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# 83 at Winklings & AP Friends: The Prose Poem

The prose poem has one foot in prose writing; one foot in poetic utterances.

 

http://www.webdelsol.com/tpp/pg124.htm   The Prose Poem    


THIS IS A PROSE POEM CONTEST.

 

DO NOT WRITE FREE VERSE IN THIS CONTEST! THE TWO ARE VERY DIFFERENT. THE PROSE POEM IS WRITTEN AS PROSE BUT THE SENTENCES ARE PERMEATED WITH FUNDAMENTAL, POETIC LANGUAGE. FREE VERSE IS WRITTEN AS VERSE AND NOT PROSE!

P.H. Liotta ~ a prose poem.

THE BLUE WHALE

Drifting on a river she could not control, the broken carcass of a blue whale came to our shores. By then, jaw already cracked from the prop-blade of another ship, she lingered too long at the surface, unable to feed. Struck by a tanker crossing from Anvers to Providence, buoyed by the bulbous chin of the bow, the leviathan never knew what hit her. Water pressure kept the corpse in place until they entered Narragansett Bay. Dead a week already, she was gaffed and hooked and dragged alongside the pilot boat to Second Beach.

Back then, no one knew if she were male or female. "She" might glory in the sand while "he" grew fetid and fell away, waiting for dissection. The skeleton would be buried in the dunes, in secret, when it was done. Like the odd doctor in Marlow’s darkness, who measures the crania of those who drift "out there" and "up the Congo," with caliper-like things, "in the interest of science." Oh, I never see them come back, he says.

By the time I get there, cubism has set in. A thousand faces circle the cadaver. The dead remains: a wishbone bent toward nothing, her inverted jawbone jabs at sky. Mist fizzles into rain. The organs splayed out in the drift sizzle like the sound of crackling bacon. Each fleck of water slices at the desiccated blood. Thousands flock to thrill at absence. There’s still enough to feel the loss. A river of baleen. A disembodied fluke.

Two days on, the ebb of human flotsam has washed clean. "He" and "she" are going now - into the gloam. A bulldozer grumbles in the downpour: a single beacon, tachistoscopic, flaming red. And when the three of us arrive, everyone and thing are gone. My daughter turns in wind and keeps on asking, What does she look like? Why did she die? Just face the order out to sea, the pictures of a floating world: the subject sees but never speaks. The way you fear the menace left unsaid - the natural convergence weighing down. You dream alone.

Out there, what difference between what stretches ahead and what is past. The Acropolis and Parthenon streaming into view. The ruined Balkans, hope and slaughter. Breadlines in St. Petersburg. Kurds fleeing from the bombing runs. Head for the Kyrgiz steppe. See for yourself: the free spillage of Tajik blood or the chaos-order of the Taliban. The black sturgeon, up from Caspian depths, flashing through air. Diamond in darkness. Behold the nothing that is not there and the nothing that is.

I don’t know about you. But for me, we’re drifting still. I see the wreck of a whale, watch it going, going . . . like seals in the outer harbor, who tumble in brine and do their best ignoring death, like the one tied to the mast with wax in ears who was forced not to listen, what good could come in reading the runes of a ruined life? O lantern without bearer, you, too, are drifting, to spite your course.
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(i) Write a prose poem of a minimum of 150 words on any subject. 

(ii) If no more than five enter, the contest will be abandoned.

(iii) If enthusiasm prevails, good points for quality will be available for Silver, Bronze and HMs.

(iv) We wish you all the best!

(v) This contest, # 83, is open to all Winkling Groups, The Rose Garden, AP Friends.  

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 31
  • Rewards: Gold: 4000, Silver: 1000, Bronze: 500, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    Once people found out what a prose poem was, we attracted some fine compositions. I thank Lou for reading all of them very carefully and reporting back to me. This was very generous of her and thoughtful, too.

    Gold is awarded to a Prose Poem whose poetics are masterful and admirable: 'A Breathlessness'. Congratulations, author.

    Silver is awarded to the work, 'Storms I have Known'.

    Bronze is awarded to 'The Dream Tree'.
    Congratulations to both authors.

    Honorable Mention goes to the prose poems 'How Far to Paradise' and 'The Tree of Life'.

    Thank you to almost all the writers in this contest for making it a worthy anthology of prose pieces to read with some anticipation and satisfaction.

    Lyndon of the Winklings on behalf of the judges.

Contest Winners

  1. A breathlessness,
    a simple stroke of earth and fate
    by pastiche 7 lines, 7 comments, on May 14 6:50 AM. In Thoughts
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. by Just Rob 32 lines, 5 comments, on May 2 4:28 PM. In Personal, Nature, Society
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. To enter a dream, aware of reality at rest and dream the quest, has become an artful state of subconscious alertness: glee for an inquisiti
    by myrataal 17 lines, 6 comments, on May 14 12:45 PM. In Sadness, Society, Dream
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. by Shenton 6 lines, 2 comments, on May 2 10:26 AM
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [11]

1 - 11 of 11
  • Simon,
    simple fisherman
    by JWGoethe 74 lines, 11 comments, on Apr 27 6:56 PM
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • pay attention to the cycle of life...
    by sadhe 82 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 28 3:27 AM. In Life, Personal, Sad, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Geraldo Rivera and I are all excited
    about the hidden drawer in the dresser.
    by PerVirtuous 16 lines, 4 comments, on May 12 9:00 PM. In Humor, Society
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • On Saturday afternoons, the neighborhood children crowded into our little pink bathroom on the ground floor. Its tiny window was opened, allowing an additional lucky few the chance to crane their necks in hope of a good
    by Mirthryl 29 lines, 7 comments, on May 14 11:45 AM. In Life, Nature, Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • get off me
    get off me
    by Mademokid 53 lines, 6 comments, on May 14 3:20 PM. In Dark, Life, Love, Personal, Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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