so i just got a band together. in order to celebrate i decided to ask you the good people of allpoetry to help me out. i want your best lyrics!!! i would prefer if you wrote one just to show how much you want to win but prewrites are allowed. now get out there and write me some lyrics!!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 15, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 300, Bronze: 150
- Final notes: ok now this was a hard one i had all of these amazing lyrics and could only give a few of you points:|
if it were up to me id give you all honorable mentions but i didnt have enough points to do that. thank you to everyone who entered my contest and i loved everyones lyrics so please dont feel discouraged you all should keep writing. may you have a good life and if you would like to talk to me then pm me i would love to get to kno some of you
Contest Winners
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We Painted Love Every Shade of Red
I hear a song sing to me, and it almost brings me to my knees,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Think someone else just be with me
Love someone else but please be with me• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Entries [30]
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No words come to mind.
I can’t believe we’re not together.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Can you play me one more love song
I'm dancing with my friendby bluecollarlove 23 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 8 9:39 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Lying in your bed at night
wondering where you go when you dieby The Outspoken Nobody 35 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 17 10:09 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Seems like all our souls are forgotten
Leaves this world so dark and rottenby oothesaxmanoo 86 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 1 12:08 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
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I'm here again, I'm here again, Everytime i fall in love,by shadowskill 67 lines, on Nov 26 10:23 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The sun will rise tomorrow.
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Ya ever feel so deep and lost
Somewhere in the past?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Before I knew what it was all I did was pretend I faked that I saw it in your eyesby Popping Balloons 36 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 12 8:30 AM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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together forever
that's what you saidby ilovebigfoot 33 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 27 4:45 PM 2006. In Lyrics• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
For the first time in my life, I envied my best friends,by Boondock Saint 41 lines, on Mar 5 6:57 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I know that I can't stop you
I know that no matter what I sayby me alone 42 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 15 9:37 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I can see clearly now my pain has gone.
Gone are the scarey feelings that blocked my mind.by maralisa 20 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 14 8:34 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Thinking of you, I'm thinking of you, all I can do is just think about you. Whenver I'm sad and blue, and need someone to comfort me too,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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33 Lines of Her Storyby Mr.Stratocaster 41 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 7 5:55 PM 2008. In Pain, society, depression, murder, death, letting go, sadness• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I never knew that it would happen like this, That love was just a simple challenge that you just conquered.by gummybears2 22 lines, on Apr 14 2:50 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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I watched the animals
Get slaughtered in stables
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This poem shows how God is there when you need him most and not just up there on his throne• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It's I against I / Basis Instincts shrivel / Like a slug in the burning sun / The bell in my head tolls endlessly / Sound waves visible / Light rays unbearable / Both a six man gang / Ready to slaughter me likeby TerrorAndHubris 17 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 11 12:20 PM 2007. In Lyrics, Personal, Abuse, Society, Thoughts, Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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now you know a party isnt a party with out jewels
now dont we Jeff he he 
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Long time
My first time back on In over a year I do believe, I never stopped writing though, hope you like it -
well sax man i am sure i will and yes jules there is no party w/o you
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only two finalists?
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its so hard grading it they all are amazing pieces. i kno of about 3 more i want to add to the list but havnt had time to add them yet
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thanks for the bronze, gimmie half an hour and i will visit your poetry, the sun is shining on my screen right now and i cant see very well
the curtains are nailed up lol
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your welcome you deserved it so you got it so no need on thanking me really. and thnx for reading my lyrics
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thanks for the gold!!
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you are welcome im glad you entered the contest i loved your piece
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