the pic is my feelings right now
have something you need to vent about, vent here.
anything that is venting, even PW if they are no more then a Month old. Bitch at me if you need to me, cry if you need to. Just say what you need to say
20 entries per person
unlimited lines
cussing is okay, actually prefered
ALSO I WILL DQ ANYTHING I FEEL LIKE, IF YOU HAVE A FU**IN PROBLEM WITH IT THATS YOUR FAULT
Example of my scoring
Title: 4/5- A little cliche
Venting: 45/50- The pain is defintitly there, but I feel you didn't say all you had to say
My Personal Like/Dislike: 10/15- Not my favorite theme, but not my least favorite
Followed Rules: 20/20- Perfect
Grammer/Spelling: 5/10- words are a little too common
Total: 85/100
AS OF TODAY MARCH 31, ANYONE ENTERING, THAT HAS NOT ALREADY ENTERED MAY ONLY ENTER ONE POEM. IF YOU ALREADY HAVE MULTIPLE ENTRIES IN, IGNORE THIS NOTICE
ALSO YOU WILL RECIEVE 2 MAYBE 3 SCORES ON YOUR POEMS, BOTH NEED TO BE INCLUDED IN POEM TITLE
have something you need to vent about, vent here.
anything that is venting, even PW if they are no more then a Month old. Bitch at me if you need to me, cry if you need to. Just say what you need to say
20 entries per person
unlimited lines
cussing is okay, actually prefered
ALSO I WILL DQ ANYTHING I FEEL LIKE, IF YOU HAVE A FU**IN PROBLEM WITH IT THATS YOUR FAULT
Example of my scoring
Title: 4/5- A little cliche
Venting: 45/50- The pain is defintitly there, but I feel you didn't say all you had to say
My Personal Like/Dislike: 10/15- Not my favorite theme, but not my least favorite
Followed Rules: 20/20- Perfect
Grammer/Spelling: 5/10- words are a little too common
Total: 85/100
AS OF TODAY MARCH 31, ANYONE ENTERING, THAT HAS NOT ALREADY ENTERED MAY ONLY ENTER ONE POEM. IF YOU ALREADY HAVE MULTIPLE ENTRIES IN, IGNORE THIS NOTICE
ALSO YOU WILL RECIEVE 2 MAYBE 3 SCORES ON YOUR POEMS, BOTH NEED TO BE INCLUDED IN POEM TITLE
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 14, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Thanks so much everyone. I also want to thank my second judge for helping me make this contest a huge success.
Contest Winners
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 4084767, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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If I have to answer
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Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [46]
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We're going over daddy's now,
We're going to have a chat,by XxEMOxxHEARTxx 83 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 30 10:32 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by U.g.l.y. 95 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 1 3:48 PM 2008. In Love, Sad, Pain, Dedication, Message, Sadness, Depression, Depressed• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A broken record “what did I do, what did I do wrong.”
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If I can't learn to fly, teach me to sing.
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Never can I conform
to the gentleness requiredby RyanosaurusWrecks 43 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 27 9:18 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Street, rags, croocked banks
I don't know why people live in this dump.
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where did those hopeful dreams go?
i once asked myself this, but came to a quick conclusion.by Lotus Dreamer 38 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 1 12:13 AM 2008. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge. -
Choking mouth evidenced
across paragraphed pages.by RyanosaurusWrecks 24 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 14 1:21 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Hashnah Sheviatte 11 lines, 12 comments, on Oct 29 8:01 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Hashnah Sheviatte 40 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 1 9:41 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Hashnah Sheviatte 18 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 29 5:15 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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When I was young and until now
I always admire a living tree.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I stand as I grew all alone
And I make all the pieces of me.by Hashnah Sheviatte 24 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 29 4:49 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Hashnah Sheviatte 10 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 9 8:29 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The human society is full of beggars,
It is surprising,by Freelance writer 24 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 25 4:17 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Recalling days of yesteryear
We came, we saw, we criedby Rakerman1 49 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 31 9:04 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'm standing in a pool of blood, / Where did it come from? / My friends all look in horror, / I laugh. What else can I do? / My wrists are bleeding, / But what can I say? / They rush out for me,by Sams Princess 34 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 19 7:47 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Theres this feeling I've had for quite some timeby Tortured Poet 33 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 25 9:02 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Its been so long since I've felt strongby Tortured Poet 23 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 8 3:53 PM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Thoughts, Other, Pain, Depression• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Its a time like this where fate comes inby Tortured Poet 23 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 11 7:18 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Is this what you wanted the thing I have becomeby Tortured Poet 28 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 20 2:46 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You told him stuff / I thought I could trust you with / but you broke my trust / even after what you did / You still say things / to make mby Tortured Poet 23 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 6 9:32 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I carry the world everywhere I goby Tortured Poet 23 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 24 12:45 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You gave me happiness
You said I make you happy,by DarkLotus4Life. 51 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 1 4:51 PM 2008. In Personal, Love, Lost love, Pain, Sad, Emo, Teenage thinking, Depressed, Emptiness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I apologize If I don’t seemby grapefruite 36 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 28 11:05 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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How am I ever Supposed to believe you care• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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you just dont understand me,
you just sont want to care,
you just dont want to listen,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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ummmmmmmmmmmmmm wow, i didn't know you cussed lol
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yes, I do. depending on my feelings. I was kinda annoyed last night
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As soon as I have a score I will place it in the title
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I am working on it. I am a very busy gilrl.
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haven't recieved a score yet... but when i do, i will be sure to do as you ask.
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aaaa! reali sorry! just enterd 3 poems! then saw the sign saying from 31st only 1 entry pp! sorry!
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just leave them
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wait never mind. I said one
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well u can detelt the other ones if u want up2 u! thnx 4 wb
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*delete is what i was meaning to put
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yeh, no, sorry i missed that bit out sumhow! sorry
umm yeh just delete the otheres but please leave in one...the pain that contains within..if poss, if not delte them from ur contest..sorry
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Burned to a crisp- 88
I Love You, Daddy- 80.5
How Absurd- 78
Apology- 88
Oregano- 72
Your Favorite Game- 83.5
User Friendly- 80
Hermit the 9- 87.5
Quality Love Song- 75.5
Angry+Vulgar- 88
Twist Of Love- 81.5
Please Stop Talking- 82
Vampire's Wrath- 80.5
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