Pain You Can't Explain And More

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on May 22, 2008
• Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 99, Honorable mention: 1 people
• Final notes:
  wow. this has been a real bitch to judge. really hard indeed (indubiously) so...good work and congrats to my winners

Contest Winners

1. And Night is Filled with Endless Cries

   NO,NO,NO!!! I begged, I pleaded in a loud scream

   by inhisimage 59 lines, 14 comments, on May 16 10:48 AM 2008. In pain, abuse, rape
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
2. Dance of [self] Destruction

   by Never Fall in Love 40 lines, 34 comments, on Dec 9 8:18 PM 2007. In Personal, Dark
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
3. I Can See it in Your Eyes

   I can observe it in your eyes The way you look at her

   by LullabyxxDreamer 47 lines, 13 comments, on May 7 9:52 PM 2008
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
4. Sorry

   by rude pedestrian 07 71 lines, 2 comments, on May 15 6:15 PM 2008. In Abuse, Personal, Sad
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [46]

• Face Down Flat

  Gone refrained.. mentally untamed.
  Straight jacket.. legs shackled in chain.

  by jackreed3 15 lines, 5 comments, on May 10 9:35 AM 2008. In Abuse, Humor, Weird, Sad, Depression, Escape, Humanity, critical

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Wondering How To Go On

  Did something I shouldn't have
  Said something I shouldn't have

  by liduen 34 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 13 7:23 PM 2008. In Suicide, Pain, Lost love, Thoughts, Life

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Raven

  Everyday a raven tethered I hide from your anger

  by xhowxtragikx 28 lines, 6 comments, on May 2 11:24 PM 2008. In Abuse, Sad, Dark, Pain, Contest, Evanescence, Hello, Other

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• This Girl

  The cuts I have made are deep
  I watch the blood as it begins to seep

  by Leanna-bean 18 lines, 16 comments, on Mar 18 2:07 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• My Pain. My Pleasure

  Pain is my pleasure It's in my blood

  by jeseejoy 32 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 12 11:25 AM 2008. In Dark, Pain, Death, Depression, Emo, Suicide, Depressed

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Crimson Tears

  Droplets of life, shine in the night.

  by Lights Sorrow 14 lines, 4 comments, on May 14 6:50 PM 2008. In Abuse, Dark, Life, Pain, Sad, Thoughts

  • Commented on by judge.
• Sudden Death

  Undefined pain strikes through my soul, taking me deep into Hell’s cruel hole.

  by PonyPride 14 lines, 3 comments, on May 14 5:17 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge.
• Neverending Suicide

  another tribute to the dear life of Stacey

  by Rock-Junkie 30 lines, 28 comments, on May 28 8:39 PM 2007. In Loss, Pain, Personal

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• last letter

  I finally got the cou[rage] to go through with it
  Of course by now youve found me

  by Lonely Christina 9 lines, 15 comments, on Apr 21 7:17 AM 2008. In Thoughts, Pain, Death

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Titleless Trauma

  Fleet swishing denim encasing my limbs
  As I grind through my day

  by ReachingForStars 41 lines, 24 comments, on May 9 9:37 PM 2008. In Pain, My life

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• kissing pumpkin

  an ambrosia of cigarettes and stale liquor a fried debauch covered in a sultry sauce of blazin' heat

  by Anthony Budka 10 lines, 3 comments, on May 12 7:09 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The Pleasure of Pain

  Fingertips edge,
  towards the bone

  by shadow-cry 22 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 4 1:36 PM 2008. In Dark, Pain

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Once

  As I wade through the deep depths of adolescence
  When everything seems so untrue

  by forethought 127 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 5 10:51 PM 2008. In Contest, Love, Personal, Sad, Pain, Thoughts, Life, Angst

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Acid

  Pain trickled like acid through her bones,
  A liquid fire setting to her insides as she fell.

  by Figg 23 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 14 3:18 PM 2007. In Dark, Pain, Angst, Longing, Sadness, Lost love, Loss

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Growing up Old

  Growing up Old:Always on the run,
  never trusting anyone.

  by tally 24 lines, 1 comment, on May 18 1:28 PM 2008. In Dark, Pain

  • Commented on by judge.
• End my Life

  It is better to end my life than to let friendship have an end.

  by kyrkx 18 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 29 5:38 AM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Cause of Death, A Broken Heart

  so i fell for you [you] drop me

  by teaa sarrr 20 lines, 1 comment, on May 14 5:47 PM 2008. In Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts

  • Commented on by judge.
• Please wait

  by Shenton 11 lines, 3 comments, on May 14 6:33 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge.
• Breathe

  by myheartbait 34 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 29 2:07 AM 2008. In Pain, Sad, Emo, Depression

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Dollhouse Darlings.

