^^ As always, thats me, maybe i have an obsession with looking at my own face...sorry 
This contest is to make me cry, i dont know why, its hard to make me physically shed tears and easy to make me smile, so for this to work, the poetry has to be amazing.
Couple of things i can relate to which will probably work the best.
People dying.
Long distance relationships.
Lost love.
Best mates moving away.
But anything you can come up with is good.
Concentrating more on the emotion than the facts will probably upset me the most.
No fancy language, as always i just want simplicity. Raw emotions. You get the idea.
WOW me.
And i do prefer rhyme =]
15-40 Lines please.
Good luck!
xxx
With a SPECIAL thanks to BlessedAngel for donating 500 points to me so i could do this contest. Much appreciated =] x
This contest is to make me cry, i dont know why, its hard to make me physically shed tears and easy to make me smile, so for this to work, the poetry has to be amazing.
Couple of things i can relate to which will probably work the best.
People dying.
Long distance relationships.
Lost love.
Best mates moving away.
But anything you can come up with is good.
Concentrating more on the emotion than the facts will probably upset me the most.
No fancy language, as always i just want simplicity. Raw emotions. You get the idea.
WOW me.
And i do prefer rhyme =]
15-40 Lines please.
Good luck!
xxx
With a SPECIAL thanks to BlessedAngel for donating 500 points to me so i could do this contest. Much appreciated =] x
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 10, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: This was a really hard contest to judge!! Alot of entries, alot of talent, alot to choose from! Took me a while but i finally chose the winners. So congratulations! And thanks to everyone for entering =] x
Contest Winners
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by CaliOkie 62 lines, 12 comments, on Jan 3 11:26 PM 2008. In Lost love, Hope, Reincarnation
Gold trophy winner
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The depth of my sorrow reaches to the pit of my soul
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Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [28]
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To have what we want, To never give and flaunt.by Lights Sorrow 18 lines, 3 comments, on May 8 9:19 PM 2008. In Life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I ask myself why
You had to dieby bluecollarlove 22 lines, 14 comments, on Apr 2 2:14 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Though freed
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by Ephiphany 51 lines, 20 comments, on Apr 17 10:51 AM 2008. In My own style, Weird, Lost in thought, Dark, Fantasy• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I need to believe that it wasn't for not
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Our eyes meet
So much to say nowby Sanity-of-Angels 26 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 29 8:49 PM 2008. In Lyrics• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Forcing my eyes open but they feel lazy
Figures around me are hazyby Failed Abortion 15 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 24 1:16 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Got onto the train so long ago The cold grips us each night• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You pierced my heart
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You know me not / I'm long forgot / By the people of this world / If you saw me on the street / I'm just another girl / But look a little d• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The family picture still hangs on the wall but each one of the people are gone, recalled.• Viewed by judge.
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I saw something last night that made me cry
A beautiful angel fell from the skyby muffin on a stick 20 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 17 10:28 AM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Sad, Pain, My own style, Lost in thought, Lost love, Emo• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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How many entries are allowed?
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The silver is very much appreciated. Thank you so much.
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