I just wrote a poem, and it gave me this idea.
Instead of a human, I would like to be a teddy bear. read if you'd like, to sort of see what I mean, but please, do your own take on this idea!! http://allpoetry.com/poem/4067831
Basically, it's too much work and too tiring to be a human. Write a poem as though you are something else... NOT ALIVE (an inatimate object!!!) !!! from a pin cusion, to a chair, to whatever...a log, a mirror. BE CREATIVE WITH THIS.
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EX:
**what i'd like is for you to tell me why you no longer want to be a human
**what it is you are going to be from now on
**and...why it is better.
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Rules:
*common sense!
*MUST BE AT LEAST 10 LINES!! -->or DQ'd
**** MUST BE AN INATIMATE OBJECT!!!! (I've had to DQ more than i would've liked) :(
HM may be added, if i like what i see...
thanks and good luck
much *love*
Rianna
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 17, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: you guys...these were freakin' brilliant! everyone of you were truly creative and extremely unique. i know almost everyone says this, but it was hard to have to pick for this!! i had so much fun reading these entries. by far...my favorite contest so far! thank you everyone for taking the time to enter. good luck to you all in the future!
Rianna
congrats to the winners.
Contest Winners
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My subtle curve of test tube glass, A rich yellow face,• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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If I was given a chance
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Rich formidable textures slide through my translucent self,
They cast a shade of love upon the dusty shelves,by MissyMouse 23 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 10 2:00 PM 2008. In Contest, Other, Personal
Honorable mention
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Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [14]
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by vibes of heart 19 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 28 4:53 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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i've tried and failed
please forgive meby deadheartedkitty 38 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 28 3:59 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
My heart tells me to be humane Yet all other around me have forsworn this.by Mnemon 16 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 28 5:57 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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I want to be a voodoo doll
having so much pain in my life but yet don't feel it at allby guitarbowler6 16 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 1 9:01 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
by noiseandkisses 20 lines, 16 comments, on Apr 13 9:24 PM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I'd like to be a Robot
I really don't know why.by widesummer 19 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 28 5:56 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
A light above a head, of a great inventor,by Miss Chievous 13 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 29 12:15 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Can it be someone immortal? Like an angel?
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hmm...that's a good question. an angel isn't really alive, per say...so i guess you could slip through the cracks w/this one, but on the other hand, it's kinda not w/the rules. I will let you decide if you'd like to use it, at your own discretion.
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Oh you made my morning!! thanks so much for the Gold trophy!! and I promise I won't use it to wipe anything nasty!
laurie
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yourrrrrrrrrr welcome!! tah-daaaah! it was great~ funny, clever, creative, etc...
and hey!...they're your points/trophy...wipe it on a whales butt if you want!
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