Ok it's my first contest and I want to see what all you guys can do...you enter as many times as you like... I don't care what form, but please note that I want to be able to feel the emotion behind them...acrostics....if you can but emotion behind them ok...but I'm not their biggest fan...If you get what I mean....
Now I know you all hate this part...but I do have a few rules...I'll make it short
.:Rules:.
1. PlEaSe Do NoT WrItE lIkE tHiS...any poem typed in part or in whole like that will be DQ, sorry, but I have eye issues and that messes with them,
2.There is no limit as to how many time you can enter, but remeber this is a privilage, and I can take it away...I am a full time student with all advanded classes and dail up so time is a valueable thing for me...so please use common sense...I can't read every poem you've ever written, sorry...I just can't.
3. Spelling...although My spelling here is very bad it's because of the dail up thing I can't use the spell checker on this window...please spell check if at all possible...miss spelling takes away from the writing.
4.ALL CAPS...if the whole, or major part of your poem is in all caps then it will be DQ...one or two lines is ok...to make them stand out more...but be sensable...eye issues (refer to rule 1)
5.Please label poems correctly, we do have young viewers...
6.Please note that you can only win gold, sivler, bronze or HM...not more than one...yes even for different poems...it's not fair to others if someone enters 3 or 4 fantastic poems [fantastic is only if it brings me to tears...(a very hard thing to do) or so happy that nothing can upset me (almost impossible...and when it does happen its only temporary)] then no one else stands a chance...note that I will comment on all of them if this should happen and rate them in order from 1st on through against one another.
7.(although this should be moved up to number one) please respect me remember I am the one in charge of the points and the tropies...if this makes me a ***** then I am sorry, but i do not deal with disrespect well, I am not a mean person, generally, but if your poem sucks I am going to tell you...and if that causes you to give my comment a bad rating oh well...and if it causes you to pull out of the contest...oh well...I'm sorry but I speak my mind
.: Other Info :.
1. I will comment on my winners...promise....other's...I will comment if/when I have/find time to do so....
2. Please do not ask me if I have viewed your poem yet, the contest page will up date if I have or not
3. Points will go up as soon as I get my results in from the contests I have entered, or get more points some other way...becaues all I have at the moment is 310.....300 for gold and 5 for each silver and bronze
4. HM's depend on my points at the time of judging
5. please note that I do reserve the right to end the contest early...as long as I am getting entries it will stay open...for a max of two months
6. The winners and other who I think deserve an HM (deserve is for if I don't have enough points to award all enough HM's...) will be added to my favorites...
Well I think that cover's everything...but I have a feeling that I forgot something....oh well...if I did and I remeber it I will add it, it will not apply to anyone who entered before I put up the notice...Please remeber I do check dates....
Good Luck To All
oh and yes this is the same as my first comment..but this time...more points....hehehe...so enter please....
~*~An Unwritten Truth~*~
Now I know you all hate this part...but I do have a few rules...I'll make it short
.:Rules:.
1. PlEaSe Do NoT WrItE lIkE tHiS...any poem typed in part or in whole like that will be DQ, sorry, but I have eye issues and that messes with them,
2.There is no limit as to how many time you can enter, but remeber this is a privilage, and I can take it away...I am a full time student with all advanded classes and dail up so time is a valueable thing for me...so please use common sense...I can't read every poem you've ever written, sorry...I just can't.
3. Spelling...although My spelling here is very bad it's because of the dail up thing I can't use the spell checker on this window...please spell check if at all possible...miss spelling takes away from the writing.
4.ALL CAPS...if the whole, or major part of your poem is in all caps then it will be DQ...one or two lines is ok...to make them stand out more...but be sensable...eye issues (refer to rule 1)
5.Please label poems correctly, we do have young viewers...
6.Please note that you can only win gold, sivler, bronze or HM...not more than one...yes even for different poems...it's not fair to others if someone enters 3 or 4 fantastic poems [fantastic is only if it brings me to tears...(a very hard thing to do) or so happy that nothing can upset me (almost impossible...and when it does happen its only temporary)] then no one else stands a chance...note that I will comment on all of them if this should happen and rate them in order from 1st on through against one another.
7.(although this should be moved up to number one) please respect me remember I am the one in charge of the points and the tropies...if this makes me a ***** then I am sorry, but i do not deal with disrespect well, I am not a mean person, generally, but if your poem sucks I am going to tell you...and if that causes you to give my comment a bad rating oh well...and if it causes you to pull out of the contest...oh well...I'm sorry but I speak my mind
.: Other Info :.
1. I will comment on my winners...promise....other's...I will comment if/when I have/find time to do so....
2. Please do not ask me if I have viewed your poem yet, the contest page will up date if I have or not
3. Points will go up as soon as I get my results in from the contests I have entered, or get more points some other way...becaues all I have at the moment is 310.....300 for gold and 5 for each silver and bronze
4. HM's depend on my points at the time of judging
5. please note that I do reserve the right to end the contest early...as long as I am getting entries it will stay open...for a max of two months
6. The winners and other who I think deserve an HM (deserve is for if I don't have enough points to award all enough HM's...) will be added to my favorites...
Well I think that cover's everything...but I have a feeling that I forgot something....oh well...if I did and I remeber it I will add it, it will not apply to anyone who entered before I put up the notice...Please remeber I do check dates....
Good Luck To All
oh and yes this is the same as my first comment..but this time...more points....hehehe...so enter please....
~*~An Unwritten Truth~*~
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 13, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100
- Final notes: Thank you all for entering, I enjoied reading your poems I'm sorry I took so long to judge but Thank you for waiting....
