Dalaney's Rhyme part 1 Summertime

This contest is aimed at new or inexperienced rhymers, and is in honour or one of the best Free Versers ever to write on AP Dalaney who fell in love with rhyme and asked that we try to show others what fun it is.
It runs in parallel with a larger series, part one is here http://allpoetry.com/contest/2402139.
Winners of this contest will be invited into the main contest where they will automatically be finalists.

PLEASE do not enter this contest if you consider yourself a practiced rhymer, or if you have won a major prize or two or more HMs in our previous rhyming challenge. (However if you have got awards from us and still think this is the right place for you, please message us and we will decide.)

You may enter two poems, but only one pre-write.

This contest is all about encouraging people to rhyme. We will take experience into account when marking, and we may ask some competitors to move their poems to the main contest.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 12
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 4 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank-you all for entering! We are inviting the three prize winners to enter the main contest where they are guaranteed to be finallists. This was an enjoyable contest to judge and we will be setting up another one for the second round of our main challenge shortly.
    We look forward to seeing steadily improving entries from you all!
    Please take the time to read the other entries and comment where you feel able

Contest Winners

  1. I strolled a long the river bank, in shade of woodland tree’s’
    Fragrant wild flower scent, hanging in the breeze.
    by Quill Bill 27 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 18 12:37 PM. In Nature
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. In gentle wafts of summer time, The scarlet songbird sings.
    by coddledsoul 20 lines, 3 comments, on May 10 9:41 AM
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. by DLC-Jem 14 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 26 4:16 AM. In Contest, Life, decasyllabic rhyme
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. by Lady Ireland 24 lines, 13 comments, on Jan 11 11:13 PM. In Personal, Love, Life
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. by GreySquirrel 17 lines, 4 comments, on May 4 5:31 PM. In Contest, Nature
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. "Summertimes Past" Giggling kids slamming doors
    after they've finished with their chores.
    by craftyangel43 17 lines, 12 comments, on Apr 26 10:03 PM. In Contest, Thoughts, Reflection
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. They speak of winter’s withered hands
    and how the earth looks aged.
    by KayJay46 30 lines, 7 comments, on May 10 6:09 PM. In Nature, Seasons, Life
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • DLC-Jem silver member
    April 25
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    ok Jeff and Sue you got one complete learner at this

  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 27
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    I was going to be cheeky and ask if I could enter.

    • cricketjeff gold member
      April 27
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      Only if you think you need Sue or me to help you with your rhyming

      • Mairi bheag gold member
        April 27
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        Och, ye ken I cannae rhyme for toffee,
        So I'm awa tae mak a cuppae coffee,
        the noo.

  • Griswold silver member
    April 30
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    Well, this leaves me out since I rhyme all the time. And although people sometimes think it's a crime,
    a good flow and meter with rhyme is sublime.

    • cricketjeff gold member
      April 30
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      If you rhyme to well for this game
      There's another with subject the same
      The prizes are bigger
      for writers with vigour
      So hurry there don't be so tame

      • Griswold silver member
        April 30
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        Wont let that contest go to waste
        I'll go to enter it post-haste
        for rhyme is my pleasure
        as Tory is my treasure
        But I promise that I'll keep it chaste.



  • Hi there!
    Have read some of these poems and think they are great. many thanks for the Hm award i really appreciate it.
    Good to everyone else.
    Dolores x
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