Haha ok the reason the points are weird is cause i wanted to clear out all of my own cause i love you guys so much but heres the deal,
I'm getting annoyed by the lack of solid poetry here and the oppressing form rules (which do not dictate proof of creativity)
So give me what you got something you think deserves to win gold!
Also, I hate hate hate forced Rhyme, flowing Rhyme is fine (internal is nice) but forced rhyme makes it sound well... FORCED
With Love,
James Ether, King of Ikana
I'm getting annoyed by the lack of solid poetry here and the oppressing form rules (which do not dictate proof of creativity)
So give me what you got something you think deserves to win gold!
Also, I hate hate hate forced Rhyme, flowing Rhyme is fine (internal is nice) but forced rhyme makes it sound well... FORCED
With Love,
James Ether, King of Ikana
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 13, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 2
- Final notes: I wanted to comment on these entries but i couldnt. In fact i found it a chore just to fill out a finalist list, Profoundly disappointed guys, I'm not doing prewrites in the future if thats all im gonna get.
Contest Winners
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- Error: Unable to find finalist item 4117321, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Entries [12]
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STOP! / Everyone sit! / Now, can't we all stop acting like kids? / You there! / You little shit, / Its all about you isn't it? / I have bee• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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blooming daffodils amid the emerald sea make us giddy as rabbits sail through the waves• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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FOR EVER LOSE When I see you I want to hold you and never let you go,by tonyher 31 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 20 9:29 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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He found himself at Edgemont Station
a stick straight figure wrapped in army greenby Carly Pop 30 lines, 21 comments, on Sep 28 4:06 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Hearts race
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