ok well im really into dark poetry.
metaphors are great and i love imagery.
i dont mind long poems but try and keep it under 150lines please.
i prefer freeform, but rhyming is fine.
i dont really mind what you right about.
this is my first contest so not many rules.
no erotica or anything like that (not interested)
i tend to lead toward subjects of:
depression
suicide
cutting
unrequited love....
etc...
please no blissfully happy stuff...it kinda pains me to read it.
but it can be bittersweet.
umm not sure what else to write...
so yeah if you could just stick to dark, emo poetry, that would rock!
metaphors are great and i love imagery.
i dont mind long poems but try and keep it under 150lines please.
i prefer freeform, but rhyming is fine.
i dont really mind what you right about.
this is my first contest so not many rules.
no erotica or anything like that (not interested)
i tend to lead toward subjects of:
depression
suicide
cutting
unrequited love....
etc...
please no blissfully happy stuff...it kinda pains me to read it.
but it can be bittersweet.
umm not sure what else to write...
so yeah if you could just stick to dark, emo poetry, that would rock!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 11, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: ok,
so for my first contest i was really happy with the poems!!
chosing was so much harder then i would have expected. im extremely sorry for the lack of prizes. when i have more points i'll definatly make another contest.
so thanks for entering!
and well done to the finalists
Contest Winners
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x♥x♥x♥x♥xby SarahEatsAirplane 125 lines, 9 comments, on May 26 5:09 PM 2008. In Emo, Pain, Dark, Sad, Life, Personal, Dirty pretty, Thoughts, Depression, Angst
Gold trophy winner
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If you looked at her wrists youd see the love If you looked at her legs youd see the pain• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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elegantly synchronized lies
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Her [love-me-always] eyelashes
scrip.scrape.scratchedby LearningHow2Smile 47 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 13 12:44 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I know this looks bad. i 'm NOT suicidal. I just had a REALLy bad day.by the evil angel 16 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 28 12:50 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It is better to end my life than to let friendship have an end.by kyrkx 18 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 29 5:38 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The ghost of her innocence walks alone Down the path of lost love.by reeseXtheXsoldier 10 lines, 4 comments, on May 23 10:34 PM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Lost love, Photo Inspired, Contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Comb the hair from your face
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It hurts like no other pain,
Then I come to realize it never did torn me apart,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Inside I already died
Because my whole life has crumbled,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm curious, I lay down,by AbandonedAngel 27 lines, 7 comments, on May 8 10:12 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My life was leading through its usual ways.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The shadows dark upon the wall Blood stains from the hours before• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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that spot inbetween where you can almostby MMGerard323 45 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 25 2:34 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Everytime she wakes, her worst nightmare begins.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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blood flowing through the vain, blood spilling from the wristsby XBrittniX 15 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 22 10:31 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I can barely feel the rain as it beats over my face,
the drops of wetness mingle with my cold, angry tears.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
One last whispered "I love you"
As my last heart beat stopped• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The cold sky above me is crying
To meet my last day, one more story is over.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The pain wont subside / Its not fading away / I'm missing you more / Than I did yesterday / You're not breathing ... I'm still here / I would've tried harder / I could've said more / I should've knock• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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swallow this confused dagger, a drifting lullaby.
this heartache i tear to kill me inside.• Commented on by judge. -
My mind is always racing, never slowing down...by sunflowers21573 19 lines, 26 comments, on Nov 9 2:23 PM 2007. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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in the night i sleep content, / and when i wake i breath sweet death, / but in my eyes i see my pride, / slipping through cracks along the line, / what have i done to deserve my life, / why am i living in this wordl• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Sitting in this cell- I know it's made of my own thoughtsby Livingemptyspaces 25 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 5 7:45 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Can you feel the pain radiate from me?
Caused by heartbreak and missery.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I know I'll never see her again
And I'll leave this world bleeding and broken• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
It is so easy, To stop life’s rhythm.by Chocoholic156 51 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 13 9:14 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The rusty crimson razor, will only go so deep, Tormenting me in my wake, taunting me in my sleep.by XXCrimsonRaineXX 7 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 21 4:03 PM 2008. In personal, sad, angst, society, heartbreak, losing friends• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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im soo sorry.I made a mistake and deleted the poem i entered! sorry for the inconvience

