Okay, here's the deal. I was listening to Ozzy Osbourne and heard a song I've never heard before that really got my juices flowing. But, I wanted more inspiration. I want to read your poems. I want inspiration from someone who can twist the mind and Force you to think.
Now, about the contest. This contest is for everyone and anyone. The title pretty much says it all. I want suicide solutions....
Suicide solutions can mean anything. So let me explain. I want your best suicide poems. I want them all, any that you have, written in any way. It can be sad, happy, funny, depressive. Whatever you got, I'll take it.
But, the name of the contest is Suicide SOLUTIONS. So, I'll be wanting solutions to all of these poems. I want it to end. Don't leave me hanging at the end. Any other time, I wouldn't mind, but This time, I want a beginning, middle, and end. End it in any way you like, it's your choice.
RULES:
-No STickY KeYs aT aLl. If yOu usE StiCkY keYS yoU wiLl bE dQ'd!!!
-If the violence level goes ANYWHERE above a few drops of blood, you must label the title with (Graphic) if you don't, your poem will be removed and you will be dq'd.
-Prewrites are allowed, but I will tell you now, new poems will be preffered over prewrites.
-If there is any erotica, please label it so with (erotic). I have read erotic suicides in my time...
-Your poem can be as long or as short as you want it. It's your choice =]
-Enter as many times as you like. I'm looking for one, and you may have two good ones for me to choose from. So please, indulge yourself =]
-I am also going to ask that you do NOT rate my comments or reply to my comments. It will not help your standing, and if you do, I will be able to see your screen name. Since I had forgotten to write this in before the start of the sontest, people who do this will not be dq'd. But I will ask that you do not do so, for the sake of fairness.
I WILL comment on every poem. I am a blunt and honest person. If your poem has something that rubs me the wrong way, I'll let you know. So if you cannot take a little constructive criticism, please do NOT enter...
To all the little ones (Anyone under the age of 17). If you come in and read poems that disturb you, then it is your own fault. All the Warnings have been listed, and it is your own choice to read them, not mine. I'm not forcing you. So if you read something that irks you, then do NOT message me and tell me you were 'emotionally scarred' because you read something here. From here on out, you're on your own, and I relinquish myself of all responsibility because of your stupidity.
Other than that, have fun, and impress me!!!
Now, about the contest. This contest is for everyone and anyone. The title pretty much says it all. I want suicide solutions....
Suicide solutions can mean anything. So let me explain. I want your best suicide poems. I want them all, any that you have, written in any way. It can be sad, happy, funny, depressive. Whatever you got, I'll take it.
But, the name of the contest is Suicide SOLUTIONS. So, I'll be wanting solutions to all of these poems. I want it to end. Don't leave me hanging at the end. Any other time, I wouldn't mind, but This time, I want a beginning, middle, and end. End it in any way you like, it's your choice.
RULES:
-No STickY KeYs aT aLl. If yOu usE StiCkY keYS yoU wiLl bE dQ'd!!!
-If the violence level goes ANYWHERE above a few drops of blood, you must label the title with (Graphic) if you don't, your poem will be removed and you will be dq'd.
-Prewrites are allowed, but I will tell you now, new poems will be preffered over prewrites.
-If there is any erotica, please label it so with (erotic). I have read erotic suicides in my time...
-Your poem can be as long or as short as you want it. It's your choice =]
-Enter as many times as you like. I'm looking for one, and you may have two good ones for me to choose from. So please, indulge yourself =]
-I am also going to ask that you do NOT rate my comments or reply to my comments. It will not help your standing, and if you do, I will be able to see your screen name. Since I had forgotten to write this in before the start of the sontest, people who do this will not be dq'd. But I will ask that you do not do so, for the sake of fairness.
I WILL comment on every poem. I am a blunt and honest person. If your poem has something that rubs me the wrong way, I'll let you know. So if you cannot take a little constructive criticism, please do NOT enter...
To all the little ones (Anyone under the age of 17). If you come in and read poems that disturb you, then it is your own fault. All the Warnings have been listed, and it is your own choice to read them, not mine. I'm not forcing you. So if you read something that irks you, then do NOT message me and tell me you were 'emotionally scarred' because you read something here. From here on out, you're on your own, and I relinquish myself of all responsibility because of your stupidity.
Other than that, have fun, and impress me!!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 26, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 30, Bronze: 10
- Final notes: Congrats to all
Contest Winners
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 4217895, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Torn with in existence
Wanting to be releasedby theflamepoetess 24 lines, 7 comments, on May 8 12:55 PM 2008. In Pain, Weird, Personal
Bronze trophy winner
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You are the bird in the steel cage
Perched on a wooden plankby xhowxtragikx 42 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 28 10:30 PM 2008. In Metaphor, Sad, Depression, Pain, Cutting, Suicide, Life, Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
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Look as this gun. It's calling out to me.by miss keara 23 lines, 1 comment, on May 13 8:00 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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My question to you, As I slowly drag the razor across my skinby miss keara 73 lines, 2 comments, on May 13 7:44 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Pills? No. Razors? No.by miss keara 27 lines, 1 comment, on May 13 7:55 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Paper arms that bear blood red words Stories of unheard screams,by EnsnaredMind222 52 lines, 1 comment, on May 25 9:45 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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The day you left us all the earth stood still
The birds stopped singingby inhisimage 31 lines, 8 comments, on May 21 12:17 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
never realized how much I love you
Until the day you left me hereby inhisimage 35 lines, 4 comments, on May 21 12:20 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
When you're attached to the feeling
of blood pouring, spillingby aidenspektor 13 lines, 5 comments, on May 25 12:37 AM 2008. In Abuse• Commented on by judge. -
I bleed to void the pain numb the torturous agonyby aidenspektor 20 lines, 3 comments, on May 25 12:39 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Thew tears ran down her cheek As she stood infront of the kitchen drawer• Commented on by judge.
