Prompt 10 entries/ 30 words more or less

Prompt is: "The Day I Stopped Breathing"

Metaphor is great,as the phrase it's self is metaphoric
imagery, feelings, creative all wonderful

Whatever you would like, just stay on prompt...

there will be a round two for this contest...

15 entries

30 words more or less

Thank you,
mystic

Contest is Over

mum

by eoz 7 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 18 2:26 AM 2008. In Contest
Gold trophy winner

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two edged

by going nowhere 10 lines, 12 comments, on Apr 18 12:03 AM 2008
Silver trophy winner

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Wobbly Wings Wrestle

Hesitation's discourse flatters every sense of expectancy

by 2lullabyhaven 7 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 17 10:57 PM 2008. In Contest
Bronze trophy winner

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Throttle

Prompt is: "The Day I Stopped Breathing"

by PatheticKt 33 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 18 6:38 AM 2008. In Life, Pain, Hope, Lost in thought, Noguest

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Knocked Up (You're a Daisy if You Do)

his gentle kiss erased

by Tam 27 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 18 1:32 AM 2008

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Lucid stillness

When the day tide broke I hit a blind alley.

by maralisa 6 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 18 2:45 AM 2008

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Final Destination

by Lavender Butterfly 11 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 18 3:14 AM 2008. In Sad

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Breathless

Blinding snow,
Vision obscured.

by buffsab99 12 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 18 6:45 AM 2008. In Personal

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One, Two, Three With Many Inbetween

by Carly Pop 6 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 17 10:43 PM 2008

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What a relief!

burdened soul heavy
confused mind devoid

by Dark Otter 16 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 17 10:53 PM 2008. In Dark, Life, Pain, Sad, Spiritual, Thoughts, Weird

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My Gift to You

by U.g.l.y. 6 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 17 11:15 PM 2008. In Angst, Dark, Pain, Sad, Depression, Sadness, Contest, Suicide, Message, Depressed

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