RULES:
No TyPiNg LiKe ThIs
I dont want the predatory side of a vampire i want what inner struggles they deal with wether its with their eternal life or loving a mortal or dealing with what they had just become or wishing for death
capture their true essenence if you have any questions about what i am asking for or what i will allow ask me
if you need inspiration i suggest reading Interveiw with the vampire its the best example of what i want or even read my poem called Black Is
if your still unsure of what i want just message me and i can explain a little bit better
No TyPiNg LiKe ThIs
I dont want the predatory side of a vampire i want what inner struggles they deal with wether its with their eternal life or loving a mortal or dealing with what they had just become or wishing for death
capture their true essenence if you have any questions about what i am asking for or what i will allow ask me
if you need inspiration i suggest reading Interveiw with the vampire its the best example of what i want or even read my poem called Black Is
if your still unsure of what i want just message me and i can explain a little bit better
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 13
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 14
- Final notes: Thank you all for entering this contest I had fun and I hope you all did as well. I also hoped you learned that becoming a vampire is not all its cracked up to be may your poetry teach what you have learned.
Raven Of Darkness
Contest Winners
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Such years have past
ever changing,• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
The moon rose in the ebony night A white contrast against a canvas soaked in ink• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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You could never fathom The anguish in the centuries I've seen• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [16]
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I am imortal.
I am a creature of the night.by dreamdragon6484 34 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 29 1:58 PM• Commented on by judge. -
Blood lingers on thy Lips/for I drink away the youth of mortal flesh
and give you the life of eternal bliss• Commented on by judge. -
The sunsets and paint enters my skin, I can see my breath escaping…
(Wake up this is all a dream.) I feel remorse for the echoes reaching• Commented on by judge. -
How strange to be mysteriously drawn,
to the light that could kill me the beautiful dawn.by Audric Beaumont 54 lines, 28 comments, on Apr 13 2:30 PM 2006. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Strong,bloodthirsty,in love.Forsaken by god and truly free.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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i have her on my mind i feel her with me in my heart• Commented on by judge.
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each day i wish he could see, that i am not right for him...by Cerbie20 25 lines, 2 comments, on May 12 1:29 PM• Viewed by judge.
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I watch her day by day.
I await in the darkness, I seek out her warmth from afar.by Pretty Britty 30 lines, 6 comments, on May 12 1:42 PM• Viewed by judge.
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PLEASE
i wish you allowed pre writes
im in the middle of a serious mental block but i know i have something PERFECT for this contest that i hope you will love
please allow pre writes
even if just for a day -
I wrote this one alread
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THANKS
thank you
i hope you like my entry
its a song btw
some people dont look at what categories its under and say things like 'it sounds like a song'
strange how people who hold contests and not look at their entries that much -
wish i could submit a few more pieces. I have quite a few dedicated to my tears of blood story.
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hmm?
How did a pre-write get in here?
your rules say "No prewrites " didnt it?
Its a very good poem, but still.Is it a prewrite?...dont mean to complain,. but that is the rules, right? -
:) :)
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Thank you***
Thank you, so much for the *Gold Trophy*
This means so much to me****
This contest was great...
alot of fun to write this poem too.
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