Hey, thanks for checking my contest out, please enter! I finally have enough points to hold a contest so here it is.
I will try to comment on every entry. If I say something that you disagree with, or if you can offer a different perspective that could alter my view of your poem feel free to send me a message.
It really irks me when someone fails to check their spelling! Please don't make me point out your mistakes.
I have ALMOST no preferences as to the poem's content or form. As long as the poem is good and is not adult, cutting, suicide, or the like it should be fine. Also, every other word better not be f**k, or other such words or I will remove you from the contest.
I WILL accept prewrites, but don't be afraid to enter a fresh poem.
Most of the rules can be seen in the previous paragraphs but here are some more...
1. AvOId tYPinG LiKE tHIs.
2. Please don't put it in paragraph form.
3. Limit your entries to 2 per person.
4. No bashing of people, religions, places etc.
5. Don't worry! I won't make you put some stupid random word in your Author's Notes just to prove that you read the rules.
The prizes are...
Gold 300 points
Silver 50 points
Bronze 30 points
The prizes will increase as I comment on your poems thereby earning more points!
New plan. I'm kinda busy right now, but I don't want to make you wait forever so I'll read and judge, then after the contest is over I'll comment on the poems.
I will try to comment on every entry. If I say something that you disagree with, or if you can offer a different perspective that could alter my view of your poem feel free to send me a message.
It really irks me when someone fails to check their spelling! Please don't make me point out your mistakes.
I have ALMOST no preferences as to the poem's content or form. As long as the poem is good and is not adult, cutting, suicide, or the like it should be fine. Also, every other word better not be f**k, or other such words or I will remove you from the contest.
I WILL accept prewrites, but don't be afraid to enter a fresh poem.
Most of the rules can be seen in the previous paragraphs but here are some more...
1. AvOId tYPinG LiKE tHIs.
2. Please don't put it in paragraph form.
3. Limit your entries to 2 per person.
4. No bashing of people, religions, places etc.
5. Don't worry! I won't make you put some stupid random word in your Author's Notes just to prove that you read the rules.
The prizes are...
Gold 300 points
Silver 50 points
Bronze 30 points
The prizes will increase as I comment on your poems thereby earning more points!
New plan. I'm kinda busy right now, but I don't want to make you wait forever so I'll read and judge, then after the contest is over I'll comment on the poems.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 8, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 75, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: And the winners are:
Magician
by Thoughts-of-Soloman
Shall I Live or Die?
by pappacass
Shadow Dancer
by Shadowsong
HM to:
To my wee orange tree
by Li snuffles
Contest Winners
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My mind is a magician,
with waves of magic thoughts,by Thoughts-of-Soloman 30 lines, 44 comments, on Apr 1 5:16 PM 2008. In Dedication, Personal, Friendship, Thoughts, Love, Life, Spiritual
Gold trophy winner
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Closing my eyes, I swallow hard, fighting lonely tears,
Behind my lids, conjured by pain, a shadowed form appears.by Shadowsong 23 lines, 22 comments, on Aug 21 10:35 AM 2006. In Fantasy, Other, Love
Bronze trophy winner
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My little orange tree
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catastrophic undertones
masked beneath soft, gentle moansby WatchingStars 26 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 15 5:47 PM 2008. In Life, Love, Pain
Honorable mention
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Silver trophy winner
Entries [74]
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WHEN WE WERE KIDS When we were kids, we would climb trees, we would bang our heads we would skin our knees, when we would ask we would always say please,by santonix 19 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 13 12:35 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I've finally allowed my tears to take their course My lips to trembleby Li snuffles 24 lines, 10 comments, on Feb 22 9:18 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Can you hear me? I can hear youby eleni 20 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 20 3:41 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The sight of love cleanses the soul
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What's done is done is done
my friend.• Commented on by judge. -
about a father who fought in Vietnam and a son missing in Iraq. From a family from a rural area/Thanks to all the servicemen and women - y• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Ink quill of soft down
brings to life characters of timeby maralisa 4 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 15 2:48 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I love the sparkle in your eyes.
I love the smile upon your face.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I woke up this morning, Reached out to touch you. Found myself all alone in my bed.by BillyClyde 28 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 29 5:49 AM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The suspicion kills The sudden chillsby WatchingStars 40 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 12 10:54 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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She stands serenely, barely moving (on the wooden ledge)• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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What would you dop if you cold see no color?
