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Losing someone and losing the pride for them

Ok, this is to do with the matter I loved a guy who moved to London. I had my heart set on him and he told me such sweet things then I bumped into peple who told me they knew him and he was after just 1 thing.. sex. Who the hell should I believe? This is why I'm writing this.. I never ever normally do poems like this so it's a start.. and this contest... please make no simple poetry - distort the words, use your head! xxxx

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 3, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    ok thanks you people.. well done.. nice thoughts and good ideas
  • To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 4 awards but only 3 finalists.

Contest Winners

  1. Puppy
    Your fish-hook love nestles in my thoughts,
    by Anna Kay 33 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 25 3:51 PM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Angry
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. [ You whisper such lovley words in my ear, ]
    You whisper such lovley words in my ear,
    You melt my heart with such emotions.
    by EmmaLuLu 3 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 18 5:18 AM 2008. In Love
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. It hurts, it bleeds...it’s supposed to be like this?
    I don’t blame you anymore
    I locked the last open door
    by evanescentgothfairy 23 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 18 11:25 AM 2008. In Sad, Pain, Personal
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]

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  • LeanneBridgewater
    May 3, 2008
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    ok

    this contest didn't go good.. i wish i never opened it really seeing as I were drunk at the time.. but I've read the 4 entries.. and I do apologize for the lack of interest I've actually shown .. I've been mega busy and I swear my next contest will be much better for you people! Thanks for the beautiful entries though!I'm about to judge.. good luck you 4.. and I suppose everybody's a winner seeing as you'll all be winning something