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Brief flash of my lifeby Wake Up Dead 22 lines, 2 comments, on May 25 6:37 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Used, shattered, torn back down
Covered by pain, I hit the groundby A-Daisy-Among-Roses 23 lines, 7 comments, on May 24 1:43 PM 2008. In Pain, Thoughts, Sad, Depression, Lost love, Anger, Suicide, Teenage thinking, Loss• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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If I see the morning hours
Ill have one more yesterdayby Wake Up Dead 34 lines, 1 comment, on May 25 6:45 AM 2008. In Lyrics• Viewed by judge. -
dead is what i have come to be, no longer truly living blind to whatever is obvious, possessed by unknown things• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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What makes a man put a bullit in his head?
to concead life and wish he were dead?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
And that this blade can't help but slip
and that this skin can't help but rip• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i added the second part.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Falling faster than it started
The ground getting nearby Mister Monday 26 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 23 10:57 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Behind the velvet
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She passes down the hallway Her eyes kept to the floorby chasingwhiterabbits 49 lines, 10 comments, on May 20 9:21 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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She's so very vivacious She smiles and laughs every dayby MorbidDisturbances 88 lines, on Jun 9 5:43 PM 2008. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Slicing through my flesh too numb, there is no painby IrishGypsyRose 10 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 17 9:05 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Cena-of-Destiny 70 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 17 5:14 PM 2008. In Sad, Pain, Death, Sadness, Depression, Personal., Suicide• Viewed by judge.
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The aesthetically pleasing images of suicide in the numerous art forms of the world have led me to this moment. An attempt to fill a void with pop culture references.by KafkasCat 19 lines, on May 30 12:57 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Clinging-to-Life 64 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 26 2:50 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Weird, Personal, Life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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When the pain finally decide to go away.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Paralyzed, paralyzed
Mentally unstableby Trent plus pen 45 lines, 15 comments, on Feb 22 7:22 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
This used to be the boy i hopped i would never be,
when looking in the mirror, all i saw was me...• Viewed by judge. -
Purple faces at the funfair!
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I put on a happy face Hiding the fact that I am destroyed and devastated on the insideby mcrfan322 20 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 5 8:58 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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dont touch me
just go awayby darkangel-darksoul 16 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 27 12:18 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
This knife, Dripping with blood.• Viewed by judge.
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You're my best friend ever
We share a bond of blood, boys, and so much more...by LullabyxxDreamer 31 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 6 10:55 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My name is death
Do you not know me?by darkangel-darksoul 13 lines, 14 comments, on Dec 6 5:52 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
When I am by my self every thing is dark and dim
My eyes close to hold in my depression• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Its total control Ur gun in my headby Black Mambaa 13 lines, on Jun 30 4:02 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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It's mocking me... Swinging back and forth there,• Viewed by judge.
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THE WATER FLOWS WITH IN ME, CAN'T SPEAK AND I CANT SEE. MY HEART IS COLD AS ICE SOON IT WILL COME INTO THE END WITH IN MY LIFE. WHO WAS I Tby trixie 50 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 11 11:53 PM 2008. In PAIN OF ADDICTION• Viewed by judge.
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You can hear her heartbreak with every step• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The color red is the meaning of anger. The color blue is the meaning of pain.by Rosalina92 11 lines, 4 comments, on May 2 8:40 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The animal will assault youby malmadre 9 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 16 8:46 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Drifting aimlessly now that she's gone What is the point? why should I go on?by fakeport 28 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 11 8:14 AM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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Even if it’s you Even if it’s them• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I made it seem like i cared for so long, And you denied the signs i put off when you were wrong,by Samm. 39 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 30 8:56 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I want to kill though I know its wrong
My heart feels frozenby ClaustrophobicJoy 16 lines, 7 comments, on May 18 12:42 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A face in the mirror
thinby TwilaTarragon 68 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 26 11:20 PM 2008. In Dark, Pain, Death, Depression, Sadness, Suicide, Society• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Don't take away your life
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People always frown
When they see the scars from my knifeby A-Daisy-Among-Roses 50 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 15 8:14 PM 2008. In Abuse, Dark, Depressed, Emo, Suicide, Teenage thinking, Angry, Hate• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The cold sky above me is crying
To meet my last day, one more story is over.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You've left and
the world moved on• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I feel the urge to cut
yet I try to resist.by girlwithnoheart 19 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 11 11:32 AM 2008. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
for the sake of sanity and for sanity aloneby Anthony Budka 33 lines, on Jun 23 9:56 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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There is a pain that's deep within; that one cannot let go.
The pain is chained into my heart and the weight hangs heavy there.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Cast out on your dreams, on the mystic river
Wondering if you could ever receive,or ever, even forgive her• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
When i call they just don't come Makes me feel so insecure• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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