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i'll be reopening the contest/removing poems/increasing number of entries/points etc as it takes my fancy. hopefully judging will be done by the end of the week.


xx






Party game: in the comment section below make lists of things that make you happy.


Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 3, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    Thank you for your fine entries, and for allowing me to pick hole in your poetry. These winning pieces are spectacular.

    xx

Contest Winners

  1. by Ryno 21 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 1 1:59 PM 2008
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. [he wrote
    love letters in pencil-
    by deadcolor dreams 19 lines, 13 comments, on Aug 26 6:53 PM 2007
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. by Ryno 48 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 12 11:33 PM 2008
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [14]

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  • ForeverLastingComa
    April 1, 2008
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    -my bf
    -my best friends
    -food
    -music
    -god
    ....hmm i can't think of anymore...*sighs*


  • raven-ink
    April 1, 2008
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    music
    my friends
    my sister
    doodling


  • flight
    April 1, 2008
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    good wheather, my friends/family/boy, food, wonderful powerful music, good writing, physical contact, hard alcohol, writing, singing, acting, swinging, laughing loud and hard, taking the world by storm...

    peace to all ~flight


  • Cannonsfire
    April 1, 2008
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    I can think of many...the way a newborn baby smells,
    a gift of a perfect single rose
    watching a horse run free across the mountains in the high country,
    seeing someone smile at me just because they can,
    a long, hot bath on a cold afternoon,
    watching lightning in the sky at night,
    finding a song that makes you think of a special someone.... ok that's enough I will waffle otherwise! Love, C

  • DancingRed
    April 1, 2008
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    giant bookshelves in rickety old bookstores.

    the way my arms become weightless when i spin in dizzy circles in the rain.

    bare feet. crunching on autumn leaves. fresh cut grass.

  • Virgoan
    April 2, 2008
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    damn...I am late again for a party

  • Virgoan
    April 2, 2008
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    -chocolates
    -art films
    -beach and the sunset
    -books
    -a beautiful smile
    -dogs
    -a can of cold beer
    -kids




    ...


  • JessieDefective
    April 5, 2008
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    *music*
    *friends*
    *warm nights in the city*
    *good times*
    *hot rain*
    *his bed.


  • Ryno
    May 3, 2008
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    Wow! Thank-you for the Gold and Bronze and the contest
    Congrats to redonyx on the silver

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