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the worst heart break....

i want to see pain. i still going through a heart break and it has been now 2 months since the relationship ended....but we were also together for almost 2 years.

so i want pain...every emotion...every touch..everything...
when it comes to detail..i am very challenging.
so please just do as i ask...

 

the min. amount of lines would have to be 25...i like long..and yet again..detailed poems...

 

do the best you can..and i will message everyone as i read their poem..to help them increase their writing..

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on April 26
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 25, Bronze: 10
  • Final notes:
    everyone did wonderfully on all of the poems entered into my contse.. you all made it very difficult to judge this one!! please continue to write each and everyone of you.. you are all talented..!!!

Contest Winners

  1. Pain & Misery
    If you haven't been stabbed in the heart,
    how do you know it doesn't leave a mark?
    by Midnight-x-Rose 40 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 31 9:38 PM 2007
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Untitled
    So you want to be a hero? You wish to save my soul?
    Then lead me to your silver lining and watch me burn it whole.
    by Blooded Angel 33 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 17 7:22 PM 2005. In Dark
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. 8 seconds left to bleed
    i thought you were a changed person. / boy, was I wrong. you left me here with nothing. / i hate to think, you do this all the time, / but
    by daddys girl08 19 lines, 2 comments, on May 5 7:59 PM 2007. In dark, sad, suicide, pain
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Feel Your Heart [shatter]
    This night, the stars shone so brightly against the black curtain of night and your eyes were so dark, even though we were right under the moon.
    by Pretty Britty 65 lines, 16 comments, on Apr 4 11:09 PM
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. shattered............
    Why is my love life always on such a shaky ground? I always try so hard to find the right person who would love me,
    by Alex Hex 24 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 22 1:45 PM
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. The Departure
    Move along, 'cause I did too...
    Nothing left ties me of you!
    by masky 36 lines, 17 comments, on Dec 11 5:17 PM 2007. In Sad, Thoughts, Personal, Love, Life, Contest
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. heatbreak
    every night,
    it's the same thing...
    by Cerbie20 38 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 22 1:22 PM
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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