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Contest She's Got A Body Like An HourGlass And Its Ticking Like A Clock--x by Dead Star--x

paramore
♥


Basically this is about ed's
{eating disorders}
I think I might have one, who knows?
But anywho-

.I like dirty pretty.
As long as its [not] cliche

& by dirty pretty I dont mean erotica
I know a few of you think that buts its not


Anorexia
Bulimia
Basic struggles with weight, {control} & perfection


Make me feel what you feel
Drag me into your poem and into your emotions
Make me feel the desperation..



Some song lyrics for inspiration:

"She's got the body of an hourglass and its ticking like a clock" ♥ Paramore

"And I rot in my skin
As a piece of me dies everyday
I know I'm nothing
I know there's nothing I can say
To change
The judegment in their ways
I'll never be what you need"
Smashing Pumpkins -Ugly-

I don't know the first time I felt unbeautiful
The day I chose not to eat
What I do know is how I've changed my life forever
I know I should know better
There are days when I'm OK
And for a moment, for a moment I find hope
But there are days when I'm not OK
Superchick -Courage-



okay lovelies♥
Enjoy





Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 12
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    I know I closed it early, but I've got finals and moving out to do within the next 3 or so days so I wouldnt be able to get it done
    So I'm finished it up

    keep up the talent♥

Contest Winners

  1. Empty.By.Choice
    by Xombii 29 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 13 5:22 PM 2007. In adult, Sad, Abuse, Angst, Pain, Life
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. UN-[b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l]
    and when i wake up
    you can see through my ribs when I breathe
    by Forgot2Breathe 54 lines, 3 comments, on May 6 8:21 PM
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. My Damnation
    by slipping.whirlpool 28 lines, 1 comment, on May 8 5:20 PM. In personal
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Looking Glass Disaster
    I wake up in the morning
    Rub my hollow looking eyes
    by yourmimimarquez 35 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 21 5:32 PM 2006. In Other, Personal, Sad, Self-Image, Anorexia
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. --Deceive
    by KissMeImContagious 75 lines, 6 comments, on May 7 6:01 PM. In Personal, Thoughts, Dark, Pain, Angst, Weird, Emo, Escape, Eating Disorder
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Quod me nutrit, me destruit
    by Ilma 23 lines, 2 comments, on May 7 2:53 PM. In anorexia, eating disorder, personal, food
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. Nothingness
    Trace the sharp line Of each brittle bone
    by Ilma 23 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 29 9:55 AM
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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