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Escape From The Afterlife!

I was just listening to Avenged Sevenfold's song "Afterlife," and it got me thinking, what if I died and ended up being "trapped" in the afterlife?

So now I am holding a contest to see what kind of poetry you guys can come up with on this topic.

What if you were to die (suicide, homicide, natural, etc.) and when you got to the afterlife, you realize that you don't want to be there (for whatever reasons). You want to escape - you NEED to escape.

This is a very "different" topic than what my contests are usually about. I would love you to really use your imaginations on this one!


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HIRNdveLnJI&NR=1 - Afterlife by Avenged Sevenfold


~*~ RULES ~*~

1) No WrItInG LiKe ThIs
2) or lyk dis
3) Grammar and spelling are very important - Please make sure it is perfect - or as close to perfect as it can get.

That's pretty much it. Just have fun! Rhyme scheme and format are totally up to you - just try to make it hold my attention throughout the whole poem


Oh yeah - I forgot to say that Since April is National Poetry Month, I am going to try to hold a contest every April! This is year one! hehe

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on June 20, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    To all of you lovely contestants,

    Thank you so much for being patient with me. I know I took FOREVER to judge this thing, but I have been so busy with things outside of AP to worry about it. Sorry, but now it is finally over!! YAY!

    I was a little upset because many of you (and you know who you are) didn't really follow the prompt, just submitted an old poem you had that mentioned the afterlife, which isn't what the contest is about. I would like to thank those of you who followed the prompt! And congratulations to all of the winners! You all did an amazing job!

    Keep on writing!!
    Alex


    and a special thanks to ModernXtimes for helping me with this project

Contest Winners

  1. The pain faded. The arguing stopped.
    by oOJohnOo 52 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 20 1:55 AM 2008
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. The fighting stopped.
    I opened my eyes
    by howlinginpain 20 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 28 11:14 AM 2007. In Heaven, road, Dark, spiritual, anti-spiritual
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. It wasn’t anything spectacular, my life that is,
    by MelodiousDreaming 71 lines, 8 comments, on May 10 7:59 PM 2008
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. by StroonsGreen 16 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 19 11:51 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. by MJ Donnelly 34 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 22 1:53 PM 2008. In Spiritual, Thoughts, Dark, Fantasy, Pain, Death
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. He lost his lily-white wings,
    untouched by corruption or imperfection; above reproach:
    by Shipwreck 17 lines, 7 comments, on May 10 6:32 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. by LeilaJayne 33 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 21 3:48 AM 2007. In afterlife sad personal
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. Seize beneath the luxary of nail beds, dirt under the cuticle
    a soft bottle
    by AliceInTheRealWorld 74 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 9 7:47 AM 2008. In Pain, Second Chance, Second lIfe, Contest entry
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4274855, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

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  • Simply Simple
    April 19, 2008
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    Ooooh! Sounds like fun! So passed bookmarked. Will enter sometime in the next few say. I promise. Unless I get swamped, or all the spot fill.


  • transcendental baby gold member
    April 19, 2008
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    Idon't think it's reversible ... but you can hope


  • atticus snow
    April 20, 2008
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    "Grammar and spelling is very important - Please make sure it is perfect - or as close to perfect as it can get."

    Don't you mean grammar and spelling [are] very important?


    • brightXdarkness
      April 20, 2008
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      oh wow hahaha thanks

      It's a funny mistake though I'm usually very good with that.

  • Vera Rich gold member
    April 20, 2008
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    Who was it who said that Hell is simply heaven endured by those not ready to appreciate it!


  • DAMSELx
    May 10, 2008
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    Nice idea for a contest!
    Bookmarked

  • AliceInTheRealWorld
    May 28, 2008
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    The day I went to enter it's closed

  • bobby3332321
    June 13, 2008
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    awsome promt

    Awsome promt I just couldn't bring myself to right anything good enough for your contest


  • individuality gold member
    June 17, 2008
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    if you are going to insult me do it with some flair, dont be boring

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