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Let me see your HEART.

Loads of options. So I am hoping for something exceptionally fabulous.

Make me cry.
Make me cringe.
Make me hurt.
Make me enraged.

OPTIONS:
Write about--

+ unrequited love.

+ anger (with a friend, parents, boys, etc).

+ the feeling of isolation from everyone[don't belong].

+ eating disorders.

+ something dark/depressing.

+ longing for something[you decide].

+ confusion w/ others. feeling not good enough.

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RULES:

:: I want to see your heart in this piece.

HOWEVER!!! I don't want to be flooded with suicidal poems. Make it real. And not cliche.

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NOTE:

~ If you've got an AWESOME pre-write that you so know I will like-- ENTER IT!
--if you're not sure, write a new one!

~ I am more likely to give a trophy to a poem that hasn't won an award.

*optional*
~ If you really want to know the type of poetry I go for-- take a look at mine. I love the feedback.

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Have fun! Thanks ALL!!!!
I will critique each one.




Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 25, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 80, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    All of the entries were beautiful. It took me a long while to judge. Thank you all!

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4255003, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. I don't know how to start, I guess I'll begin with my heart,
    by Darkest Lover 46 lines, 3 comments, on May 21 7:41 PM 2008. In Abuse, Pain, Sad, Anger, Dark, Life, Lost Love
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Now I've realized
    How cruel my life is
    by LoveDeprived 62 lines, 5 comments, on May 5 9:16 AM 2008
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Every time she spoke, she cast a web around her
    she couldn't see clearly; to her everything was a blur
    by Heavenly Angel 19 lines, 15 comments, on May 8 1:20 PM 2008. In Dark, Hurt, Lies
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4252865, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  6. by wonderbandalice 17 lines, 3 comments, on May 17 7:40 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4255707, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  8. stars are shitty company. contest poem, mhm.
    by sharptooth 19 lines, 3 comments, on May 21 10:41 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. I'd love to be the feather,
    floating on the summer breeze.
    by Griswold 23 lines, 4 comments, on May 21 11:44 PM 2008. In Contest, Sad, Life, Thoughts, Pain
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • Clinging-to-Life
    May 21, 2008
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    im not to sure what you are looking for...but I entered a piece you just might enjoy. I hope you do, anyway.


  • LittleBee
    May 21, 2008
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    I entered "Closing the Door"

    I think this is close to what you're looking for. Its about my split with my ex-fiancee.


  • Midnight-Engaged
    May 21, 2008
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    Umm....i have quite a few pieces. I don't know which to enter.....how many entries are we allowed? I'll enter regardless, (I already did, one).


  • VerminVomit
    May 25, 2008
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    YAY MY FIRST GOLD


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 27, 2008
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    Thank you for the honorable mention and congratulations to all the winners

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