heeey!
so heres you options
1. heartbrake, breaking up, never getting the guy/girl
2. peace,hippieness,mother earth
3. cutting,suicide,murder, depression
4. family,friends
5. your biggest fear. ex: rejection, the dark...
6. the best day of your life
7. overcoming depression
8. anything about the upcoming election
rules: please limit cursing
im only 16 so you probably want to use simpler language
enter as many times as you like but i do have a soft spot for new poems.
: )
so heres you options
1. heartbrake, breaking up, never getting the guy/girl
2. peace,hippieness,mother earth
3. cutting,suicide,murder, depression
4. family,friends
5. your biggest fear. ex: rejection, the dark...
6. the best day of your life
7. overcoming depression
8. anything about the upcoming election
rules: please limit cursing
im only 16 so you probably want to use simpler language
enter as many times as you like but i do have a soft spot for new poems.
: )
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 4, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 350, Silver: 250, Bronze: 100
- Final notes: this has got to be my favorite contest ever to judge! i got so many amazing entries and it was extremely hard to judge! thank you everyone who entered and please enter the next one i have : )
Contest Winners
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Walk down these screaming halls, Hearing such painful words.by BittersweetMercy 18 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 22 7:36 AM 2008. In Sad, Dark, Other, Friendship, Goodbyes, Loss, Teen issues, Personal
Gold trophy winner
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Bronze trophy winner
Entries [55]
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by leslielovesthomas 16 lines, 11 comments, on Apr 16 9:12 PM 2008. In Adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I swear I'm not obsessed
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You're not like you use to be.
We're not like we use to be.by Wearychild 28 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 9 11:18 PM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
This poem is about depression and wanting to give up but not having the courage.by Wearychild 44 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 25 11:34 PM 2006. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by U.g.l.y. 95 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 1 3:48 PM 2008. In Love, Sad, Pain, Dedication, Message, Sadness, Depression, Depressed• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I wanna stay
And he wants to go
I want to Cryby My-Insanity 47 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 13 4:05 PM 2008. In Life, Love, Realationships, Personal, Pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I never knew
That you could breathby Angelflower 43 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 20 9:10 AM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Life, Love, Pain, Other, Depressed, Lost in thought• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Droplets of tears stain the black ink Smearing every emotion that was once written there months past• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I need inspiration A reason to keep livingby Midgetbridgey 10 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 19 10:26 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Traits you swore I never had
All your worst fears I made trueby Fourthaxis 36 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 20 6:27 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
my friend and i sit here slicing our way to happinessby LilRaccoon 9 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 20 6:39 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Her hair shined when it was raining,
her smile would brighten a cloudy day,by James R 63 lines, 14 comments, on Mar 31 5:25 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Emo am I,
i look at these scarsby When Darkness Falls 38 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 18 7:58 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Seep away from the paradoxical smiles and frozen looks,
And rapture the moment when you never felt this fear...• Commented on by judge. -
by tigress3737 18 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 5 9:23 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by tigress3737 18 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 24 10:53 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You were there for me for so long
And I alone killed it• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Thoughts of death in my mind
darkness surrounds tears flowby umpa lumpa 17 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 22 10:12 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
So this is the result of when I dont listen to you.
Only now its to late I'm gonna miss you.by Erozay 18 lines, 12 comments, on Apr 25 8:32 AM 2008. In Life, Sad, Pain, Dark, Message, Teenage thinking, Teen issues, Death• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Glasyalabolas 94 lines, 18 comments, on Oct 22 9:28 AM 2007. In Freewrite, My own style, My life, Lost in thought, Depression, Self-Hatred, Suicide• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It’s no wonder I’m a recluse With a sad heart like mineby My Souls Reflection 29 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 21 9:38 AM 2008. In Depression, Personal, Pain, Hope• Commented on by judge.
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Eye to eye Face to face• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Lost in thought
Mind racing• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There is a pain that's deep within; that one cannot let go.
The pain is chained into my heart and the weight hangs heavy there.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The wind whispers in my ear
but it sounds just like your voice.by xoalwaysthinkingxo 17 lines, 11 comments, on Apr 24 7:18 PM 2008. In Love, Sad, Thoughts, Friendship, Teen issues• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The silence of solitude is music like no other / It creates a sense of peace that is parallel to none... / ...This,...This is true serenity / There is no one to whom I must explain myself to / For this is thby Deadmans Heart 10 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 11 8:25 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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An ember is building into a great fire As I watch it rises higher and higherby Deadmans Heart 19 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 13 12:15 PM 2007. In only wrote it for this contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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your gravity is [murderous]by chasing rainbows 26 lines, 33 comments, on Apr 5 11:40 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
He will never realy see
This girl behind the maskby InMyOwnGlassBox 13 lines, 1 comment, on May 3 10:10 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
This is a faulty obsession, This cure will never take,• Commented on by judge.
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the dark floods my senses
encompassing me,by chasing rainbows 39 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 18 7:40 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
the first day i met you i knew we could be together for ever.by kel dog 8 lines, 1 comment, on May 2 7:30 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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sufficating in the darkness trying to find light can i ever change my ways will i make this rightby FallenFromGrace1102 12 lines, 1 comment, on May 2 10:53 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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That crooked posture Stand up straight.by FancyMeDead 35 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 19 2:10 AM 2007
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I don't know what to do Things go downhill from hereby JaneObsidian 27 lines, 3 comments, on May 3 4:13 AM 2008. In Pain, Dark, Depression, Emo, Suicide, Cutting• Commented on by judge.
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Oh God I absolutely do not know thatby PrabhuDayal Khattar 21 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 21 9:54 AM 2008. In Life, Spiritual, Thoughts, Nature
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Broken hearts mended together To make one's own heart wholeby Rhapsody 11 lines, 1 comment, on May 3 2:18 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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