I here recently have had a relationship ended, one I never thought would... and When it first happened I could handle it cause I wouldn't think about it, But now all I can do when I sleep is dream of him, and dreaming that he still wants me and loves me and it made me realize that I still feel the same about him and it's hurting me... and I need to read something to make me cry. So here is the catagories,
[A] make me cry with a sad poem
[B] write a poem describeing the feeling that I still feel for him
[C] write a poem saying how much you feel hurt when this happens.
[D] anything related.
NO SUCIDE POEMS!
USE SPELL CHECK!
NO LESS THAN 20 LINES!
NO MORE THAN 45 LINES!
PUT SCREEN NAME IN AUTHORS BOX!
[A] make me cry with a sad poem
[B] write a poem describeing the feeling that I still feel for him
[C] write a poem saying how much you feel hurt when this happens.
[D] anything related.
NO SUCIDE POEMS!
USE SPELL CHECK!
NO LESS THAN 20 LINES!
NO MORE THAN 45 LINES!
PUT SCREEN NAME IN AUTHORS BOX!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 20, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 450, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 7 people
- Final notes: Wow, this contest was hard to judge. I had extended this contest several times cause I kept getting entry after entry with many beautiful and stunning poems. I extended it one more time before I ended it to find only 2 more people would enter. But after reading an amazing 84 poems. I had broken it down to 10 poems I liked the best or I thought best suited this contest. There was hard to make my decision. Though all of you had good piece of poetry. I felt I made the right desicion. If any of you felt that I made a wrong choice message me your poem link in a message and I'll reread it and then there for decide whether it deserves the points or trophies or not. Thanks so much for you amazing entries. I wish you all the best of luck with many more contests.
Beautifuldisasterxx
Contest Winners
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My mind is lost at sea No maps to navigateby xhowxtragikx 39 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 28 9:41 PM 2008. In Dark, Sad, Heartbreak, Breakups, Life, Love, Other
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When I was transparent and used to fall in love
I'd slip between cool sheets,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I loved you the day we met
I'll love you till I die• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
You were my first / you were also my last / everything that happened / happened so fast / You were someone to talk to / I wasnt thinking / because it felt like i knew you / felt like I had someone to miss m• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3717798, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [58]
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Time breaks hearts
for space in mindby luna-midnight 24 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 27 8:17 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My life has passed in such a way
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Waiting here
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I can still feel you breathing in that spot right next to me
I can still taste your kisses and imagine how things used to beby SilkOrchids 23 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 30 8:58 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
How am I ever Supposed to believe you care• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Morning blues seem blurred,
I could not feel the pain.by fumes 75 lines, on Dec 14 1:33 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
On this road laid with dry leaves little late the day came in sight• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The sudden death of a loved one can leave a hole,
So big it seems to take up our whole heart.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
my heart is through im over youby loving you too death 19 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 6 11:50 AM 2008. In hope, love, life, other, friendship, pain, sad, happy, lost love• Commented on by judge.
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Warmth like a summer sun Sliding across my skinby articwolf7496 31 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 4 7:44 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I don't want to touch him;
I don't want to feel him;by Sticks-And-Stones 22 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 8 4:10 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The symbol of your love, deepest red.
Forever etched in the rhythm of my heart.by Corvus Corone 20 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 7 7:10 AM 2008. In Contest, Dark, Freewrite, Dedication• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Wanted it to last
Only if I'd known...by Kia Tenshi 31 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 12 11:28 AM 2008. In pain, relationship, lost love, sad, dark, life, love, depression, contest• Viewed by judge. -
I still can't believe that its over That you left me here by myself• Viewed by judge.
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I'm falling into invisible arms and searching for warmth, in the cold.by -Twilight- 26 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 23 10:22 PM 2004. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It seems.......
although it was only a year agoby Uglyblackdog 31 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 7 11:53 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You left me all alone,
The wind raging by,by kira1115 37 lines, 28 comments, on Apr 13 3:58 PM 2008. In Personal, Pain, Sad, Dark, Life, Teenage thinking, Self, My own style, My lif• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Under these war torn skylights I dream
and cry in this severed silence that you left in my heartby Carefuldelusion 24 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 13 5:10 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Needing to reassure herself,
the naked woman reached beneath the blanket• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
my heart walked out the door
only loud enough to bleedby crazymysterygirl 21 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 25 11:24 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
'MB + RW
January 12 2007 - January 10 2008'• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
How much of gray am I
in the most significant role-• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My knees start to shake When your in sight• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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As I quickly fall asleep,
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as i sit here on the floor, waiting for a knock at the door,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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This is me you're talking to
The girl you once told you loved• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
What do you mean, he's gone?
I hear these words around me,by look for tomorrow 31 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 8 9:00 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Beautiful girl shed your tears, its not often that you have a real reason to cry, but this time he has broken your heart leaving you alone empty and falling apart. He has made his biggest mistake, he is nothing now, andby Faithinlove 11 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 16 3:40 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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~.~.~.~ Shake down,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"I don't want you"
"You don’t want me?"• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
What is it that I'm lacking?
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I’ll be sad to see you go But when the time comesby tLaL 36 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 15 11:44 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The smell of loss is the aroma of burning wood. It stays with you long after the fire is gone.by hansakalie 11 lines, on Apr 16 4:20 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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Tears stream down my face As I sit here lonely and in love• Viewed by judge.
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It's tonight when the moon is hanging low and the leaves catch the reflection in their veins.by OhNoChastity 38 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 16 5:01 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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How am i supposed to feel? when i know that you don't love me anymoreby SaviDropKick.Oi. 21 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 16 5:27 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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I never saw it coming the ending of you and me,• Viewed by judge.
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You was my lover..
You was my bestfriend...by mizerdrea 10 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 15 4:55 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I doubt I have a write fitting of your criteria so I will just say I can feel for you. I don't know the details, nor do they matter. Heartbreak is heartbreak and heartbreak is hell. I will guess the picture at the top might be you, and if it is, you are a beautiful girl and deserve one who can love and appreciate you, so don't get stuck on those who cannot.
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If you feel that my poem does not aline with the topic enough, don't worry about deleting it. In my mind, pain is pain, and I have been there, and gotten through it. But like I say, don't feel bad about removing it if you want to.
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No I will not delete, I just thought taht I would point that out.
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Reading the title I thought this was going to have something to do with the Rascal Flatts song 'What Hurts The Most'
Best of luck all who enter
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Good Heavens, yes I talk like that, I can't believe all the entries you had to read. Thanks for the contest - it filled a need we all share. I hope this helped in your mending. Thanks for your comments and the HM.
Congratulations everyone.
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Hey, congratulations to everyone who won something and thank you for the HM =)
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