I won gold in Rowan's contest
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2397475
so here is my pay it forward in return
word prompt: corporeal
RULES:
short pieces please
left align all pieces
no end-line rhyme
no word limit
but keep it neat
use poetic devices
this will close, when I've had enough of it............
Thanks
Gilly.x
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 4, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 250, Bronze: 100
- Final notes: thanks to all who entered this contest
what a hard time to judge.. pheww
some great scorching entries.. ..
Gilly.x
Contest Winners
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 4074611, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 4075085, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 4074371, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Entries [13]
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by Freestyle Bushido 17 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 30 4:41 PM 2008. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge.
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what am i, save,
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He uses the words so sharp and they all pierce in and pinch a lotby Purush 12 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 30 8:10 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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ahhhahhh look at that picture!!
seems like you get all of your pictures from my vault, lol. stealy.
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Burning House is confused. The word choice is "corporeal," but the photo would suggest the subject's choice of clothing is "incorporeal." More to the point, Burning House thinks the subject of the photo should make what "clothing" is shown more incorporeal than it already is. That's because Burning House is an incorporeal sort of house, going from wood to ash... Burning House is a camisole sort of house, a lingerie sort of house. The kind of house where "its not what you see on the outside that makes you want to look inside the House" kind of house. The kind of house that neighbors like to look into to see what's going on. Because when you're a burning house, you want everyone to share in the heat...
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hahahahhahahahha
I'm so glad your house is still aflame my dearest BH... I'm sure Miss Paris will like to know about your corporeal fascinations with lingerie and seering flesh pots -
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They can always try to put out the fires in Burning House, but they can never get rid of the heat.
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Are the poems going to be commented on?? Just curious. =)
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yes... at the end, when everyone gets a fair crack of the whip
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thanks gill
congratulations to all of the talented writers in the contest, as well as the cup holders.....and most honorables.
it seems to be like the honorable mentions are always the most ripe...the most full of potential.
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