if you got a really stupid comment, tell me because on thusday i did a lot of the comments while i had a headache, was tired, and in a really bad mood... ...
now the pic has something to do with the contest, option 28
1st place- a gold trophy, 300pts, AND i will comment on up to 100 of your poems (it depends on the number of poems you have written... if i really like them i will comment on more)... lots of chances for applauses...
2nd place- silver trophy, 2pts (read the rest), AND i will comment on 50 of your poems (if you dont have 50 ill just comment on the ones you have, same with 3rd and 1st)...once again lots of chances for applauses
3rd place- bronze trophy, 1pt, i will comment on 25 poems...
honorable mentions- green trophy (i think), i will comment on 10 poems (or more)
rules...
-no erotica and/or adult (i dont think im allowed to view it
but i think its awesome)
-chat lingo is annoying and hard to read...dont use it..well, dont over use it
-bashing is allowed (bashing is prefered!!!)
-dont submit over 10 poems...
-i dont like stuff over 70 lines...i dont like stuff over 40 lines... long poems are....harder to read...
-this isnt a rule but its more like advice, when i see poems that have already won other trophies i seem to dislike the poem more...this happens pretty often...
-it can follow more than 1 option
-this isnt a rule but its a good thing to remember, im really honest when i comment if i hate it i will say i hate it if i say i love it, i mean that i love it...
-if your poem doesnt like follow the options..i wont disqualify it but ill probably insult it
um...if youre not sure about something...ask me...
options...lots...i like 1,2,3,4,5,9,16,17,25,26,28, and 29 the most...i suggest you bookmark this contest, ill add more options later.
once i get 150 entries, ill add more honorable mentions and points to trophy winners...
1. something inspired by my poetry...tell me which poem in the author notes...
2. depressing with a cure.. (being rejected and then building your self up etc.)
3. life through another person's eyes
4. saving someone else
5. everyone dies...be surprised your still alive
6. depression...with a reason
7. your life
8. losing something you love...something/someone important to you
9. how much you hate someone
10. killing
11. anything dark
12. being someone else
13. silence
14. emo
15. vamps (vampanze, vampire, vampets, vampirites)...only the Cirque Du Freak kind... i dont like the other vamp shit
16. something paranormal PLEASE ENTER A PARANORMAL POEM I HAVENT READ ANY BUT MY OWN AND I WANT TO READ ANOTHER ONE
17. eyes... ( http://i29.tinypic.com/2zi1t7b.jpg this might help)
18. going insane...something i do often...very often
19. love...but if you do, dont give me like... the common love poem...give me something i havent read before hate to love, love to hate, something different
20. diseases...
21. not surrendering
22. gladiators...the result could be random...
23. theives...something i am...
24. chaos
25. ask me and ill give you a random prompt i might tell you to write about something..listen to something and write you reflection... give you a title and write about it etc.
26. This won't kill me
27. the really mean and offensive comments i wrote...yeah... one of them caught the moderater's attention and i almost got banned... if you wanna know what i wrote ask me...
28. hands (pic on the top of the contest)
29. DRUGS DRUGS DRUGS DRUGS DRUGS (PERFERABLY HEROIN)
30. BUT IM NOT A SLAVE TO A GOD THAT DOESNT EXIST BUT IM NOT A SLAVE TO A WORLD THAT DOESNT GIVE A SHIT write something to prove that
31. the more i see, the less i belive
the more i hear, the less i care
32. I FEAR NOTHING
33. arch enemy inspired
if you want more options, ask me and if i like it ill add it to the options list
now the pic has something to do with the contest, option 28
1st place- a gold trophy, 300pts, AND i will comment on up to 100 of your poems (it depends on the number of poems you have written... if i really like them i will comment on more)... lots of chances for applauses...
2nd place- silver trophy, 2pts (read the rest), AND i will comment on 50 of your poems (if you dont have 50 ill just comment on the ones you have, same with 3rd and 1st)...once again lots of chances for applauses
3rd place- bronze trophy, 1pt, i will comment on 25 poems...
honorable mentions- green trophy (i think), i will comment on 10 poems (or more)
rules...
-no erotica and/or adult (i dont think im allowed to view it
but i think its awesome)-chat lingo is annoying and hard to read...dont use it..well, dont over use it
-bashing is allowed (bashing is prefered!!!)
-dont submit over 10 poems...
-i dont like stuff over 70 lines...i dont like stuff over 40 lines... long poems are....harder to read...
-this isnt a rule but its more like advice, when i see poems that have already won other trophies i seem to dislike the poem more...this happens pretty often...
-it can follow more than 1 option
-this isnt a rule but its a good thing to remember, im really honest when i comment if i hate it i will say i hate it if i say i love it, i mean that i love it...
-if your poem doesnt like follow the options..i wont disqualify it but ill probably insult it
um...if youre not sure about something...ask me...
options...lots...i like 1,2,3,4,5,9,16,17,25,26,28, and 29 the most...i suggest you bookmark this contest, ill add more options later.
once i get 150 entries, ill add more honorable mentions and points to trophy winners...
1. something inspired by my poetry...tell me which poem in the author notes...
2. depressing with a cure.. (being rejected and then building your self up etc.)
3. life through another person's eyes
4. saving someone else
5. everyone dies...be surprised your still alive
6. depression...with a reason
7. your life
8. losing something you love...something/someone important to you
9. how much you hate someone
10. killing
11. anything dark
12. being someone else
13. silence
14. emo
15. vamps (vampanze, vampire, vampets, vampirites)...only the Cirque Du Freak kind... i dont like the other vamp shit
16. something paranormal PLEASE ENTER A PARANORMAL POEM I HAVENT READ ANY BUT MY OWN AND I WANT TO READ ANOTHER ONE
17. eyes... ( http://i29.tinypic.com/2zi1t7b.jpg this might help)
18. going insane...something i do often...very often
19. love...but if you do, dont give me like... the common love poem...give me something i havent read before hate to love, love to hate, something different
20. diseases...
