I need a poem about love, specifically about how you can love someone but they may not love you back.
Rules:
Nothing dark or erotic
No StIcKy CaPs
Give me metaphors and alot of emotion
Have fun!!
Rules:
Nothing dark or erotic
No StIcKy CaPs
Give me metaphors and alot of emotion
Have fun!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 20, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 350, Silver: 125, Bronze: 20
- Final notes: Congrats to all
Contest Winners
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Tears fall from my eyes
As I gasp air for you• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Her name.
Your dagger.by AbbyxGrace 32 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 21 8:31 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [26]
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Aching pain,
I feel so weak.by darkened-sunlight 17 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 15 7:08 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It was a paragraph poem first, but for metric reasons, it ended like this.by Kyo-N 10 lines, 12 comments, on Dec 22 12:39 AM 2007. In Depressed, Love, Dedication, Pain, Contest, My own style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Never content
To give fully of itself.by strangerforeigner 24 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 18 5:48 AM 2006. In Angst• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
'The one' you say, you wanted him,by JUGULAR vain 25 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 3 7:18 AM 2008. In personal sad life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I was born
a bright new sun• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I watch him betray her I watch him not seeby xxbrokenxagainxx 45 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 27 7:11 PM 2008. In Life, Friendship, Lost love, Loss• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"Me, love and you... Three halves of something whole, If one is missing, everything is clear."• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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ok. so the kids are stupid.
they make you cry.by kel dog 10 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 24 7:17 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
Soft spoken words
can sometimes be more deafening than shouts.by JWGoethe 19 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 27 1:00 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Why can't I get you out of my head and heart?
We know we were meant to be from the start.by dreamdragon6484 14 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 10 9:09 PM 2006. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Its sad that I can't even get him to love me
In my own make believe dream• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
sweet dreams little lamb
for it's you• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I loved you the day we met
I'll love you till I dieby bluecollarlove 23 lines, 15 comments, on Mar 20 4:21 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
sequences of pride and pain co-exist inside the mind of the one who has lost, but hope comes along side this combination of what could quite possibly be emotionally fatal. an inward look into who is who and what is what, andby jaxahallic 0 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 15 9:51 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I spend a moment in the brilliance of the sun light trickling down from the dark grey clouds. A flash of orange and glance at her glowing f• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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thank you for bronze, and congrats to other winners
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