Okay guys this is my first contest. and this is my promice to you:
1- I promice to read and comment on every single poem entered in this contest no matter how many entries.
2- I promice to choose poems that truely deserve to be the winners and not go upon popularity of the writer.
Okay so give me all you got anything is allowed though i would prefer if you didnt do this: AnDkWo its annoying lol. Anyways give me the best ya got im ready for anything you throw!
(I will coment and read everything at the end of the contest. to make it fair so that everything is fresh in my mind. I have set aside the closing day to read and comment on everysingle poem lol have fun)
1- I promice to read and comment on every single poem entered in this contest no matter how many entries.
2- I promice to choose poems that truely deserve to be the winners and not go upon popularity of the writer.
Okay so give me all you got anything is allowed though i would prefer if you didnt do this: AnDkWo its annoying lol. Anyways give me the best ya got im ready for anything you throw!
(I will coment and read everything at the end of the contest. to make it fair so that everything is fresh in my mind. I have set aside the closing day to read and comment on everysingle poem lol have fun)
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 6, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: I loved everyones entries. So many wonderful entries. And i encreased the number if honorable mentions and prizes for 2nd and 3rd place because you guys deserved. I am sorry it took me so long but yay!! we are all done! now celebrate and keep up the wonderful poetry!
Contest Winners
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Tattered rag dolls, broken toys,
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [74]
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Eyes acting as daggers
slithering through my mindby Phlegm 4 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 25 11:07 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Earth is nothing but a dripping sink
Factory jobs and 2:00 p.m. beerby Hadji Murad 40 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 19 10:14 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Sweet sounds of love echo in like air.
I whisper in your ear "can I touch you there?"by leslielovesthomas 10 lines, 22 comments, on Apr 20 6:49 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Paradise was darkness with her
Cause darkness is were I dwell and hideby LoveDeprived 25 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 26 3:16 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Imhotep can still recall the gods that crystal stars• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I saw you last lying helpless,
on the bed of yesterday’s sorrow.by vampireprincess 36 lines, 16 comments, on May 7 9:01 AM 2008. In Contemporary, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Demean me like it’s nothing It’s been done beforeby almightyjonesy 28 lines, 1 comment, on May 17 1:11 AM 2008. In whore• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Purity surrounding A couple all aloneby InMyOwnGlassBox 19 lines, 1 comment, on May 16 4:35 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Things are always different when I don't want them to change
I'm desperate to be happy but acting like Emily the Strangeby Snow White Sorrow 15 lines, 7 comments, on May 7 4:07 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Down come my tears how hard they fall,
I see the devil's shadows upon my walls.by Sharitti 16 lines, 5 comments, on May 15 11:42 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
I am a warrior,
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Twilights darkest night following
dawns early light, hair of red, gold and blue,by Maili Knephthan 41 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 24 3:43 PM 2008
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I am known by many names
I am the one who will never changeby shadow of the void 21 lines, 15 comments, on Nov 27 1:08 PM 2007. In Dark, My own style, Death, Vampire• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by going nowhere 23 lines, 20 comments, on Feb 12 6:36 PM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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that thing they say you never know what you had until it's goneby fromzerotonothing 15 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 29 1:06 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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At the edge of sanity, The machines live,by thegoldenpath 20 lines, 1 comment, on May 16 8:00 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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A creation beyond belief
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the sweet smell draws them in they sigh impatiently• Commented on by judge.
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Paint me a picture,
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If nature never bows to dusk, The moon can't grant her nightly grace• Commented on by judge.
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I had to give in to though's sexual urges
It purgesby Leanna-bean 12 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 29 4:35 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
They are bringing out the dead now, and the moon sits like a tambourine,by balakirev 11 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 21 1:09 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Lucious skies of golden droplets,
Engulfed in thoughts of black defeat,by RudolfTamer 4 lines, 4 comments, on May 15 4:49 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I shrivel up slowly Getting smaller every day.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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friendship has so many meanings
with you as a friend sometimes it feels like dreaming• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
What happen to it all?
All the friendship feels so fake.by articwolf7496 15 lines, 8 comments, on May 9 8:41 PM 2008. In Life, Friendship, Sadness, Anger, Message, Personal., Teen issues• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I don’t think I can do this anymore I don’t think I can stand here and listen to your words• Commented on by judge.
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In the countdown to the end there will nothing but hate and disbelief, In the countdown to the end there will be death and discomfort,by LifeandDeath92 6 lines, 2 comments, on May 12 12:23 PM 2008. In Death• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The highlight of your life
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Standing in a pool of your own blood,
You fall to your knees, tears flowing freely downward.by Calingaladha 22 lines, 15 comments, on Apr 7 7:25 PM 2007. In Dark, Weird, Flames, Apocalypse, Damned, Hell• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I can observe it in your eyes The way you look at herby LullabyxxDreamer 47 lines, 13 comments, on May 7 9:52 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A triangulum reflection
underneath night skyby Cerulean Sunrise 11 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 26 12:55 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
She's the chemically imbalanced girl
with a hint of death in her eyesby Madison Mary 26 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 15 6:28 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
all i can say is,
God does know whats best for usby ucancallmereal 36 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 20 10:57 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
warmonger, charlatan, whore for the oil conglomerates now watch me hit this driveby Anthony Budka 24 lines, 1 comment, on May 9 1:27 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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"What a lovely day," she said.
The sky was dull and gray.by A Deer Eye 19 lines, 14 comments, on Jul 15 1:30 PM 2007. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You were my addiction
Couldn't stop comming back• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
busy busy little bee• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The night is so lonely when i cant hold your hand• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Caged animal so beautiful here
A dove tagged to confinementby Jasmine Rayne 13 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 21 8:13 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I've been waiting ro that moment. The one where the Earth stops turning, When your heart stops beating and when you can tell in an instant,by Condemd RyeZing 101 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 13 12:18 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Simply Simple 32 lines, 16 comments, on Apr 25 11:03 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I'll be right here waiting, When you wake up,by Kassandra Nyktos 4 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 4 7:23 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A promise fulfilled in folly, in dungeons of earth
Spirituality on earth is never concise• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Goodbye friends
Till next we meet• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Late at night,
I look up at my glow stars.by SomethingPoetic 19 lines, 11 comments, on Feb 8 10:35 PM 2008. In Contemporary, Life, Love, Lyrics, Personal, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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The door to my heart
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by Athena of Starlite 14 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 26 10:22 AM 2008. In Anime, Music, Daft Punk, Kanye West, Sadness, Pain, Dark• Commented on by judge.
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Home....
Home....!!!by nilav 19 lines, 15 comments, on Dec 30 6:33 AM 2006. In home -general• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Looks like a ho-down here. Lots of options.
Great idea.
typo/oopsie
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Good luck with the judgeing. If you skip over my poem, I wouldn't be hurt! ok, maybe a little...
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I would have appreciated a critical comment, but thanks for hosting the contest anyways.
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im sorry i was a little pressed on time if you wish i can go back and give a proper review
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