21. not surrendering
22. gladiators...the result could be random...
23. theives...something i am...
24. chaos
25. ask me and ill give you a random prompt i might tell you to write about something..listen to something and write you reflection... give you a title and write about it etc.
26. This won't kill me
27. the really mean and offensive comments i wrote...yeah... one of them caught the moderater's attention and i almost got banned... if you wanna know what i wrote ask me...
28. hands (pic on the top of the contest)
29. DRUGS DRUGS DRUGS DRUGS DRUGS (PERFERABLY HEROIN)
30. BUT IM NOT A SLAVE TO A GOD THAT DOESNT EXIST BUT IM NOT A SLAVE TO A WORLD THAT DOESNT GIVE A SHIT write something to prove that
31. the more i see, the less i belive
the more i hear, the less i care
32. I FEAR NOTHING
33. arch enemy inspired
if you want more options, ask me and if i like it ill add it to the options list
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 5, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 2, Bronze: 1, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: i really liked/loved (almost) all the poems judging was really hard enter my future contests (if i have any)
gold-murky water --i really liked the meaning behind this poem
silver- honor the night---yes, i will honor the night
bronze-nightmare--so awesome
honerabe mentions-shelter from pain, a piano and me, anchor
thanks for entering everyone
Contest Winners
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A metaphorical poem about depression, despair, angst, and anger.by redmarkonthewall 11 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 15 10:34 PM 2007. In Dark, Depression, Anger, Sadness, Pain, Angst
Gold trophy winner
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Soddened sheets evince my soul,
My singeing cindered pride.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4165365, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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I painted you a picture
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I hurt badly
Bulging with bumps and bruisesby Catie Sheeran 11 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 21 9:07 PM 2008. In dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Anger, pain, sadness - some of the many effects of depression from a personal view.by redmarkonthewall 8 lines, 16 comments, on Feb 21 8:04 PM 2007. In Pain, Personal, Anger, Hate, Depression• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The entering of a person that gave me hope and comfort in all my troubles and dealings of depression. - redmarkonthewallby redmarkonthewall 14 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 15 9:38 PM 2007. In Hope, Love, Personal, Depression• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Rise The call of ethereal lightby Mirrors shard 31 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 30 3:48 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The sun raises his weary head And the moon puts to rest her ardent starsby Mirrors shard 24 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 29 7:02 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Modern Angel Beautiful girlby Mirrors shard 33 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 24 10:58 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Once again I find myself closing the door on my past,
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The night swallows his haunted form A graveyard to forgotten soulsby Mirrors shard 33 lines, 13 comments, on Mar 29 7:23 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The moon rose in the ebony night A white contrast against a canvas soaked in inkby Mirrors shard 24 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 10 6:18 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Disabled.
Labelled.by Judith Chandler 68 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 25 4:33 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
I hear the silence in my head, Like Screams in the Dark,by ToXiC-AnGeL 40 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 24 10:36 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Torn apart by war, tainted by war, poisoned by war, desecrated by war.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Uncontrolled anger and urge to hate, destroy, and yell.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Trapped within the fog, she stumbles,
Icy fingers grasp her from behind• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When life for me has ended
Have I done all i need to do on this day• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Shaking with fear, I lose myself These thoughts spread diseaseby AshleyAesthetic 30 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 23 4:54 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Beautiful garden
In the courtyardby clara wilson-nelson 13 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 3 10:43 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Your words stung the inner recesses of my heart,
Slashing my confidence, you tore me apart.by coddledsoul 33 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 18 8:29 AM 2007. In Noguest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Tiny little children with voices cute and unrestrained
Trying to piece together words their memories have retainedby judmc 20 lines, 14 comments, on Apr 18 3:25 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Things fell apart Like everyone said they’d doby Tomorrows Window 44 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 25 4:27 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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In my everlasting arms resideby coddledsoul 107 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 31 7:58 AM 2007. In Noguest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My heart breaks
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You run in your room Lock your door• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You hear a cry from nowhere not knowing from what,by Chocoholic156 9 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 16 11:01 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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By your good intentions we've been driven
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The most beautiful ocean I have seen
I'm washed away but still have my control• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The air rent with screams of the dying and dead
The field once virgin green, lay now harlot red
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Pain bleeds from my eyes Scars of past failure• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Even if it doesn't have anything to do with the contest it is a cool picture!
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thanks
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Cool mix of options there, i don't think it says about writing which you chose in your authors notes so just in case "Vengeance Hex" is a mix of options 9 and 16
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um...ok
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Thanks so much for putting me in the finals....I totally appreciate it.
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your welcome
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AHHHHHH!!!! 6 trophies and 15 poems on the finalist list...
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ive gotten rid of 2 poems from the finalist list to make life easier
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90 ENTRIES SO FAR
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hi. ... umm i tried to enter one of my poems here but it took the wrong one because the one i was entering i guess is concidered erotic (even though it isnt erotic)... so somehow it ended up putting in a different poem and i dont think it has anything to do with the options you listed... I tried to take it off the contest but i cant find my poem listed and i dont know how to remove it... so if you want to you can DQ it. sorry bout that. umm... i think the one it took was called "momentary life"
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i dont dq stuff, i perfer writing a really insulting comment instead
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thanks saved me a job later i just removed my poem now
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