  Teach me to breathe
  Please,

  by hey charlie 31 lines, 4 comments, on May 14 5:55 PM 2008. In Pain, Angst, Dark, Life, Love

  • Commented on by judge.
• I see Life, I see Beauty!

  by pattywant 36 lines, 2 comments, on May 8 8:25 AM 2008. In Dark, Abuse, Adult, My own style, Love

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Happy To Be Me

  Spirits soar through the sky
  Dreams passing Idly by

  by Shadow Stalker 58 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 15 3:57 AM 2008. In Weird, Thoughts, Personal, Pain, loss

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Past, present, future.

  Yesterday, She was all I had, She kept me grounded when all else went wrong.

  by Danneh 31 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 20 11:25 AM 2008. In Angst, pain, sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• all over

  i wont hear his voice anymore his hands wont hit me again

  by hearts-reflection 16 lines, 2 comments, on May 14 7:00 PM 2008. In suicide

  • Commented on by judge.
• "Broken man"

  Just another day you come home again
  with your eyes saying your in so much pain

  by going to a funeral 91 lines, 13 comments, on Dec 20 1:21 PM 2005. In Dark, Suicide

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• M o n s t e r

  x♥x♥x♥x♥x

  by SarahEatsAirplane 97 lines, 3 comments, on May 18 9:13 PM 2008. In Angst, Weird, Pain, Dark, Sad, Life, Thoughts, Emo, Depression, Escape

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Im Gone

  Life is never good for me and this is what I wish you'd see. Just let me end it all for I'll be happy in the end, I'll finally be free.

  by XBrittniX 40 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 11 10:59 AM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Numb

  A rawness is open within me
  I don't know what to do

  by slippingofftheedge 18 lines, 5 comments, on May 13 10:02 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Pain, Personal, Sad, Contest

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Contradicting Darkness

  The shadows dark upon the wall Blood stains from the hours before

  by ThE-gIrL-iN-bLaCk-- 9 lines, 4 comments, on May 15 10:35 AM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Pain, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Pain Overdose

  I should have died that morning I feel my arm go numb

  by Saya Yakimo 22 lines, 4 comments, on May 16 12:11 AM 2008. In Pain, Suicide

  • Commented on by judge.
• The Destruction of a Soul

  Can anyone tell? Can anyone see?
  Does anyone care what he's done to me?

  by Kathryn Bowden 34 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 26 11:00 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• crypt chick;

  I remember bleeding for you--
  feeling confused;lost

  by Atrophya 65 lines, 1 comment, on May 20 9:20 AM 2008. In dark, pain, personal, memories, thoughts, depression, angst, loss, suicide

  • Commented on by judge.
• Truth Discovered

  I'm curious, I lay down,

  by AbandonedAngel 27 lines, 7 comments, on May 8 10:12 AM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• "You break my heart"

  You diss
  I slit my wrist

  by Mademokid 34 lines, 3 comments, on May 15 11:36 AM 2008. In Sad, Life, Pain

  • Commented on by judge.
• Broken Hearted Angel

  I fell down from the sky that day
  Off my cotton cloud

  by dark cajun shadow 33 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 27 1:34 AM 2008. In love, life, pain, personal, Sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Memories of Pain

  Love is a powerful emotion
  It steals us of our sleep

  by eleni 23 lines, 3 comments, on May 13 4:18 AM 2008. In Pain, Love

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Broken Life

  The trigger comes so close The scars leave her with no fear

  by Play-A-War 23 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 28 2:03 PM 2008. In Pain, Sad, Life, Emo

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The Life Of A Lost Cause

  by miss keara 51 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 28 12:22 AM 2007

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• [ Emptyness replaced by bitterness ]

  Emptyness replaced by bitterness my red heart turned to black

  by Devilish Temptation 40 lines, 2 comments, on May 21 3:25 PM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Spiritual, Thoughts, Weird, Dark, Life, Love, Other, Pain

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• she cries

  And she hides her arm
  Like the feelings that do harm
  

  by xxbrokenxagainxx 94 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 27 5:50 PM 2008. In Pain, Sad, My life, Depression, Sadness, Friendship, Emo

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Without you

  Don't take away your life
  For you'll be taking minez too

  by Emotional-wreck 40 lines, 9 comments, on May 18 5:09 PM 2007. In Dedication, Suicide, Pain

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

Comments

• By me, right now

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  Play-A-War
  May 16, 2008
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  Hey
  
  I'm I allowed to add another poem? Or is it just one poem only?
  
  Ta
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    BlackBloodyRose
    May 16, 2008
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    only 1 sorry
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  Never Fall in Love
  May 22, 2008
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  Thank you for the silver

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