~*~An Unwritten Truth~*~
Contest Winners
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I lay in my bed, / Remembering you. / Before I sleep at night, / I remember you. / When I dream at night, / I dream of you. / Knowing thereby Breaking Inside 140 lines, 28 comments, on Jul 26 9:41 PM 2007. In Sad, Love, Pain
Gold trophy winner
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Look into her eyes.
There is so much to be said.by pappacass 24 lines, 13 comments, on Feb 6 5:53 AM 2008. In Sad, Sadness, Depression, Teen issues, Teenage thinking, Depressed
Silver trophy winner
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I still remember your gaze. Your sweet, handsome face.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Bronze trophy winner
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So blind we are to the pain
Of the families broken
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i looked outside two minutes ago, and i realized something was wrong with the world today,by Cerbie20 24 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 31 1:23 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A vague emptyness.
An Explostion of Space.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Wild and free like a mustang under the setting western skies.
My spirit is untamed.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When I die will I be remembered
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In your eternal eyes
Forever it is spoken,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
As I’m walking with you on the moonlit shore I continue to think of you and nothing more• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Sitting on a mountaintop looking out over a worldby JWGoethe 63 lines, 14 comments, on May 12 1:01 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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More than just the random scribblings
of a dark complacent mindby JWGoethe 32 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 29 9:58 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There is turmoil underneath those baby blues Something few would ever seeby RebelDLine75 25 lines, 6 comments, on May 9 1:40 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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each step,
one to the right,by Cerbie20 33 lines, 9 comments, on May 8 1:44 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
faeries in the moonlight flying to and froby blood-for-ink 25 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 25 11:29 AM 2008. In Nature, Fantasy, My own style, Lost in thought, Childrens, Happiness, Escape• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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a meadow in the moonlight,
shining as if it were from above,by blood-for-ink 17 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 27 10:20 AM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Hope, Spiritual, Nature, Fantasy, My own style, Longing• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A poem about a girl living alone with her father, for her mother has left them.by Musical Renaissance 29 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 25 4:57 PM 2007. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A rose / Sweet and innocent / As the rain pours down on it / It starts to fall / But it stands strong / Because underneath its flowery petals / Lies thorns / Sweet Smell / Yet it brings forth blood / Its rooby Musical Renaissance 13 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 30 8:36 AM 2007. In Hope, Love, Life, Other, Personal, Thoughts, Weird• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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He comes for me, / like a cat chasing a mouse / like a bully / he comes for me / I try to hide / but there is no where to go / I do my bestby Musical Renaissance 21 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 19 11:32 AM 2007. In Sad, Personal, Pain, Other, Life, Lost in thought, Loss• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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All alone, I fall to the ground The hallucination shatteredby Musical Renaissance 25 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 22 5:57 PM 2007. In .......uh................, Thoughts, Weird, Dark, Personal, Sad, Lyrics• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The angel held me close rocking me back and forthby lunagirl15 43 lines, 14 comments, on May 8 2:56 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Time to let go, Of this pain,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My Favourite Ancient Hero Helen of Troy• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Tonight I hand you my heartby Blooming Poet 5 lines, 5 comments, on May 13 8:53 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Go.. to the place.. you know..
Looking upwards.. beautiful sky.. a clouds glow..by jackreed3 21 lines, 4 comments, on May 8 12:45 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
“Our Little Man” Where is that little man we can’t seem to find him anywhere?by robwmcg2008 25 lines, on May 26 2:27 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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x♥x♥x♥x♥xby SarahEatsAirplane 31 lines, 4 comments, on May 27 3:38 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Sad, Pain, Angst, Emo, Angry, Sterotypes• Commented on by judge.
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Feelings are emerging
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Let us bow our heads for humanity
send our thoughts through time and space,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
When your feeling sad and low and fate deals you a worthless hand And life strikes you that fateful blow for reasons you don’t understandby judmc 12 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 10 8:20 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Like the first time that I opened up
[And let you glance inside]by CapturedMoon 43 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 26 8:36 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You live
For those pointless lines we've blurred.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You’re as delicate as a flower, as beautiful as a rose,by Philleebee8 17 lines, 7 comments, on May 2 2:29 PM 2008. In sonnet• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Silver starlight guides my path, fate's hand steadies the falling glass.by moonbeasty 13 lines, 23 comments, on May 12 1:43 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Tread cautiously on this fragile ground, Lest you tear through and fall.• Viewed by judge.
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Pushes back the plate
Not wanting to go back again• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Your sweet words and poison lips
Like novocaine for another day• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Waterfalls are nice no matter how much spice you use in addition• Viewed by judge.
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If this is my fault, Then why am I still standing,by forgotten desire 31 lines, on May 26 8:57 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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That you could not see,
But felt,by dewfall 6 lines, 2 comments, on May 24 6:19 PM 2005. In Contemporary• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I want to know again what its like, what its like to be, the other half of a love that was meant to be... I want to know again that easy smooth of physical and verbal touches that sooth...the messages of love you sent usiby tonylamar2000 14 lines, on May 27 3:48 PM 2008. In Life• Viewed by judge.
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Though we walk a narrow path as just a spec of sand
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Daddy I remember yesterday
When you’d kiss away my tears• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
flying through the air, she's dancing again
her hair wraps around her flushed face as her feet move back and forth,by dreamweaver08 33 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 31 2:05 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You could be sad and all alone
With no one’s name to moanby HazardousHeroine 27 lines, 3 comments, on May 28 6:27 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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