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Make her smile...

My lovely girlfriend suffers from a horrible depression and had to leave me today for undergoing a treatment somewhere save...She feels guilty towards me and I can't find no words right now to tell her I will love her and will be here for her...no matter what...she means the world to me...


All I need is poems telling her that...



I have the right to DQ your poem if I think it doesn't fit what I am looking for, I will tell you first before I do that...

The closing date will exchange during this contest so take your time...

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 4, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 27 people
  • Final notes:
    Finaly I've got me time to judge my contest...as you all would have seen I have read every entry without a comment, I would appriciate it tough if you would leave your poem here with me because I am going to comment on each and everyone of you....
    As I read all I see a lot of understanding in times like this...I wanted my girlfriend to read all the entries too but right after she came home she got the flu with high feever and was very ill for a week. But now she is doing a bit better and maybe today or tomorrow she will read your poems too.....
    Thank you all for those wonderful words of love...

    I hope all your lives are filled with love too

    Jeannette

Contest Winners

  1. by JeannieD Hunter 28 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 13 3:35 PM 2008. In Contest, Love
    Gold trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  2. How does the sun tell the earth of its love?
    How do the heavens speak from above?
    by KayJay 16 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 24 10:06 AM 2008. In Love, Hope, Thoughts
    Silver trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  3. My love As I stand here looking into your eyes
    by Unsigned 18 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 1 1:42 PM 2008
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4138565, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. May the Poetic Gods
    give you strength
    by dillpickle62 41 lines, on Apr 2 4:41 AM 2008. In Contest, Love
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  6. You are my guiding star on a warm summer night, my lovely Aphrodite
    There is only so much words can confess, only so much they can convey
    by Terran 12 lines, on Apr 2 12:00 PM 2008. In Love, Hope, Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  7. Every star in the sky would be yours if only I could reach them The sun would be warming your hand if I could get to it
    by Short but cute 17 lines, on Apr 1 12:47 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  8. Rough times come, And rough times go,
    by my.stars.dont.shine 44 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 1 12:59 PM 2008. In Love, Other, Contest
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  9. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4155009, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  10. This morning i looked out at the sky, The sun was rising in colours of gold,
    by Yunalonei 23 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 24 2:52 AM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  11. I'd take up this cross for you,
    I'd make it my burden to bare,
    by MissyMouse 44 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 24 10:39 AM 2008. In Contest, Love, Pain, Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  12. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4160635, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  13. When those painful tears
    Begin to fall
    by Blooming Poet 10 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 24 4:27 PM 2008. In personal, posey, love
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  14. I dreamt of you the other night
    a strange dream I’ll admit,
    by MelodiousDreaming 31 lines, 12 comments, on Apr 24 11:46 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  15. There was at once that glorious moment, The very instant in which breathing was surpassed
    by James Ether 18 lines, on Apr 25 12:10 PM 2008. In Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]

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  • Ephiphany
    April 1, 2008
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    Awww this is so sweet.


  • my.stars.dont.shine
    April 1, 2008
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    hm. interesting.
    i shall enter. =]


  • Dienush
    April 1, 2008
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    This is a very nice and sweet thing you're doing and I'm sure she'll appreciate it a lot.
    Just a thought, though... I don't know about your girlfriend, but usually I think it's preferable for you to tell someone "I love you" yourself, just like that, to having someone else write even a masterpiece about how you love someone.
    Anyway, I'll think about this. Again, it's a very thoughtful contest. Many people don't have anyone who'd do this for them. Good luck getting some very nice entries

    ~Diana

  • Warrior7
    April 2, 2008
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    This is a great contest for your girlfriend, but i won't enter it, sorry !


  • VerminVomit
    April 23, 2008
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    i hope she gets better

  • Virgoan
    April 26, 2008
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    this is really a good contest. i wish i have seen this early.




    i miss this feeling so much. i envy you, you love and are loved.


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