I want sadness, pain, suffering, etc.
I would ask for all genres of poetry, but every time I do I never get the emotion I want. It seems that people find it easier to put heart and soul, blood and tears to subjects that make you hurt. So that's what I am asking for.
I'll comment every entry, I'll be honest, I'll add more points to the contest as they come.
Simple right?
Edit: If you can put true love into words that aren't cliche, cheesy, or pathetic- feel free to enter some of those words in poem form.
Edit: My maximum entries were full- so I added entry spots because I am absouletly adoring these poems and I am hoping for a continuation.
I would ask for all genres of poetry, but every time I do I never get the emotion I want. It seems that people find it easier to put heart and soul, blood and tears to subjects that make you hurt. So that's what I am asking for.
I'll comment every entry, I'll be honest, I'll add more points to the contest as they come.
Simple right?
Edit: If you can put true love into words that aren't cliche, cheesy, or pathetic- feel free to enter some of those words in poem form.
Edit: My maximum entries were full- so I added entry spots because I am absouletly adoring these poems and I am hoping for a continuation.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 13, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 350, Silver: 200, Bronze: 120, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: You guys suck. JUST KIDDING but you all did make this extremely difficult to judge because of how amazing all the poetry was...is...you catch my drift. I couldn't decide on how to place the poems at first so I re-read over and over...then finally- I waited a long time and came back and looked at names. If I could remember how the poem affected me without reading it again- I knew it was better. Thank you all so much for entering. Till next time- THANKS and toodles
Contest Winners
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I don't plant flowers
flowers die.by Blankscreen2222 20 lines, 28 comments, on Sep 30 9:44 AM 2007. In Some things we never forget., Life, Love, I prefer trees., Personal, Sad
Honorable mention
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Tears fall from my eyes
As I gasp air for you• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [28]
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by Danneh 18 lines, 2 comments, on May 6 8:16 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It seems one again I've fallen into the pit
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Don't read if you don't want to call your parents this moment and tell them how grateful you are for existence or damning yourself for screwing up your own.by Avatar of Innocence 42 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 10 4:24 AM 2005. In Personal, Dark, Contemporary• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Your words
They used to cut so deepby brightsmylesxx 67 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 27 7:20 PM 2008. In Angst, Hope, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Lost in thought, Friendship• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It was spring / With flowers / My boughs were bending / I was heavy with honey / Around me / The bees were flying / Humming / Unending flattering songs / My honey was heady / Sucking to their fi• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You confuse me like a demon• Commented on by judge.
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I start to fall,
Hearing the angels call.by Dorcha Runda 21 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 20 10:26 PM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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This is a story
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My memories serve as whips
My skin is brittle from hurts and painsby Rele anmwe 18 lines, 11 comments, on May 4 12:59 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Incandescent is my blood
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20 Robitussin and a bottle Nyquil later, I'm still not dead,by thegoldenpath 20 lines, 1 comment, on May 11 9:38 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Who's To Blame:My hate takes me to a place,
where everything's a race.• Commented on by judge.
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thank ou for the HM and congrats to the other winners
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