cry me a river

Lost Love
still loving one that is gone after breaking your heart
getting over one that broke your heart
12 lines MAX
no bashing or trashing
no names
no cursing
no all caps
no funny type

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on May 20, 2008
Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
Final notes:
again all were good and i had to just make the choice of five but all deserved mention

thanks for entering and i hope to read more of you all and hope you liked the contest.

blessings form the old cat himself..........

Contest Winners

love for the dead

i try to get through the day
but i always end up in tears

by blood-for-ink 12 lines, 3 comments, on May 15 6:38 PM 2008
Gold trophy winner

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Knowing it's over

Standing invisibly, a specter unwitnessed, as witness to she who was my heart, in so many guises of splendid feminine beauty, as she falls

by Rovingone 9 lines, 5 comments, on May 17 11:58 AM 2008. In Pain, Sad
Silver trophy winner

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I miss you x

by Leila 13 lines, 15 comments, on May 13 9:47 PM 2008
Bronze trophy winner

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Slow Death

To die a slow death... Love betrayed

by darlintlc 8 lines, 10 comments, on May 16 1:36 AM 2008. In contest, pain, dark, personal
Honorable mention

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losing the one you love

leavin someone behind, someone that is loved,

by oringinaltwinny 11 lines, 4 comments, on May 17 12:02 PM 2008. In pain personal love

• Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [13]

1 - 13 of 13

Love Eviction

Love Eviction
By: The Red Cat Jazz of Love

by theredcatjazzoflove 32 lines, 48 comments, on May 19 10:46 PM 2008. In Love, Heart Break, Thoughts, Background, Agony, Neo Soul Poetry

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Broken love

Had to get a knife and cut off my wrist
With so much bitterness,

by Rele anmwe 21 lines, 15 comments, on Oct 30 3:38 PM 2007

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Yearning For You

Heartache runs throughout me
like an ocean it fills my veins

by Jeremy0826 12 lines, 3 comments, on May 17 12:42 PM 2008. In Contest, Thoughts, Sad, Hope, Life, Love

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Indigo

by MuffinTree 13 lines, 4 comments, on May 17 1:49 PM 2008. In Love

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Far away love

He looks at me But does not really see me

by madilin101 16 lines, 7 comments, on May 3 7:50 PM 2008

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Nothing

Staring blankly into the dark, Nothing left converges into nothing at all

by TortureKitty 9 lines, 5 comments, on May 17 3:30 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Personal, Life, Sad, Dark, Pain, Longing, Lost in thought, Sadness, Loss

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missing

by swanridur 14 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 10 8:10 AM 2007. In Love, Pain, Sad, Freeverse

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Stupid Me

I lost my thoughts yesterday,
I tripped on them today.

by VanGoghNights 9 lines, 15 comments, on May 17 5:10 PM 2008. In Angst, Love, Pain, Sad

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theredcatjazzoflove
May 17, 2008
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if its not 12 lines delete it my a** didnt count it i was excited
StarEyes
May 17, 2008
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Can I reserve a spot in this one? What a wonderful idea for a contest!
wingsofgold25
May 17, 2008
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(18 lines) This is realy a good idea for a contest
I have one with 28 lines that would realy fit this
oh well Good Luck with your contest.