It's very very frustrating when you're trying to get through to someone you care about and they're not listening. Whether you're worried about them or just plain fed up, I want you to pen for me what you would say to that person if only they'd stop and take notice. Or just write about how it makes you feel when you're talking to a brick wall.
As always, prewrites only if they really fit. Have fun guys, and I promise I'll listen to you! All will be commented on and I like to be constructive.
*~Huntress~*
As always, prewrites only if they really fit. Have fun guys, and I promise I'll listen to you! All will be commented on and I like to be constructive.
*~Huntress~*
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 11, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: I never expected such a range of emotions and ideas here. So many of us with such strong feelings that are not being heard by the people who so much need to understand. Thanks to all of you, a very tough one to juddge.
Thanks to all of you for entering and sharing your frustration with sympathetic souls, I hope it's been as therapeutic for you as it has for me!
*~Huntress~*
Contest Winners
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Searching, looking, trying to find a way out. Drowning in one's self fear and pain.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Hello? Excuse me...• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Your heart isn't any good anymore, Dad
Why can't you realize that?• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [14]
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If I had screamed
Through the pillow,by rude pedestrian 07 17 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 25 4:58 PM 2008. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Dont stand there and say you know me
cause odds are you dont
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A river flowing / Rolling hills / Dew dropped roses / Give you thrills / Leaving home / Not alone / Hold his hand / Don't let him go / He's all yours / And only yours / not hers / and you smileby Sock 40 lines, 1 comment, on May 28 6:49 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Transparent or True?
she whispers ...by Blankscreen2222 41 lines, 32 comments, on Apr 30 4:47 AM 2006. In Feeling Invisible, Angst, Sheer frustration., Pain, Emo, Message, Abstract, Life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There are lots of fun things you can do when someone takes you for granted to get their attention . Turn it around in a funny way is one• Commented on by judge.
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Sometimes I wish what it would be like if something you wished for came to be.
Sometimes I wonder what life would be like if someone cared• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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ha ha...i go through this everyday! lol good contest
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