FIRST OF ALL...
I would like to apologize to everyone who entered
my last contest. I wasn't able to properly judge
it because of some circumstances that came about.
It ended up being judged by the moderators and I
never added the extra points for silver and gold.
So once again, sorry for that! I hope you'll have
faith that this contest will go better! (Which it
will!!)
OKAY, WITH THAT ASIDE...
This is my fourth contest and it is all about
cheating. As stated in the summary, this is a
contest about;
-Being cheated on
-Cheating on someone
-Cheating WITH someone
-Being the other woman/man
-Wanting someone who is taken
-Wanting someone when you're already with another
-A mix of all of these!
I think that should give a clear picture of what
I'd like in this contest.
NOW FOR THE FEEL OF THIS CONTEST...
I'd like serious pieces filled with emotion, long-
ing, and heartache! I also love poetry with little
twists so you can try writing from another's per-
spective then reveal who you are or something to
that effect. (Just a suggestion, not a must!) Also,
I'm really leaning towards rhyme with this contest.
I'd really like to see nice flowy, rhyming pieces
but if you feel you have a strong non-rhyming piece
or even a free-write, don't hesitate to enter it.
Like I said, I just want to see some rhyme right now
but I definitely will not make that a rule!
AND ON TO THE RULES...
-Pre-written poems are allowed
-Enter 1-2 pieces
-Comment on others entries
(just out of courtesy, not so much a must)
AS A NOTE...
Ask questions! If you have a suggestion, or want to
enter something slightly different, or even have a
third piece you are dying to enter, ASK! Leave me a
comment on this page or a message if you want more
privacy.
ONE LAST THING!...
If you're in need of some inspiration, I HIGHLY
recommend listening to the song "Stay" by Sugar-
land which is what this contest is named after. It
is such a beautiful, heartfelt piece.
I've decided to add a piece of the lyrics so you
can see what I mean...
STAY by SUGARLAND
You keep telling me, baby
There will come a time
When you will leave her arms
And forever be in mine
But I don't think that's the truth
And I don't like being used and I'm tired of waiting
It's too much pain to have to bare
To love a man you have to share
Why don't you stay?
I'm down on my knees
I'm so tired of being lonely
Don't I give you what you need?
When she calls you to go
There is one thing you should know
We don't have to live this way
Baby, why don't you stay?
[Points will be added for silver and gold.]
I would like to apologize to everyone who entered
my last contest. I wasn't able to properly judge
it because of some circumstances that came about.
It ended up being judged by the moderators and I
never added the extra points for silver and gold.
So once again, sorry for that! I hope you'll have
faith that this contest will go better! (Which it
will!!)
OKAY, WITH THAT ASIDE...
This is my fourth contest and it is all about
cheating. As stated in the summary, this is a
contest about;
-Being cheated on
-Cheating on someone
-Cheating WITH someone
-Being the other woman/man
-Wanting someone who is taken
-Wanting someone when you're already with another
-A mix of all of these!
I think that should give a clear picture of what
I'd like in this contest.
NOW FOR THE FEEL OF THIS CONTEST...
I'd like serious pieces filled with emotion, long-
ing, and heartache! I also love poetry with little
twists so you can try writing from another's per-
spective then reveal who you are or something to
that effect. (Just a suggestion, not a must!) Also,
I'm really leaning towards rhyme with this contest.
I'd really like to see nice flowy, rhyming pieces
but if you feel you have a strong non-rhyming piece
or even a free-write, don't hesitate to enter it.
Like I said, I just want to see some rhyme right now
but I definitely will not make that a rule!
AND ON TO THE RULES...
-Pre-written poems are allowed
-Enter 1-2 pieces
-Comment on others entries
(just out of courtesy, not so much a must)
AS A NOTE...
Ask questions! If you have a suggestion, or want to
enter something slightly different, or even have a
third piece you are dying to enter, ASK! Leave me a
comment on this page or a message if you want more
privacy.
ONE LAST THING!...
If you're in need of some inspiration, I HIGHLY
recommend listening to the song "Stay" by Sugar-
land which is what this contest is named after. It
is such a beautiful, heartfelt piece.
I've decided to add a piece of the lyrics so you
can see what I mean...
STAY by SUGARLAND
You keep telling me, baby
There will come a time
When you will leave her arms
And forever be in mine
But I don't think that's the truth
And I don't like being used and I'm tired of waiting
It's too much pain to have to bare
To love a man you have to share
Why don't you stay?
I'm down on my knees
I'm so tired of being lonely
Don't I give you what you need?
When she calls you to go
There is one thing you should know
We don't have to live this way
Baby, why don't you stay?
[Points will be added for silver and gold.]
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 29, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 70, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: Thank you everybody for entering! There were so many strong poems in this contest, I was VERY pleased with the outcome! I decided to add 3 HM's because it was just too hard to judge with only Gold, Silver and Bronze. It was still hard because I had so many preliminary finalists so I had to go back and read and re-read all the entries before deciding who I really thought deserved the win! So thank you to all the winners and everybody else because this was a close one!
--DAMSELx
Contest Winners
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With sorrow I return pieces of your heart
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The gentle brush
of your hand• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4218297, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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this one's for the one who sees me as, the 'homewrecker' herself• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Entries [30]
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Frozen behind bars, Too late to go back,by Condemd RyeZing 23 lines, 1 comment, on May 11 3:04 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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I never thought this would happen Everything went so wrongby Leanna-bean 20 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 14 5:31 PM 2008. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I once knew this girl named Peaches
She sucked the life out of you like leachesby Leanna-bean 18 lines, 16 comments, on Mar 28 2:21 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Life, Dark, Pain, Angst, Weird, My life, Depression, Angry, Dedication• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Two lovers,
One secretary...
And one highschool sweetheart.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The door that stepped outside of my vows
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If my girl only knew What the hell would she doby TooFly2bDepressed 12 lines, 1 comment, on May 11 9:48 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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there's the day not everyone can keep to their oath they say it's no big dealby ichigosama 28 lines, 1 comment, on May 5 11:34 AM 2008. In Sadness, My own style, Love, Sad, Dark, Emo, Pain• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I made love to you tonight
In another womans bedby bluecollarlove 23 lines, 22 comments, on Mar 1 2:29 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
lured by the liquor of dispassion,
and hungry to feast at cold tables;by George Bowling 8 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 7 11:07 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Oh dear, you missed the party, and it was so much fun,
it ended just as quickly, from the time it had begun.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I am not facing the one that I adore
It's better to part ways and hurt myself• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
About the logic of staying with ..• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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all I needed
all I wantedby PoEtRyInMe 31 lines, 2 comments, on May 24 9:02 PM 2008. In Weird• Commented on by judge. -
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I gave you my secrets
made my pain take wing,by Elvenfairy 13 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 2 4:44 PM 2006. In Society• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
If by chance I run into
That person from my past• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
"Do what you feel in your heart", you say. If I could do that, you would already be mine.by marciakay81 13 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 9 3:21 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Comments
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i love that song...having been in a similar situation, i can totally relate to the change of tone at the end...from why do you have to leave? to why don't you just stay there? good contest topic.
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Very Interesting
This Contest sounds very interesting. I wish I would have seen it before, it is about to close so I am afraid I do not have enough time to enter it
Great job though it is very interesting. 
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wow, thank you so much for gold in this interesting contest, I never expected it among such varied and talented competition. Congrats to all those who received awards and to all for being inspired to enter. again thanks, I will pick my chin up from the floor now.



