, I mean sheesh, we write we want comments...ok i really could care less..just wanted to stir it up in this busy room..



    Passions

  • Cinnarry gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    looks like eve had a mighty good time cuz adam looks like he has 2 cocks. go eve!


  • Danny Beatty gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    you dont like mushy?!!! but but i only write mushy and and no vague ...? ... ... ah i know what i will write ... a poem about my first model airplane i made with the cute girl across the street ... ... it was so cooeeel!!!


  • Balldinger silver member
    June 2, 2008
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    in the big inning....

    What did Adam and Eve do BEFORE the fateful bite? they crammed apples down snake throats using tonsil ticklers and rhino prods.

    What did they talk about? baseball

    What did they think and feel? who had to think then when everything was taken care of. wasn't it paradise? didn't everything feel good?

    Did they even like each other? what was not to like? they were naked in a perfect garden...

    please, don't consider this a comment, or answers to your questions.