It's simple people, make me cry. I want the most heart broken piece of work you got.
Rules:
1)no sticky caps
2)I would like the poem to rhyme, but if it doesn't and it's still amazing then give it to me.
3)If you don't at least make my heart hurt then it's not sad, if you make me actually cry then it's an amazing write. So if I don't feel sad when I read the poem I will DQ you.
Get going already!
Rules:
1)no sticky caps
2)I would like the poem to rhyme, but if it doesn't and it's still amazing then give it to me.
3)If you don't at least make my heart hurt then it's not sad, if you make me actually cry then it's an amazing write. So if I don't feel sad when I read the poem I will DQ you.
Get going already!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 26, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 80, Bronze: 40, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Man! Sorry it took me so long! This one was really really hard to judge people! You are ALL so freakin talented! You are all winners in my eyes. So don't take this judging personal. All of you keep writing! Thank you so much for the amazing contest! It was so beautiful and sad. Everyone made me cry!
Thanks again,
Jenn
Contest Winners
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She was the gentle age of four, inquisitive eyes of light blue,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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You came to me in a dream
The facts i'm still unsure• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4164495, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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there stands a girl alone in the world• Viewed by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [37]
1 - 37 of 37
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Think of me as just the same;
I’ll be there when you call.by passim 34 lines, 24 comments, on Mar 9 3:56 PM 2008. In Personal Loss. Sadness and Grief• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Each night he sat to wait for her to call Waiting with nothing but the telephone• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Rushing to the river of thoughts
my mind is a waterfall pouring out ideasby sillsill44 7 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 17 8:46 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I died on a hot summer day of 2006 in Iraq,
an AK-47 bullet to my chest.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Why does this have to hurt so much I shouldn't be aloneby JstImagine4Once 27 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 19 7:53 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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I cried when I came home today
I heard that you were goneby bluecollarlove 23 lines, 17 comments, on Apr 13 10:33 AM 2007. In Despair--bluecollarlove• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She's beautiful I tell you,nothing else so pure
her laughter, her smile, always felt so secure.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Forcing my eyes open but they feel lazy
Figures around me are hazyby Failed Abortion 15 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 24 1:16 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
So this is the result of when I dont listen to you.
Only now its to late I'm gonna miss you.by Erozay 18 lines, 12 comments, on Apr 25 8:32 AM 2008. In Life, Sad, Pain, Dark, Message, Teenage thinking, Teen issues, Death• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Days and nights passes
but thoughts of you I heed,by Abner 25 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 27 10:06 AM 2008. In Love, Sad, Lost in thought, Longing, Teen issues• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
steering my car of life
driving me into traffic
waiting and wanting a collisionby HereComesTheSun 56 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 28 6:16 PM 2008. In personal, bipolar, depression, self, secape, suicide, pain, other, thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Eyes sparkling like emeralds
God- he's so beautiful• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
"I don't want you"
"You don’t want me?"• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I watched as the road slipped away from my sight
Out the back window of my last, final flight.by NeverSayAddiction 87 lines, 9 comments, on May 2 6:52 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
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I want to die with blood filling my lungs but I need to singby Young Spook 30 lines, on May 2 6:38 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Her beauty of her physical self and her soul she could not see.
Imprisioned since birth by her shame and and her self blame, theby skye01 11 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 7 12:06 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Often I dream of us together forever, bonded by our undying love,
our fate would be held in our hands, our destiny has already begun.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Suicide of a porclean doll...by Morphine Mayhem 42 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 27 7:28 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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hope you have lots of crys reading my poem. it is true.he thinks his music is important than me
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