I won gold in Dalaney's recent PIF (http://allpoetry.com/contest/2398717) and so am now following the intructions inherent therin
Your task: Pen me something new, something fun, or serious, or whatever you choose. Just make the dance to your tune so loudly that the message is clear
The Prompt: "Every breath exhales onto a changed world"
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The picture:
Quick rules:
--Don't us the phrase as your title
--You may put the phrase in your piece, but the point is more to be inspired by the words than to mimick them
--if you write about the photo, pleas oh please don't write what is expected, I want something no one else would have come up with. If I think the poem is about something that has been overdone, I'll give a warning. If it still remains as is after a week, I will remove it from the contest. So please, be origional!!
Lastly, as always Enjoy it!!
Your task: Pen me something new, something fun, or serious, or whatever you choose. Just make the dance to your tune so loudly that the message is clear
The Prompt: "Every breath exhales onto a changed world"
Or:
The picture:
Quick rules:
--Don't us the phrase as your title
--You may put the phrase in your piece, but the point is more to be inspired by the words than to mimick them
--if you write about the photo, pleas oh please don't write what is expected, I want something no one else would have come up with. If I think the poem is about something that has been overdone, I'll give a warning. If it still remains as is after a week, I will remove it from the contest. So please, be origional!!
Lastly, as always Enjoy it!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 1, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Thank you all for the interesting reads, and I hope to see you again at some future contest!
- To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 4 awards but only 3 finalists.
Contest Winners
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What is this world
But a place in constant motion• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
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Silver trophy winner
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She became what I became• Commented on by judge.
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I wish people could see how i feel cant they see I'm screaming on the inside?by MuffledScreams 14 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 29 8:12 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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My Bloody Night Alone...
I wish people could see how i feel
cant they see I'm screaming on the inside?
i want to get free!
one more deep cut on my elegant wrist will take my last heart beat and my last thoughts on this ignorant world called earth.
so i put the blade to my skin once again
i feel the sharp edge on my skin and my heart racing
i watch as my unsteady hand presses down on my pale white skin and moves down the middle of my arm.
i see the blood racing out of the center of my arm
i wonder how long it will take until I'm gone for good.
i lift the bloody razor blade from my skin and watch all the blood drip off my arm onto the hard wooden floor beneath me.
my eyes slowly shut and i hear nothing
i feel nothing
i am nothing...
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omg help!
idk how to add a pin -.-
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um, why is the poem posted here too?
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because i wrote it and it was rlly good so i copied it from here and pasted it on my profile i rlly liked it so i wanted to save it =] -
Thanks!
Thanks for the wonderful gold trophy
I am happy to know you enjoyed my entry. Congrats to all the other winners as well!
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