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Look at the picture and write me a poem ...

Human Statue of Liberty

This is a bit of history that would have
been lost had it not been for the Internet and our ability to share
things like this.

The picture was taken in 1918. It is 18,000 men
preparing for war in a training camp at Camp Dodge in Iowa .
A gift from our grandfathers. ..

Base to shoulder: 150 feet

Right arm: 340 feet

Widest part of arm holding torch: 12 1/2 feet

Right thumb: 35 feet

Thickest part of the body: 29 feet

Left hand (length): 30 feet

Tablet in left hand: 27 feet

Face: 60 feet

Nose: 21 feet

Longest spike of head piece: 70 feet

Flame on torch: 600 feet

Torch and flame combined: 980 feet

Number of men in flame of torch: 12,000

Number of men in torch: 2,800

Number of men in right arm: 1,200

Number of men in body, head and balance of figure only: 2,000



The photo was taken from 1235 feet above or approximately one quarter of a mile high.


I have reason to believe that my Grandfather was in this picture. Perhaps yours was too.

All pertinent rules apply. Watch your spelling, grammar and punctuation. I want poems, not nonsense, and no prose chopped up into lines to look like a poem. No bashing of anybody or anything, whether you have the right on your side or not. Also no profanity.

Keep in mind that this is the 21st Century. Archaic language won't be liable to get you anywhere.

I prefer rhyme, of course, but a good free verse poem will be acceptable. Something positive would be nice. I'm a bit tired of all the negativity in the world nowadays.


Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on April 28, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 7 people
  • Final notes:
    Well, I had hoped for a few more entries, but the ones I got were mostly all good poems, and I'm not too unhappy with the final outcome. The HM's are in no particular order, but I felt that everyone who entered deserved some recognition for taking the time and putting the effort into writing a poem for this contest. Consequently, all of the entries received a trophy.

    Thanks for entering and good luck with your writing in the future.

Contest Winners

  1. I have this postcard. On the back
    Scrawled in an eighth-grade hand,
    by micol 28 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 27 4:28 PM 2008
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Stating to the world and every immigrant who views this great statue
    T ruth, liberty and justice for all is its message to this world of d
    by DragonBlue 17 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 16 6:47 AM 2008. In Personal, Society, Thoughts
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. For her, each solider proudly risks his own life.
    She is our mother, our sister, our wife.
    by Anemone 24 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 16 1:39 AM 2008. In Society
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. And there we were awaiting
    the children's breaths were baiting
    by EternitysLastWish 26 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 16 4:53 AM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Proud, enthused youth of uniquely free nation,
    Marching willingly into history's cruel maw;
    by mwilson50 19 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 14 6:55 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. At that time and in that place,
    Eighteen thousand gave Liberty a face.
    by jeffysgrl 13 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 27 1:12 PM 2008. In contest, society, patriotic
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. When men's souls weary with the toil of life,
    longing for rest from the daily strife,
    by Elrenia 36 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 14 4:07 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. Port-barrel Henry
    took up the sides
    by RyanosaurusWrecks 21 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 14 11:00 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. The world at our fingertips, The ones they trust.
    by rememberthewriter 11 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 14 3:59 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • Death of the Author
    April 14, 2008
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    Wow...getting the perspective right must have been crazy! Awesome picture, good luck


  • CountryCousin
    April 14, 2008
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    AWESOME.

    The picture is awesome. I hope you get many enteries to do it justice.


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    April 14, 2008
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    wow this pic is awesome.... thanks for sharing and I hope you get what your looking for in this..


  • EternitysLastWish
    April 15, 2008
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    Wow... this looks like a really interesting one.

    Mind if I have a go?

    Jess x


  • Elrenia
    April 29, 2008
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    Congratulations to everyone. Very interesting photo and a great opportunity to reflect on what it stands for. Thank you.

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