Haha Lol well last night i was trying to write one poem and couldn't think of anything to go along with these little stanza's I had so well I put them all together lmao. As I was reading it over and over i had this stupid Gilligan's Island Tune running through my head as I read.
Here's the poem see if you can feel out the tune...
Silly Goofy Sleepy Write
All is silent except for train
and occasional passerby
whistling in the night
a tune of days gone bye...
Thoughts are running in my mind
as I take a breath of fresh air
will I ever become
a rich millionaire...
Leaves Leaves in the breeze
flutter down to the ground
one by one they all fall down
not even making a sound...
Pies Pies smell those Pies
sitting on a window sill
I ask can I take a bite
and all I get is a sour reply...
Kitty Cat Kitty Cat
Why are you so fat
why don't you get off your butt
and go catch some rats...
I think it's time to take a nap
can't you tell from all this crap
I don't know where this came from
So see you all in the morning.
Here is the theme song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-CfJ32Tva44
Anyway What I want is for you to write a poem and I'll see if I can guess the song that you are trying to mimic tune wise. Poem can be about anything as long as you mark appropriately.
You don't have to write about the song you choose just make it so that the tone of the poem when you read aloud sounds like the song.
Also please post the song for me to listen to as I read so i can hear the tune in my head, You'll all no what I mean it's hard to explain. If you don't know how to copy and paste the song link you can just give me the title of the song and artist and I can look it up
Something Challenging for you all hehe
PS I will raise points .
Here's the poem see if you can feel out the tune...
Silly Goofy Sleepy Write
All is silent except for train
and occasional passerby
whistling in the night
a tune of days gone bye...
Thoughts are running in my mind
as I take a breath of fresh air
will I ever become
a rich millionaire...
Leaves Leaves in the breeze
flutter down to the ground
one by one they all fall down
not even making a sound...
Pies Pies smell those Pies
sitting on a window sill
I ask can I take a bite
and all I get is a sour reply...
Kitty Cat Kitty Cat
Why are you so fat
why don't you get off your butt
and go catch some rats...
I think it's time to take a nap
can't you tell from all this crap
I don't know where this came from
So see you all in the morning.
Here is the theme song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-CfJ32Tva44
Anyway What I want is for you to write a poem and I'll see if I can guess the song that you are trying to mimic tune wise. Poem can be about anything as long as you mark appropriately.
You don't have to write about the song you choose just make it so that the tone of the poem when you read aloud sounds like the song.
Also please post the song for me to listen to as I read so i can hear the tune in my head, You'll all no what I mean it's hard to explain. If you don't know how to copy and paste the song link you can just give me the title of the song and artist and I can look it up
Something Challenging for you all hehe
PS I will raise points .
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- Contest was judged on May 31
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 300, Bronze: 300
- Final notes: Thanks everyone for entering Your poems were Great hugsssss
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Red wing crying in the still of night,
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so we gotta make a parodie of a song
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*looks at his music collection*...where do I start!
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Good Idea!n
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LMao at that song ...
may want to warn your readers its not g lol... haha and yes... Good Idea for a fun contest. -
Haha! I love Gilligan's Island!
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excellent~
Sounds like a cutie
Dunno if I am up for this or not
But hope ya get oodles of entrys
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~
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you hold some challenging contests!
All good lil lady your a star! -
Cara, love this contest. After I read your poem, all I could think of was The Beverly Hillibillies" LOL I am bookmarking this one and will be back. Have a client coming in soon. Love you! XOXO
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What???? No comment on Hot Princess Tonight! LOL
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