Would that make everything in the world duller?by wolfer 8 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 28 6:53 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Now it's over, we are done
so this was just play and fun?by Daniela-Linder 48 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 31 7:48 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
you intoxicate me every time that I see you my knees becomeby Pollycheck 13 lines, 12 comments, on Oct 14 1:54 PM 2007. In Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Madam doesn’t care for my writing,
She says, “Your feeble attempts are but a waist,by Ang 45 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 26 7:07 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Look into these eyes of confusion,
tell me why.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
busy busy little bee• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Something we all should think about!
By:JAD 11/02/03
by jacbgd2 36 lines, 17 comments, on Jul 10 10:57 AM 2006. In Dedication, Personal, Inspirational, My own style• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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I've been waiting ro that moment. The one where the Earth stops turning, When your heart stops beating and when you can tell in an instant,by Condemd RyeZing 101 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 13 12:18 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The tide washes on the beach, Like dreams in my emptied mind,by Condemd RyeZing 28 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 3 9:45 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I was hangin, in a club one night minding my own biz
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Time did stop, when I set my eyes upon you
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My color is the color of her land. / My hair is the color of her desert sand. / My eyes are the color of her Nile. / My voice is the sacredby Nermin Nazim 20 lines, 11 comments, on Jun 13 5:14 PM 2007. In Hope, Love, Life, Personal, Thoughts, My own style, My life, Longing, Dedication• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I just can’t wait I’m awakeby howlinginpain 52 lines, 2 comments, on May 2 8:21 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Watching the very last ray
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There's an ache that never fades,
There's a pain that never dies,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
little girls in pink was it you long ago• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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What happen to it all?
All the friendship feels so fake.by articwolf7496 15 lines, 8 comments, on May 9 8:41 PM 2008. In Life, Friendship, Sadness, Anger, Message, Personal., Teen issues• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Promise that you won't forget me, That I'll always stay in your heart.by articwolf7496 18 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 8 11:38 AM 2008. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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down the hole
to a magical worldby misterfrazzleberry 13 lines, 2 comments, on May 10 7:05 PM 2008. In Weird, Thoughts, Abstract, Fantasy, Inspirational• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I am a listener,
a parasite when it comes to words.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Lies the children of despair
Down the hidden road• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
she´s so lonely but still she builds wallsby Midnite wolf 15 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 14 2:15 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Held still
distant from reality• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A neighborhood, behind a gate / Stays perfect in its silent state / Bleached clean with the newest Tide / Where hatreds lurk, and grudges• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I had hoped I’d not anchor my heart on you
Or whomever you may representby Aneasthetised 16 lines, 1 comment, on May 12 10:29 AM 2008. In Love• Viewed by judge. -
Grounded next to unbridled love,
velvet moss clinging to my every promise.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I fear the tug at my mind,
The beast in my heart,by kin-sedren 24 lines, 1 comment, on May 3 12:39 AM 2008. In Fear• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
a rhyming dialog (sp?)• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Silver starlight guides my path, fate's hand steadies the falling glass.by moonbeasty 13 lines, 23 comments, on May 12 1:43 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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There's no such thing as love
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Ages ago
you leaned over [during church, no less]by TabbyCat 56 lines, 32 comments, on Apr 10 9:47 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Don't listen to words, they say. They're nothing but crows• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Slumbering snakes of regret are breathing,
Sleeping soundly to my brain.by Animarising 27 lines, 13 comments, on Mar 20 7:23 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
This game of death--we sure do love games--
Cannot possibly be a just one,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
For love, a single candle I light
A black rose reared from the depths of my soul• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Listen now my dearest friends, For I would like to make amendsby AutumnsFlame 30 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 17 6:34 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Living in a piece of art.
The sky is the backdrop as we are the subject.by notsotorturedartist 18 lines, 14 comments, on Mar 20 1:24 PM 2008. In Humanity, Life, Thoughts, Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Poke at my eyes Blind me so I can't see,• Commented on by judge.
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I can observe it in your eyes The way you look at herby LullabyxxDreamer 47 lines, 13 comments, on May 7 9:52 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Tears of moonstones Fall from diamond eyes.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Looking up at all the stars,
I believe there to be.by AudreyEvans 33 lines, 19 comments, on Apr 7 5:14 PM 2008. In Sexual Sensum, Contemporary, Beauty, Life, Thoughts, Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Rule 5 - good for you, I hate it when people do that, it's pointless =/
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99 entries, enjoy.
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I've been trying to judge the contest for several days, but when i click "Judge Contest" it just jumps me to the top of the page! I'm sorry it's taking so long, please be patient.
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